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Chapter 26 - Ronging, Part Four
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 26 - Ronging, Part Four
And what has wrought this devastation? Is there a new player on the scene? -
Chapter 25 - Accepted
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 25 - Accepted
I know that the Messiahs must be stopped; but this group does not seem to acknowledge that some Messiahs can change and grow; look at Auntie Peg. If you simply kill them all without mercy; are you any better than they are? -
Chapter 24 - Tchama & Olona
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 24 - Tchama & Olona
Tchama needs to understand she is oh so different from the Messiahs. Yes, she accepted the photnova gland from Ninyani, but she did not kill anyone for it; it was to save her life. Tchama needs to open up, she just needs to find out who she feels most comfortable with. Was hoping that Olona would recommend replacing her arm, but perhaps she cannot for some reason. Excellent chapter. -
Chapter 23 - The Blood Corruption Clinic
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 23 - The Blood Corruption Clinic
Auntie Peg is as kind as we suspected. She serves others and tries to help where she can. Ninyani is learning from the best. Dottie is worried about Tchama because of what happened earlier, but I truly believe she went to Olona's to see what she could understand about herself. -
What a great chapter, well at least parts of it. I am so glad that they found MaryAnne and Hope before it was too late. Hate they she lost her son and daughter in law, and I agree with Mark that MaryAnne is not ready to know about her son and his wife. And luck that they actually picked up formula. @Daddydavek is right; even a few small normalcies would mean so much to all the survivors. So Wayne and Mark did the nasty so loud that they woke the dead so to speak... Love that Garret is getting to tease them about this. But they do need that cabin so they can have a little more privacy. Plus, would be better to make sure the women and children are in the main house as added protection at least for a while. Great chapter.
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Chapter 22 - Tchama
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 22 - Tchama
Tchama is going to see Olona. Let's hope she can help her to understand her powers and how strong she really is. And another arm, even if not as strong would be nice as well. Her saving the child was serendipitous, maybe it will help some that still have issues with those that are different. I still miss Agrell. This chapter made me think about her a lot. So good to see that so many came together to help build and repair the area near Gate Town. All of them working together even though they are different. -
Chapter 21 - The Gathering
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 21 - The Gathering
Olona is so interested in everything and wanting to figure out everything. Xin sounds better and worse about the shifts and Messiahs and all of that. They obviously know about them, as they can trap the monsters as they call them; but they don't seem as hostile or interested in them. This group makes me happy... I wonder if Olona could give Tchama another arm? Would it be only so so in strength though? -
Chapter 20 - Found Family
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Found Family
Okay, is Olona going to meet with bio-shifts that are attacking the Messiahs or with Dozi, Auntie Peg, etc...? They don't have to be in each others pockets but since they live together; they need to at least tolerate the others friends to keep the peace. -
Chapter 19 - Lahari, S’Kay, Gawa, & Ijeron
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 19 - Lahari, S’Kay, Gawa, & Ijeron
Ah, so the group has already added to their number. Have they lost anyone except Eroli? We do not know what Tuala is doing, why add another at this time? -
Chapter 18 - Confrontation
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 18 - Confrontation
Great chapter; we are getting more in this group that are coming to know and understand each other. They all oppose the current Messiah leadership and what they are doing. Let us all hope they continue to get to really know each other and learn to work together to make the city they now live in better for their being there. -
What a wonderful addition to the Running With The Pack saga. A total homerun from start to finish. We get a deep dive on Trevor, who was the second of Aiden's friends, but the one away at college that we did not get as much info on in the first couple of stories. We get to know him and walk with him on a new area of discovery as he spends a summer helping out the pack in California that Aiden and Ethan came into with Dorian's "death". Don't want to give anything away. Just sit back and let @WolfM take you on a great adventure...
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Ha, in chapter five, I actually suggested the twin from hell. Guess I was right but guess they both are from hell. I never understood when twins did things like that. Don't know what is more annoying, that Shannon thought it was all funny or the fact that she actually tried to pin the pregnancy on Trevor. What a total bitch. Loved how Trevor yelled across the quad and let it all just come out, damn the consequences. Plus, got him a number for a hottie. I can't see Trevor giving up women, at least not yet. Great to see how Trevor handled the situation with Jayson and Jayson proved he was really a great friend. Don't know if anything would every happen with him; but I am not sure it should, Jayson is the kind of guy that could get hurt easily I am afraid. Trevor's conversation with his wolf was just so well written. This gave such a great viewpoint that we had only sort of glimpsed a few times. Trevor seems so integrated with his wolf, maybe more than some others. The last conversation with the two guys was just sweet. Trevor truly is a good guy. Maybe going out with this group with Jayson would help Jayson and Trevor both. Bravo, just so well done.
