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There can't be more than one???? He was never very discriminating...
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Sort of leaning toward Lark/Scott, seem to remember him going with sleeping with someone that could have well been Travis' mother.
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Let's hope that Brad is right and Curtis Buck is just skimping on plane maintenance; but I sort of doubt it, this is a CAP story after all. I love how Will and Marie have so much of both of their parents and grandparents in them; they just truly understand how to handle any situation. I do hope that Claire and Jack find a way back together; after Claire has made him suffer some. Glad that Marie is so prepared for how her relationship with Austin will end. Will and Travis are just good together on so many levels; not saying they are forever at this point but... Love the pizza analogy, I can totally see the conversation with JP, Stef, and Brad. Wonder why Travis has his trust situation so different? What did his Grandfather know that Travis isn't aware of? Excellent chapter...
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So we have reached Methuwan, and it would appear at least for the moment that they are undetected but Jamie is right; from this point on it isn't just the power of detection by the mages but the machines designed by the Ancients. So we met another clan of seven, the Chuwa, and Moket was able to help them with the images to enter Methuwan in safety. Plus, this clan has had the birth of a seer. So the group is right; and the magic is spreading with each new generation. I believe that Snave is right and that Thorvil will do what he can for them when the time is right; he may have had a vision that too much interference or assisting too early might cause issues that this group cannot see. I think that the fact this group has made friends of so many from different groups and cultures from their own is almost as important as the mission they now find themselves on. They are showing that not all human mages are evil and destructive. This is a powerful lesson for others to learn.
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Jamie and Garvin returned and fulfilled their promise tot he Prince and he is no longer small. What this group is learning with some help from Flitch will totally change how magic is understood and used on this world. Really at this point no matter what the outcome, everything will be different. I truly worry that others will try and force one or other member of this group to divulge what they have learned; some of this information should never be known outside this group, or at least not at the present time. Amazed how how much information was relayed in this chapter; it truly feels like the pause before the dawn. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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So Urvan is no more; and Jamie proved that in the end he could do what must be done. However, he got a sense that Urvan was truly lonely; Urvan wanted love and not finding it perhaps twisted him into what he became, but he never gave up wanting that love. Just seems sad. They have more information about what is going on; but I don't think they realize the true horror. From the heavens, Lodda will be able to use the lightning strike to kill and destroy all that oppose him. This is a horror to great to allow. They must find a way to stop this. I am glad that Seeri and Rier and even Lautan were able to do their part but then go back to their lives; changed and aware, but knowing the truth. WOW, just really powerful.
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Jamie is too kind-hearted. He should have killed Urvan and taken what he needed when he had the chance. Urvan will never be stronger than Jamie; but there may be one or more that is. And because Jamie let Urvan slip away they will be better prepared to face Jamie and his group. Of course, they don't know how many or who is in the group but still. I am glad that Seeri was able to learn the magic from Jamie and the others and got to meet Flitch. I am also glad that she was able to teach Jamie and them some magic as well. I think the sharing is greatly beneficial to all. Urvan may well believe that Lautan has perished and now that Jamie has removed the control that Porvus had over him, he can leave and the dark mages will be diminished at this location. Lautan was obviously the strongest one there and if they are also able to free Rier and perhaps others; they will have struck a blow. Cotrin may have well been a depository of the Ancients that survived and one of the dark mage leaders found it and is trying to exploit it. Methuwan may be the main base but Cotrin may be the more important target.
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So Seeri Deeping has joined our group and she seeks her betrothed back and his mind clear. She will have a reason to fight and fight hard. Our group is finding their way and their new addition may be able to answer questions about what it is coming. Let's hope this gives them an advantage and a way to help them prepare for the coming battle. Sir Dorf seems to know more about the Council of Mages than any of the group would have suspected; perhaps he has been in their service in the past. And we find out that Master Thorvil heads a group that this group would fit in with quite well. Glad that Seeri and Jamie knew places and people in common, it allowed them to know that what the other said had some truth to it. A woman added to the group; is she going to have cooties???? I don't know about this...
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LOL, well I may talk big; but anything less than a four star resort isn't for me and I prefer a five star one. I like to read about adventures, but I like my creature comforts...
