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    Chapter 59

    Really, I came back from Thanksgiving weekend for this??? Okay, I want to hunt Zach down and really hurt him; Will can stand up for himself, and I am sure that Travis can to some extent, but not physically. I did just for a moment wonder if Travis and his father got in a physical altercation, but really can't see that happening. I want to see how Will handles his feelings and actions as he comes to grip with what happened. Love how Will and Stef interact and really thought that Miranda Buck was more interesting than I remember.
  2. Starting to wonder if Alex has a death wish; or does he simply see through Ed's layers of armor better than most. Honestly, pets are great for someone that has issues like what it appears Ed has; although a young animal isn't always the best choice. Really like how this story is progressing; can't wait to see what happens next.
  3. I just really love this story; great update. So sad how many of the great old cinemas just deteriorated and were torn down. Two of the newer places built in Austin are very reminiscent of old time places. Love going to both of them. Some films just demand to be seen on a big screen. I am glad that Bill is has the right attitude; and the forethought to try and prepare himself for what might be coming. So many just refuse to do so and the day it happens just crushes them.
  4. I don't care how fu%&ed up Ed's life is; you just don't do that to a child or a teenager either one; you just don't.
  5. Kavan is going to have to learn to think and understand how others view his words before opening his mouth in this world; or he will not survive. I do love how much Kavan is able to annoy Gideon; but can't quite figure out why? I don't think being another shadow melder would be enough to do it; as I am sure that Gideon is beyond good at it already. Is Gideon attracted in some way to Kavan, there does appear to be some sexual tension there, but that doesn't always equal attraction. Caspian just got a whole lot more interesting, not that he was boring to begin with but... So he still has his family grimoire and his mother's jewels. How powerful is he truly? And what is his endgame with the spells? Did Konstantin tell Caspian that shadow melder; but is he aware that Kavan is also a shadow dancer? Did Caspian just sense Kavan's ability, and if so why could he not tell that he was also a shadow dancer? Wonderful chapter, but more more more and faster faster faster... LOL
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    Chapter 58

    Will the Love Guru; I hope they get t-shirts printed... This was funny and sad both. Will made Travis realize that sex and the steps leading up to it can be fun and there are a lot of options; you just have to be open to them and open with the other person. Sad because while Will has several people in his life that would do anything for him or to protect him; Travis seems to have no one, except maybe Will in his like that. Personally, I think Will should have filmed the scene in the special room; and left Brad a copy. This fashion show is starting to look like something that everyone will need to be on their toes for. Dinner with Stef and Miranda Buck will certainly be more than interesting. Wonderful chapter...
  7. So a little background on both of their situations; but honestly more questions than answer... A meeting is about to occur, will it be fortuitous or not; that we will see. Flowed really well.
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    Last Days

    Just a feeling of melancholy and what might have been, some of the old cinemas could have been saved if there had been money to update them and repair some of the issues. Cat will be back in the cinema; she might have to work at a more glossy, less atmospheric place, but she will be back in the business. So well written and this one flowed paticularly well.
  9. A really interesting start to this story; and we already have some idea of why Ed feels like he does. So many of those that have seen combat have come home with scars that do not show. They must find the courage to ask for help to deal with them; and the unfortunate rate of suicide by former members of the US armed forces is alarmingly high. Already want to see what happens next...
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    Change of Clans

    I so agree with @SnowBear, Elvira deserved a more intricate and painful death for her stupidity if nothing else. Kavan and Katherine are going to have to find an accommodation if Konstantin is going to thrive and grow; not only in his new position, but his relationship with both of them. Splitting his focus will hurt not just him but both of themselves. Doc is just the best sire... LOL... Nathan is in good hands. Ryland may be in for more of a bumpy ride. Gideon likes Kavan? I so did not see that coming. Excellent chapter, can't wait for the next update.
  11. This is a well written story and truly flows beautifully. It is multi layered and complex in many ways but really can be broken down into what we are willing to do for family; and who is considered family. The feelings generated by this story are truly all over the place; from extreme happiness to gut wrenching sorrow. But they all add to the story and how we view this wonderful characters. The characters are so well created and developed. Even the secondary characters are very well done; and you will soon find those special ones that you can't wait to see pop up from time to time. @kboisis truly a gifted writer and I am sure a delightful person; but that said she must learn to embrace the true knowledge that Cats are a superior species that are designed to be worshipped and admired by one and all....
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    Chapter 40