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Lovely story and well written. The pacing was good throughout. It was a unique spin on the vampire story. Both of the characters had flaws but they were more than entertaining. I believe that the author's first language is not English and this would explain some of the wording and phrase issues but none of them prevented the story from moving forward or lessened the overall enjoyment of the story. I did feel that the short chapters hurt the flow of the story a few times as there seemed to be abrupt endings to chapters. All of that said, I can be a total bitch so just ignore part of this review and know that it's a good story and a good read. Take a chance and spend a little time getting to know Caden and Ludwig.
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What a delight; I am honestly shocked that they have seemingly pulled it off. Caden came back to Ludwig. Together they built their happily ever after place; but at some point the issue of Ludwig living forever while Caden ages will have to be addressed by them. Brava....
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Chapter 16 - Home
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 16 - Home
Well, Sumi and Harakin are at least initially meshing well with our group. They are perhaps getting a little information overload. I do find it strange that different parts of this world seem to have no contact or knowledge of other areas; I guess perhaps the lack of transportation inhibits it some what but did the destruction in the distant past seemingly severe what was already known? Sumi and Harakin are going to have to work to realize that their lives are their own now... And if they wish, they too can be as fabulous at Auntie Peg, Doreen, and Ninyani... -
Engineer Benson - Chapter 9 July 23 - 24, 1993
centexhairysub commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Engineer Benson - Chapter 9 July 23 - 24, 1993
They have already learned perhaps the most important rule; that the more in the group the better chance for survival as long as you can trust the ones in your group. I guess we never get over our issues do we? Even with a zombie outbreak and everything going on; Mark is still worried about what others will say about his relationship with Wayne. Wayne was hurt by his reaction; but importantly they talked through it and then Erin had the perfect reaction the next morning. Garrett is very observant and skilled; his importance with the group will only grow the longer they are together. Mister Buck is important too; his knowledge is going to help them strengthen the fencing but also prepare the farm to possible take in more survivors. Erin and Lisa also have not only skill but the right attitude to help out as well. We can hope the smoke that Lisa saw is someone else that has survived. We can also hope they are good people too. -
Love how open everyone in this family is to therapy. Therapy isn't for everyone but for many it helps them in ways you cannot imagine. Will just cannot turn off that snarky charm of his even with his therapist; so funny. I wonder what JP is sending to Will? Can't see making a deal about Marie taking Will is mail, just seems out of place. Looks like the group from Escorial is starting this trip ready to get Hawaii and some relaxation. Travis took the first step to opening up more; he had to feel that Sierra and Crawford could be trusted and would be open to the news. Loved Will teasing Sierra, still not over what Curtis Buck did to her. At some point, that is going to be an issue that will have to be resolved. Vacations all around...
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Chapter 15 - Tisa
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Tisa
Hope that Tisa does not join this group, they seem to have no self control and no aim other than just random destruction and death. While opposing the Messiah is a worthy aim; their way is not the way forward. -
Chapter 14 - Ronging, Part Four
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Ronging, Part Four
So even the long captivity did not cause a new craving to come forth. Wonder what will happen when it is discovered that he is gone... -
WOW, talk about a fast turnaround. I don't even know what to say. Caden cannot just stay on the island; and Ludwig refuses to even consider leaving. Talk about a no win scenario. Caden needs to realize that he can't just turn the island into a resort; someone would eventually realize the secret therein and then what? Sort of just feel sad...
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Chapter 13 - Tisa & Olona, Part Two
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Tisa & Olona, Part Two
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Really loved this chapter, it flowed just beautifully. I truly enjoy every minute of Trevor, Skylar, and Randy. Then you throw in the rest of the gang and it is just almost too much. The encounter with the guide on page was hot, even if the action was off page; and then you just know the next day with the added group that it was epic... So glad that Seth got a new ride, and this group is still looking out for him. Truly hope that all of those that hurt him are punished.. Can't wait to see what happens next...
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Northern Exposer/Granger Fans
centexhairysub replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Have a wonderful time, everyone needs time to rejuvenate and get some me time. Hope the trip is all you could hope for and you and your traveling companions have a great time... -
Well, ain't that timing for you... Ludwig finally succumbs to Caden and they have unbelievable sex; and then a possible rescue plane appears... And you just know that neither of them have even thought about what to do if a rescue was to happen. How can Caden get Ludwig off the island if the rescue is anytime other than dark. How can he explain where Ludwig came from, etc... Things just got truly complicated...