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They seem to be in a safe place at the moment. Of course, that could change in the blink of an eye. They were able to reach Crescent because Gorge had been there before and Jamie was able to translocate them by acquiring this knowledge from him; a new trick for all of them. Kundun gave Jamie much to think on before they started their trip back. The idea of why after coming to this world; that powers were acquired is one that if answered would be a big leap forward. The merit of such information is obvious. It might lead to a way to remove that ability from someone that was using it for evil. A new place to explore; Gorge has been there, so he will have some idea of a possible direction to start. But they need to be wary, as the get ever closer to their end; the more they will be hunted. Let's hope a for a little adventure; and maybe a little practice with their new abilities, but pray they are kept safe and ready to all resume their journey.
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Glad that Jamie was able to get back and explain the situation; equally glad that he was able to share his new knowledge with Kundun and make sure that it was not lost if something tragic happened. I am equally sure that Kundun will share the knowledge with Lestho and Pallin. A little surprised that they did not at least attempt to deal with the problem of the Prince, realize it is not the main deal any longer but still. I am a little worried about Thorvil, with everything going on right now, any delay would be worrisome to me. Flitch is just a delight. I wonder if anyone that knows of him that enters the nether would be able to call him? Raimey is worried for Jamie, ,Garvin, and the others; thought that was sweet. Glad that he took the chance to go to them. Would think the books that Kundun has would be a great thing to share with those around him. The more that understand the past the better it is for all. Not shocked that at one time all the people of the planet were friends; war, destruction, and death has a way of tearing things asunder.
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Thank God, I have wondered once or twice why since they can translocate; why have they not returned to a more friendly place. They can always translocate back to the spot they left from and not lose any of the travel they have made so far. So glad that Jamie was able to provide Gorge with not only a piece of the knack but some defensive ability as well. Flitch is right, Jamie must make sure what he has learned is shared with others not on this journey. Some of what this group has learned is outstanding and will change the direction of Magic for all. So, Porvus is placing a charm or something on the mages that come in contact with him so he can control them to some or total extent. They need to try and find out what the charm is or how to recognize it, could it be the one they took from Skoda? If not a charm perhaps an enchantment that leaves some type of mark? Wanda the Witch might be a help with this. Can Thorvil be contacted; would it not be great for Snave to actually communicate with his brother after so long? Is it possible that Jamie could look at the Prince and tell what Urvan has done and undo it now? Rolf and Gart just made the best decisions of their life. Let us hope they live long happy lives uncomplicated by their exposure to the evil they witnessed.
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Totally love this chapter, I really like how much Sam has been able to change Julius. That said, I agree with Julius, hire someone to finish the cabin...
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I so love anytime that Will and Marie get together. I really do think they are the clear leaders of their generations; they are so matched intellectually. And they have such a great repour. I understand were Marie is coming with; especially with her mother, but I think Claire would be horrified if she thought Marie was not following her dream to go to Harvard just to stay near her. Plus, I think Claire is tougher than they think she is, she just needs to get her bearings back. Jack is actually the one that I think will eventually fall totally apart over the divorce, if there is one. Will and Travis just make sense on so many levels. I don't know that Will is ever going to be ready to commit to an totally monogamous relationship, but I think at some point that Travis will want one. They are not ready for that at this point period nor until they are out of college and in the same place, but if they can't make it work, that will be the stressor. Damn, I so wish I ever had Will's sex life...
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A battle to remember and tell tales about for sure. Once again, the group worked as one. Jamie is clearly the strongest currently and the focus but the help that all provided was needed. Jamie simply removed the knack from Skoda; did anyone know this was even possible? Their work in finding an answer to how to stop the blue light weapon has lead them again to a new level of understanding and ability. The trip itself is giving them time to grow in ability and wisdom. Damn, if Skoda was simply a shadow of his brother, Lodda, a long trip may be called for. Has no one considered trying to contact Thorvil or bring him to them? Has no one thought to contact the council that was spoken of that has in the past adjudicated issues with mages? Great update....