    You, @kbois, are an evil bitch, positively feline in nature... And I love it. What a perfect way to end this story in this remarkable saga. Cassiel is doing what he can; and I do hope the fey allowed the deployment of the dryads and pixies; what a delicious surprise for any forces that Huntington sends in. Sebastian truly is a good Alpha, he does truly care. Love how this time as allowed Elijah and Ashton as well as Tyler and Austin to bond more fully. They have had time to really get to know one another without the mating bond overwhelming everything else. And then that ending; a cure, and all that entails. Why was Caleb involved in that, did he have a background in something that would aid that progress? Truly a wonderful story, now get off your ass and stop resting on your laurels and start the next book in the saga.... And that was said with all the love and affection that is possible.
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    Chapter 57

    What a truly delightful chapter. The interplay between Will and Travis is one that only comes about with old friends; and yes, you can have old friends at that age. They have been in each other's lives for so long and there are just all of those little moments that only they share, we got a view of a couple of them. Are they destined to be together, who knows; at their age they should be enjoying life and figuring out where they want they want from it. I think it is very telling how the mention of Zach effects them both in much the same way. I think they both are helping each other understand where Travis is in Zach's life and where Will was in Zach's life. Hopefully, soon neither will be in it in any meaningful way. So glad that Kevin is doing better; and so appreciative of how well Travis handled everything, it could have been awkward. I always thought Cody and Kevin were good together. Glad that the new cocktail is working for Kevin, finding the right one can literally be a lifesaver. Glad that Travis did nor freak out about the conversation the four had at the end. Cody is right, finding someone that takes their time makes all the difference in the world when bottoming. Not everyone enjoys it; but until someone takes the time to show you how good it can be, you will never know for sure. Can't wait for the next update, just so well done @Mark Arbour.
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    Characters

    The small town that I grew up in had at it's height, before I was born, three walk in theatres and a drive in. By the early 70's when I first remember going to the theatre, the town was down to one walk in with two screens and a drive in. I thought both were a magical place when I was young; but by about 1977 the walk in theatre closed and for the next several years just seemed to disintegrate before everyone's eyes. The drive in survived until the mid 80's but only because on Friday and Saturday night after midnight they played really bad born on that big screen. You had to be 18 to buy a ticket; although if you knew how you could park in the field behind the drive in and see everything, just not get the sterling audio.. LOL. I have a feeling for those that worked in some of the nicer theatres that either just crumbled or were taken apart and reimagined as two or three screen cinemas; it was like watching a family member pass away. That slow deterioration, maybe a short reprieve, then the final death spiral. I hope that Cat is able to get on her feet and find herself, either with a bigger cinema or in a world of her own making. Cat is a truly interesting character, so well developed and sympathetic. Well done...
  15. This was a real treat. So loved the interplay between Gideon and Uncle Luc, was just perfect. Really enjoyed Gabriel's going from wanting to strangle the tyke to mama bear mode... Perfect little treat to enjoy with coffee.
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    Chapter 1

    Okay, this was delicious. So loved the interaction between Lucifer and Gideon. Gabriel needs to learn when he is outmatched on more than one front. Writing was first rate and the flow was spot on. We so need a follow up with these three; and would not mind a peek into Gideon trying to explain Uncle Luc to the parents...
  17. Interesting follow up. Writing was good as always, but have to say that I truly felt the pacing or flow of this was just off. More than doubled the length of the first one; but had half the story. Worth a look however, but read part one first.
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    Chapter 1

