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Well, we learned some of Novo's back story; and tragic it has been. I do think the books may be important moving forward, but important for whom? Teo is very interesting and much more than meets the eye; although what meets the eyes is interesting as well. Track is the little brother that Novo never knew he wanted. LOL
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Okay, recently had someone recommend this so giving it a shot. Story is strong; the flow was good, and already care about some of the characters. That said, has a feeling of a rehash to something I have read before or a striking similarity. Can't place the other story but will catch up and maybe it will come to me. Truly an interesting start to a story...
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Chapter 26 Be My Valentine
centexhairysub commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 26 Be My Valentine
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WTF, is Curtis Buck that big of an ass to try and kill his own son? No one knew Darius was heading back with him; so it could not have been aimed at him. Does Curtis Buck have enemies that would try and kill him; maybe whomever was responsible did not know it was Travis and thought it was his father... And Will handled the situation with Bellona and JJ perfectly; JJ was pissed, but Bellona was happy and that was really what he was aiming for. Plus, Patrick got a big way to go. Will is just so great with others, he handled the conversation with Karl Lagerfeld really well. Gave Patrick more props and got his ass pinched. LOL Shrooms would not have been my first choice to take and wander around MOMA, but they did not do any damage so, guess it worked out. I did love how Will just hopped on the dance platform. JJ decided to join and played to win; I think people, not Will, but others underestimate how much JJ likes winning. Darius as usual just danced to his own beat. And then after at the diner; Travis found a way to equal Will's bravery. Darius knows how much Travis means to Will, he will make sure he is okay in Los Angeles. Just an all around great chapter; and I can't wait for the supper at Escorial. Bravo, Mark, Bravo...
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Okay, color me very confused... Are we sure this was actually Shannon? I would have thought Trevor would have been able to smell a difference if she was a totally different person but maybe not. Plus, did anyone think the furball comment was off? I do not think that Shannon knows that Trevor is a lycan. Just really confused about this, a long lost twin from hell? Thought it was too funny that Brandon took them on a run that got them chased by some other wolves... LOL. And damn, that was was just way to horny for his own good. Great how open Trevor was to going to the gay part of Black's beach. And what do you know, Brandon knows some of the guys there. I am just so shocked... My experience in the surfing areas of California and other places is that how open you are when changing depends on how open the area is to it; and how comfortable you are in your own skin. And of course, the better hung you are the more you just want to show off. Great chapter, and can't wait to see what happens next.
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I am so glad that Travis did show up; and yes, Will got his answer. Not sure what all the implications are but the answer is there. I love how Will is with JJ; and I do think that Zanie cares for JJ, maybe not just for him, the money definitely means something but I think she does really like him. Great way to reconnect with Trevor; and loved how he bitched at JJ for not allowing the post orgasmic bliss. Will was so smart about getting Patrick to help them with their outfits. This will take some of the pressure off of JJ with Bellona, maybe help Patrick with Bellona, but how pissed will JJ be??? Will and Travis need to have an actual conversation that isn't interrupted by sex. They need to figure out where they are a little more than they have so far. Excellent chapter; can't wait to see what happens at the MOMA ball...
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Chapter 7-Epilogue and Author's Notes
centexhairysub commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 7-Epilogue and Author's Notes
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This was the perfect collaboration. Even if you have not read the stories by these two authors; you could easily enjoy the wit and wonder created herein. This is a series of chapters depicting take offs on old game shows. All but one will be readily obvious; and that one I had never heard of, but wish I had a chance to see. The writing and pacing were both just spot on with all of these chapters. I would advise that you not be eating or drinking when you read these stories; hard to clean up some things from a computer screen or keyboard. Enjoy....
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Brilliant, simply brilliant.... And the answers were truly spot on...
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I so want to be a fly on the wall for the conversation coming up with Shannon. Well, San Diego is very close to Mexico; not sure where her dig was but everyone needs a break. I love how Brandon gets Trevor even more out of himself than usual. I use to run around some with a guy that stripped and was really good at it. Guys that do it are usually either really cool or total asses. Can't wait to see what happens next...
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Engineer Benson - Chapter 5 - July 16 - 19, 1993
centexhairysub commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Engineer Benson - Chapter 5 - July 16 - 19, 1993
Well, they know it is world wide; and if they are smart, they know no one is really coming. They also both realize that Elizabeth is probably gone, I think on some level they had to at least suspect this already. Their attraction is partly the fact that they only have each other to rely on; but you can tell from conversations that there was probably always some small part of them that were attracted to each other. Mark has always known about Wayne and always cared for him and kept him as a friend. I am sure that if Elizabeth was still there nothing would have happened but she is and something has. Glad that they have as many panels up as they do. This will enable them to save more fuel and also stay quiet more easily. If they are only three days from finishing up the fence; I am not sure they should not do so before they leave. They obviously have enough supplies to wait a few more days. Not only will this prevent any nasty surprises from waiting on their return; but would make anyone else just getting in a little harder. They need to consider finding other survivors; but that is such a tricky decision to make. Who to trust; how much to reveal, will they outstrip their supplies by adding more, and how many more do you try to add? You can't save everyone and yourself. Now comes the hard part... -
I had forgotten what a riot Trevor was with Brandon around. The scene with the feline was delicious and oh so hot, you know he probably did not make it home before he had to relieve himself. Another great Alpha, Tom Hampton, and I can't wait for a few more of his stories... I hate that Trevor had to head out so quickly; would have liked a little more time with his core group. That said, you know that he will find something to stir the blood while interning out in California. Flowed beautifully, and the writing was just so good.