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Thrilled by the update... George wants and I think even needs Daventry and Cavendish around at the moment. I think he cares deeply for Cavendish, perhaps not as a true love but as someone he has such history with; while Daventry is perhaps his intellectual brother in arms. Cavendish provides this feeling of continuity and Daventry is stimulating in ways that have nothing to do with a physical relationship. Cavendish made a good point about the Guild and Caroline being the one that had primarily dealt with them. I think Granger is right and he will have to take more of an interest with the help of this parents in ensuring that they keep the peace. Could Granger and Daventry both being getting a raise in peerage? I know what they have done is extraordinary and the fact that Granger is so much wealthier is important but WOW, let's hope they both do. We have never really got to see the Duchess in action, but George is right, I think his mother would still be a formidable ally going forward. After all, she guided and helped her fathers career and has helped push George's father ever higher. The meeting with the cabinet was just amazing... I can't believe that St. Vincent is acting the way he is; has he lost his marbles? Addington accomplished a few things, but has always been viewed as a caretaker Prime Minister, and would be out by the end of 1803 or early 1804, I believe. Sir St. John showed himself to be an idiot and either way to trusting to hold the position he does or just naïve. Hobart may have truly been the only one to understand that the invasion of India that Tsar Paul and Bonaparte planned would have most likely succeeded and would have been truly disastrously for the British. It might have been questionable whether the Russians and the French could have held onto India, but initially they would have probably proved to be successful. Thought that both Granger and Daventry handled themselves splendidly in their interview with the cabinet. Can't wait to see what happens next; let's hope a new investiture will take place soon. Bravo Mark, truly Bravo...
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Well, every group should have a court jester....
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Really like how Jamie doesn't try to have all the answers; he explains the issues and then solicits information and guesses from the others so they can work to discover the best way to handle the problems as they appear. This is truly the sign of a leader that understands that he doesn't know everything, and no one does. Gorge is a delight. He may not currently have magic; but the artifact that he has has given him the ability to enter areas that they can transverse without being seen, help them transport themselves, and maybe most importantly sense other mages in the area. Plus, have to wonder if the exposure to the artifact and the mages he now travels with, will perhaps have effects upon himself. They move forward, ever closer to the destiny they all share. They continue to grow stronger by combining their knowledge and abilities to prepare for the encounter with the dark mages.
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Gorge of the Pertwee has now joined the group of adventurers and it would not surprise me to learn he decides to stay with them past just moving them forward some. Once again, this group has shown through their actions that they are clearly different from the mages that those in this area are used to dealing with. They try to and keep the peace and honor those that they encounter. Jamie and Snave are right; there is not rush to reach the dark mages. Taking time to learn more and prepare themselves for the coming battle is the smart thing to do. Each member of this group has some gift or ability that allows them to strengthen the group as a whole. Excellent writing and the pacing on this chapter was great.
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Oy to the Vey darlings, Oy to the Vey....
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Jamie has had to kill; and thankfully, it was very hard for him. I do realize that Dorf is right and Jamie must learn how to handle this, just makes me sad. Artagon and the two with him paid for their senseless killing of the other Lachess. Artagon's spewing of idiocy and the knowledge that he was allied with Porvus and Urvan, along with the senseless killings showed why they had to be killed. So we have another traveler that has joined our group, Bastyin is a new mage of the Lachess. A group that Irik is familiar with but one that never had a mage, let us hope that Bastyin is just the first of many and he is able to return to them and teach them. Bastyin learning on his own learned enough to protect himself but not those originally travelling with him. He has honored their deaths but now must honor their memories by learning what he can and helping his people in the future. This group of adventurers is growing in number and ability. Let's hope by the time they reach their destination, they are prepared for what is to come.
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It seems that each time they enter the nether and encounter Flitch, they learn or create something miraculous. Being able to learn how to perform a new spell in the manner they can now; is a total game changer. They can learn new magic not only from each other but any magic user they encounter. This would of course include the dark mages. Not sure it would be a good thing to learn their magic; doing so might cause a negative reaction within themselves but if they knew the spell being used against them, perhaps they could counter it before it was a problem. I think they may need to understand the past at least somewhat; I am not sure that those they face have not taped into something from the Ancients that is allowing them to move forward now when they could not in the past. If you don't understand the past; you can not learn from the mistakes of the past and try to be better now and in the future. Something dead lies ahead; how will it effect our band of adventurers.
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Yea, I caught up... I hope that Jamie has more than an inkling of a plan. The power age and skill represented by those they are going against is going to be substantial. Jamie seems to have an intuitive understanding of magic and how it works; he is clearly a savant. Excellent chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
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So we now know the main players on the other side; I do with Thorvil was with them now. I guess we can assume that truly none of the Ancients survive at this point? So the dark mages are together; and our little group is getting closer with every chapter. We can hope that they believe the strike was enough to kill them and will not be looking; but since they survived the first time, have to believe they will try and check to see if there is any sign of them dead.
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The smell of ozone was the burnt out fuses. Replacing them and all the lights going to green may help not just them but others that use this system. Curiosity may have killed the cat; but it helped this group greatly. There be dragons...
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