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Chapter 35 - Riam, Part Two
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 35 - Riam, Part Two
Once again, the Messiahs prove to be as monstrous as anything else. The death of those that are young and had no chance at life is terrible. -
Chapter 34 - Ilya, Part Two
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 34 - Ilya, Part Two
Ilya was not to blame; but until she comes to that realization, nothing anyone says will matter. I wish she could have concentrated on the good she has done and those she has helped. Sad.... -
Chapter 33 - Paint
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Paint
Black can be very restful and peaceful. I just love the joy the children bring to each other and all of those around them. They have all had tragedy in their lives but haven't let it keep them down. I am still saying a space for the kids that need a place to stay and help with medical issues. -
Chapter 32 - Lahari, Part Three
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 32 - Lahari, Part Three
So happy that Lahari is back... Auntie Peg and Dottie and all the rest really are family. And family does what it has to. -
Chapter 31 - The Little Girl & the Little Girl
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 31 - The Little Girl & the Little Girl
Oh, what a idea, they just don't exist anymore. Have to think that would be a scary thing to contemplate, even if you did not like where you were, to not exist well.... -
Oh, what a sweet chapter. Although, Charlie did jump to some conclusions without proper evidence. A good suit will last years or decades if your body doesn't change to much, you pay for it, but it is truly worth the cost. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Well, let's hope that the JP, Stef, and company have more pull than Curtis Buck. Like @PrivateTim said, I don't the a European country would actually arrest someone on a warrant that was not federal in nature, but can't really remember if it was different back then or not. And agree that the the Crampton/Schluter lawyers would delay delay delay. Offense might be the best defense. Attack Curtis at his weakest point, what is Brad doing, did he get the company? Have to say that I love how Will and Travis interact. Will needs to just rip the band aid off and tell Travis how upset he is. They need to communicate what they are leaving unsaid. I do love how relaxed the Europeans are in general about nudity. They always have been more relaxed than we are; and we could definitely learn a lot from them. Remove the idea of shame about the nude human body. Can't wait to see what happens next...
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Chapter 30 - The Kids & the Queens, Part Two
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 30 - The Kids & the Queens, Part Two
I am still thinking of something to do with housing and caring for the children, especially those that are shift that have been abandoned or lost their parents. Plus maybe a nursing/medical area. Can Jzuna and Thech reach Lahari? Is there a shot that Pelipi is there? I am still upset that he was just lost in the shipwreck; and there was never any attempt to really try and find him. -
Chapter 29 - Riam, Part One
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 29 - Riam, Part One
Ugh, I may be ill. This trio needs to be destroyed now... -
Chapter 28 - Olona, Kosephaji, & Relliduna
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 28 - Olona, Kosephaji, & Relliduna
Kosephaji may have glimpsed his future. Duna is better than he was to start the day. Olona may have found an apprentice. But the evil that is the Gunge is getting closer. -
Chapter 27 - Clean-up Crew
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 27 - Clean-up Crew
Many "hands" make light work. I can truly see this coming together. Each used their own ability to help in their own way. -
Chapter 26 - Dozi, Ilya, Tchama, & Unadi
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 26 - Dozi, Ilya, Tchama, & Unadi
I so did not need this chapter... -
Chapter 25 - Dozi, Ilya, & Tchama
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 25 - Dozi, Ilya, & Tchama
So many questions, we need some answers. A man with more problems than one can imagine; but what is causing the problems? -
A truly wonderful chapter, Granger just always has the right touch. I am glad that he was able to allow the Catholic tenants to stay, but to have a dinner and then to arrange that the young boy that drew the picture to stay with him, well just perfect. Williams is going to be every bit the man his father is; and aren't we all lucky for that. Another black mark for Caroline, sending Williams away because she could not stand up to a child is ridiculous. Plus, not being able to carry on without being that obvious, really. Granger and Winkler are just perfect together. And isn't Granger generous, arranging a playmate for Cavendish. LOL. What a respite this chapter was, can't wait to see what is next.
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Chapter 23 - Red Raven's
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 23 - Red Raven's
I am really sad about Pelipi, just think it is horrible that he is gone like that. I think in some ways, this is the worse death in the series because it was just so totally senseless. -
Chapter 22 - Dozi
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 22 - Dozi
What the hell is wrong with Unadi? Has he never seen a biological shift that looked different before? What is going on.... -
Chapter 21 - Let's Have a Kiki
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You need more Queens in your life... -
Chapter 21 - Let's Have a Kiki
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Let's Have a Kiki
Let's hope that the Queens can pull this off. I think that Teshon City needs a place like this. They can have rooms for medical treatments and then individual rooms to fit those with special needs. It will be Wonderful... -
Chapter 20 - Sumi & Harakin
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Sumi & Harakin
A new person joins our merry little band. Muunith seems like a great addition. Hate that their parents turned on them like that; but at least that will not be an issue any longer. I guess we know what Auntie Peg and Dottie are going to be using the new building for, wonderful ladies both. -
Honestly, Greg must be purposefully obtuse. All the signs are there, yet he chooses to ignore them. Great interaction between everyone, really like how Greg handled the situation at Scott's house. And the comeback about the cougar was just about perfect. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Glad that Jubal realized that Lucas doesn't seem to be bothered by their morning erections. Some men are just relaxed about that, and they both seem to be. Hope they realize that both are at least marginally interested in each other already. Although I still wonder about Lucas and the Sheriff. Let's hope they have enough of the right supplies and can get started on the roof and other changes as soon as possible. Let's hope that Jubal can climb as well as he says and no issues arise and not injuries either. Amazing how a place can look different in the light of the morning, just gives everything a certain sheen. As always amazing descriptive writing, can't wait to see what happens next.
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Chapter 18 - Lonklam & the Other
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Lonklam & the Other
Riam is evil, and she found two other truly evil creations. They must all be destroyed before they destroy any others... -
Chapter 17 - Unadi & Olona, Part Two
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 17 - Unadi & Olona, Part Two
Sometimes going home isn't what you really need to do; looking back is rarely the answer. Move forward, to the future and what you are meant to be. -
Chapter 16 - The Kids & the Queens, Part One
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 16 - The Kids & the Queens, Part One
Can hope that Lahari is getting the best of care, you know that she is; and will be better soon. So glad to see Auntie Peg, Dottie, and Ninyani again. Not much a couple of Queens can't handle.