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What a truly Fabulous chapter... It is funny how as much as JJ and Will fight and bicker; they each would literally kill to protect the other one. Okay, maybe Will more than JJ, but JJ would truly make anyone that hurts Will suffer a fate maybe worse than actual death. JJ is right about Travis; wonder if he purposely did not answer Will's call or was he really busy? I love how JJ and Carullo fit together; and it isn't just physical. They have such an interesting connection. I wonder if Carullo could work as part of a throuple with JJ and Zanie? Leave it to Will to find the flaw that let's him have a porn show. LOL. I guarantee that the issue will be fixed a.s.a.p. A little worried about this contest. Will is likely to do something to piss JJ off just to kick him in the ass. And should JJ really be in a straight up contest with Bellona? Can't wait to see what happens next...
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Dante and Tani are so interconnected right now. I have to wonder how Tani really survived losing Dante so many times. Glad that Dante has taken some time to just spend getting to know and understand and integrate himself with Tani. I do have to wonder who was looking for Dante at this apartment. I have a feeling either the person or why he was searching for Dante is not something we are ready for. Love how even after so much time; this story just grabs you back immediately. Like slipping into an old robe that just has the perfect fit.
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Chapter 35 - Epilogue 5 - The Beginning
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 35 - Epilogue 5 - The Beginning
Glad to see the thirst for just revenge has been sated. The Messiahs need to be destroyed but not because of revenge but because they are evil. They need a clear mind and more help to get rid of them. Good luck with your endeavors. -
Okay, loved this but was it a take off on the Amazing Race? So glad that Tasha won and Caleb took out Dirk, Loved it...
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Let's hope that Trevor gets to spend some time with the guys on this break. I just love the core group so much. Sort of sad that Shannon was going to be gone; she and Trevor do seem to have more than just a physical connection. That said, she is right, being long distance at the start is such a no go. There are some freaky vibes with Jayson; and I just know he is way more bottom than he appears. Love how Trevor handled meeting both Deanna and Alex both. He is so open and honest and you can rarely go wrong with that as a guide. Trevor is very open to different encounters and that makes him very sexy. So glad we got to see Karissa Ryan, always nice to get visits from friends. And really loved how Trevor handled Axton. You can tell that Axton expected Trevor as a beta to take charge more; but instead, Trevor just encouraged him more. That is what a good leader does. Already in love with this story...
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So glad that I found this... I follow @WolfM so not sure why I was not notified a new story started. This first chapter was hot hot hot... And I so want that three way that was being discussed. Glad that Trevor is helping Jayson, he seems interesting if not fully fleshed out yet. Can't wait to see where you take this one.
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Chapter 33 - Epilogue 3 - Journey
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Epilogue 3 - Journey
Aunt Peg clearly does not want anyone to know she is a Messiah; so she uses weapons that a woman would use to deter a man or men. Why are people so stupid and full of hate or desire for something or someone they are not entitled to? Lahari had such a nice evening of food and listening to the music; then had to kill to protect her group because of drunken stupidity. -
What a delicious chapter; full of so many tidbits just waiting for us all. Of course, never enough for a full meal or really sate our hunger. I for one don't think that Gideon is aware he is being followed. I think he is too far into his plan to let anything distract him. He would know and sense other vampires; but why suspect they are after him if they are not doing anything to stop him. Kavan needs to stay with Gideon and make sure that he protects him from himself. We know who he is after and why; but why did he pick now to put this plan in motion. Gideon must complete his plan, one way or another. That said, someone that is truly your one and only is so rare that nothing is going to far to protect them no matter what.
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Extra 4 - The Empire's Three Days of Thanksgiving Part 2
centexhairysub commented on lilansui's story chapter in Extra 4 - The Empire's Three Days of Thanksgiving Part 2
Let's hope that Jihan is more successful than anyone imagines and they are able to succeed in their endeavors without any war. Wars can be good for business in some cases; but too many of the family could get pulled in. I love these little snippets and finding out what everyone is doing. Even these brief looks are manna from above. Rashan will have to leave to be trained; I don't think Jihan would survive his first real injury. Hope we continue to get updates. -
Chapter 32 - Epilogue 2 - Breakfast
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 32 - Epilogue 2 - Breakfast
Let's hope that Dozi is wrong and there is another explanation. I understand the need for revenge but going off half cocked is never a good idea. We need a little more information to figure this one out. -
Chapter 31 - Epilogue 1 - Plotting
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Epilogue 1 - Plotting
Let's hope they all listen to Dozi; I understand wanting the Messiah's that did this to die; but like Agrell there could be innocents still there. With the underground destroyed; those above are going to have to start getting use to things that they never considered. This is not going to be a quick or easy task. -
This is a story of survival; not of the fittest, brightest, strongest, or luckiest; but of an ordinary person that faced a horrible situation. Well written and the characters are just so well done. You will most likely find yourself identifying with someone in the story. This is the type of story that stays with you and makes you think; there but the for the grace of some deity go I. Read IT>>>
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Extra 4 - The Empire's Three Days of Thanksgiving Part 1
centexhairysub commented on lilansui's story chapter in Extra 4 - The Empire's Three Days of Thanksgiving Part 1
What a truly divine chapter. So glad we got to visit old friends and see how they are doing. Everything is not perfect but they all seem to be getting on with their lives. I do worry about Neith, but Ha seems sure that she will eventually be back to where she should be. Both she and Ha will mourn those they love when they pass on; but loving them now brings a joy that will not be soon forgotten. Jihan and Kastan are like any couple; they both know how to hit the other's spot. They will grow in love for each other all the days. So glad that all the young Imperial Princes are getting to bond in this manner; it bodes well for the future. Thank you so much, @lilansui, what a true gift.