    Hmmm, interesting follow up. So they both like each other; but can see others, sort of going together, sort of not... This one seemed a little uneven. While the writing was good, really did not feel that this flowed especially well.
  19. Loved this view of the other side of coin; so to speak. Interesting how what we are taught influences our perception of reality.
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    Chapter 1

    This story just goes to prove that Cats rule in whatever arena they are in....
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    Chapter 39

    Rosalie proves just how remarkable she is; is it her age that gives her such tremendous insight? Elijah and Ashton along with Tyler and Austin seem to be getting closer each moment. The counseling seems to be helping and I am glad beyond words. I know it has to be hard on Ashton and Austin pulling their wolves back, but I think Sebastian is right and for the time being it has to be done. Glad to see that the shots and physical therapy is helping as well. Even small advances must be shared and rejoiced in. Puck needs to get his ass kicked. I am glad to see that Cassiel is willing to explain what lead up to this; but I guess he is also right that he should not take an active side in the dispute. Doesn't mean that he can't let Enya. Loved how Mama immediately went to when Tyler was 16 when she found out about Elijah; she must have already thought something was off from the start. LOL. Wonderful job, and congrats on making Promising Author status, WooHoo.. @kboisis moving on up....
  22. I have decided that I like Master Caspian; do I trust him, hell no, but I do like him. Kavan, Ryland, and Nathan are all getting an interesting introduction to a much wider world than any of them ever could have imagined. Konstantin and Doc can perhaps play this game flawlessly, but the rest are going to have to wing it. I hope whatever the attack on Konstantin was isn't too serious; was it a feint to go after someone else; or an actual attack meant to harm or kill him. Such an interesting time ahead for us all.
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    Chapter 56

    Wonderful chapter; and really poignant on so many levels. The writing and flow were just about perfect; and I really felt Will's pain when he was alone thinking about what had occurred. I am glad that Will turned to JP for advice on this issue. I always think that JP will give the best advice he can; especially when he knows it is truly important to the person asking. And have to say that I agree with his advice. Will will never go out of his way to punish Zach; but he will never go out of his way to cover his ass either. It will take him some time, but I suspect that he will realize that Zach simply is not nor will he ever be on Will's maturity level or emotional stability level. That said, perhaps Travis will be. There are so many ways that Travis and Will connect, but they both have some really big auxiliary issues to deal with; and really need to handle some of them and be on a more even keel before they make any decisions about where to go with any serious relationship together. They could easily be friends with benefits without much of an issue; but if they are destined for more, they both need to ready for what that means not just for them but others around them. I really liked how Will and Travis can just be with each other. I so cannot wait for this Sunday dinner at Escorial. Will is mad, Darius is annoyed, Marie and John will be pissed; but JP is going to rise up like any good 60's liberal and strike fear in the hearts of the idiots tracking the kids... I understand the issue with security; but no one should be using the data in the way that Brad, Claire, and Jack are... Bravo @Mark Arbour
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    Chapter 38

    How dare you impugn the sheer majesty of Cats... They are the closest thing to real Gods we have on this Earth...... .
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    Chapter 38

    I wish Elijah would contact Cassiel. I really think that Huntington has done enough that any protection that Cassiel's brother placed on him could be removed and Cassiel could help. And I think that @spyke could well be right and this is more about something on the laptop rather than just the hybrids. Huntington doesn't seem to be the kind of creature that cares about the existence of any other creature except himself. Tyler's family seems to be handling this better than I could have imagined; I really do think Mama's main objection were that Zev and Ben stripped naked before turning; that freaked her out as much or more than them turning into wolves; sort of but not really... LOL Also really glad that Austin and Ashton handled being away from their mates; even if for a short time so well. Hate that they were not able to recover all of the bodies; that really makes me sad but so goddamned mad as well.
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