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Chapter 13 - Lahari, Part One
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Lahari, Part One
Agrell was able to find Lahari quickly, that was good; but finding out that the passage further in is blocked is not. Will Lahari be trapped in that small area? What caused the explosion? -
A wonderful chapter full of a number of twist and turns. I do think that both George and Cavendish have gotten to the basis of Caroline's behavior. I do not know what can be done about it. She will never be treated in the manner she wants; and if she pushes to much, could find herself on the outs with polite society, which effects not only her; but her husband and children as well. She and George need to have a long talk. I am glad that Granger and Cavendish truly do understand each other; in some ways, they are the truest of friends. I swear Freddie and Davina will never learn; maybe a nice carriage accident could be arranged? Can't wait to see what happens next @Mark Arbour
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Chapter 12 - Mystic
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 12 - Mystic
The situation with the mystic just got way more complicated. Did his daughter become a bio-shift because of his actions or was she just gifted that way? I am not sure that Dozi is wrong, can you trust them, but they obviously care for their child. Agrell has agreed to help them, what will she find? Ilya is still very injured and in great pain, but she seems to have a grasp on the situation that Dozi lacks. Was the explosion an accident, or did someone try to gain access to something that should have been better off left alone? -
Chapter 1 - July 9-11, 1993
centexhairysub commented on Wayne Gray's story chapter in Chapter 1 - July 9-11, 1993
Let's hope Benson and Mark are able to stay together and watch each other's backs. Any zombie outbreak requires at least two people to survive it. And you just know that the idiot military did something to cause this.... Damn people wanting to play God.- 29 comments
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Well, I don't see any rainbows and lollypops in any of these people's futures. Interesting start, writing is good and flows well. Totally agree with, @kbois The Stand by Stephen King is the manual for how it should be done.
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Chapter 11 - Home
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Home
Dozi is too trusting, Agrell is too naïve, and Ilya is Ilya. We can hope that whatever blew up was something that struck back at the aggressors; but I sort of doubt it. -
Chapter 10 - Agrell, Dozi, & Ilya
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Agrell, Dozi, & Ilya
It seems to me that the shifts need to start fighting back a little earlier. They need to take the fight to the ones being the most aggressive. -
Chapter 9 - Ilya, Part Three
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 9 - Ilya, Part Three
Well, someone knows how to make an entrance. Ilya was almost the victim of idiots; but seem to be a lot of them around this world. -
Chapter 8 - Dozi & Agrell
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Dozi & Agrell
So two of the three have come together, when will the third find them? Can these two find common ground? Will they find that they have other things in common and band together? -
Chapter 7 - Agrell, Part Three
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Agrell, Part Three
Agrell has no idea of the world she is about to enter. She has been sheltered and deprived of real information her whole life. Welcome to the new world, Baby... -
Chapter 6 - Ilya, Part Two
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Ilya, Part Two
Ilya must find a way to accept what she has had to do and find the strength to reach out to others and try and keep a connection going. -
Chapter 5 - Dozi, Part Two
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Dozi, Part Two
This lucky occurrence may have given Dozi the key to thriving. The question will be does she understand how to move forward? -
Chapter 4 - Agrell, Part Two
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Agrell, Part Two
Agrell consumed the unconsumable and has been altered. She must learn to accept what happened in the past and try and move on from it. -
Chapter 3 - Ilya, Part One
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Ilya, Part One
Okay, starting to look for a warm bath and a razor blade. -
Chapter 2 - Dozi, Part One
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Dozi, Part One
Why don't the shifts just leave? If they can shift to another place, why not go somewhere they are not being hunted? -
Chapter 1 - Agrell, Part One
centexhairysub commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Agrell, Part One
WOW, what a horrible first chapter. The evil that man does unto man. Not sure were this is going; and honestly, not sure I can follow all of this but have to say first chapter was well written and flowed well. -
Chapter 1 Darts of Destiny
centexhairysub commented on kbois's story chapter in Chapter 1 Darts of Destiny
This was totally BRILLIANT... I laughed till I damn near peed myself, that is what happens when you get old. I am so glad that we got a glimpse of Terry; but he deserved better than anything with Gary Busey. Kage always was smarter than he gave himself credit for, that said, I do think he should haunt Cassiel some just for the hell of it. I am glad that he is going to be able to continue to help guide Elijah, and I guess that Elijah will be the recipient of Kage's good fortune? This was just too funny and was so well done.- 131 comments
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What a great ending to the story; and nothing wrong with it taking six years. Waiting to be sure can be the surest sign of love. Glad to see that the whole group was able to come together and find a way to happiness.
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Fabulous... I think that Zach has something on Travis, not sure what it is but I don't think that Travis would blow off Will unless there was pressure brought to bear. I have a feeling that Will is going to figure out what is what. Love how Will and Darius and JJ are when they are all together. If they could ever stay on an even keel; they would be stronger than they are now. I just am not ate up with Zanie, she just feels a little off. The thought of Will getting with Carullo sure put the fire into JJ; I know they are totally opposite, but I liked JJ and Carullo. Patrick and Will are so good sexually; but they would never work as a couple; but having a hot three with Patrick's friend Kenji certainly sounds hot. A blow by blow would do wonders for my visualization of the encounter. What a delightful present for us all, @Mark Arbour. Hope you are having a wonderful holiday season.
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WOW, so hot and sensuous; but do hope they were both really ready for what this means going forward.
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That was sweet and sexy; but way to funny...
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Borscht is the Russian version of chicken soup; it can fix anything... LOL Glad that Alex stood up to his mother and glad that she realizes that they need family counseling; but she needs to realize that for Alex family includes Ed. I hope that Karl is able to help that that Ed doesn't use Alex's mothers attack on him to move away from Alex. I think they may be what each other really needs.
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Damn, let's hope that Ed is right and he will survive; Mama Lioness may prove to have claws that even her son doesn't suspect. Did love the Daddy though....
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Chapter 17- Date Night
centexhairysub commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 17- Date Night
Sorry, older here but not quite senior but grey hair and if they offer senior I take it; all about saving the buck. I never understood the attraction of doing that in a theatre, I know several that have but still; dirty floor, issues if caught, no place to clean up, and just so not sexy. But Ed will do damn near anything to make Alex happy, so I guess it was okay. They need to have a discussion about money; and fast. -
Chapter 16- Rooftop Kisses
centexhairysub commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 16- Rooftop Kisses
Here is hoping that Alex really listened to what Ed was saying; but also that Ed realize that Alex is truly serious about wanting a relationship with him. Hate that Alex feels to isolated from everyone else; and it is crappy when no one remembers your birthday or a special day that means something to you. Alex's father is going to have a special place in hell just for him.
