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I did like the writing in this chapter; but I guess because it has truly never happened to me; this love at second meeting and the earth truly moved, never fully rings true for me. I have had the lust at first or second site but not the earth shattering encounter. Also, one day of sight seeing and the next time they meet, we are discussing being boyfriends and everything else?
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Vancouver is nice, but Honolulu is better
centexhairysub commented on Zenith's story chapter in Vancouver is nice, but Honolulu is better
I have to say that sometimes moving to a new location can make a real change in a persons life; good or bad often depends on why the move was made and the person making the move, however. This seems really positive for him; and I personally believe that any volunteer work comes back to you ten fold, so I am all in favor of his work with the homeless shelter. -
Interesting start to this story; unfortunately, way to many parents and family like this, even in this day and age. Good writing and pacing.
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Glad that Kyle understood that he is trying to change and was willing to try and help him grow some. Hope he keeps it up... Great job...
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Well, I guess you can't escape bullies no matter what the culture. Someone people are just that way, and they usually have nothing to feel superior about. Great job...
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Everything about this chapter was just spot on; the writing and pacing were both so good. I loved the meeting and how it was all handled.
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So happy that Victoria is taking this so well and they are all being grown-ups about all of this. Really like the dinner over at Alpha Goldie's, it gave another side to Kao that we had not seen.
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Confronting Victoria
centexhairysub commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in Confronting Victoria
WOW, Victoria is one hell of a woman. Her knowing about all of it might even benefit her and Alpha Goldie at some point. So glad that she will be able to stay friends with Dean and get to know Kao. -
Really well done; but a question. I have not seen anything in either of the previous two books to indicate an issue that the Were community has about same sex couples, is this particular to avian or the Asian influence?
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The battle scene was so well done; it just pulled you into it. Bane still cares about Skold at least on some level, although after this maybe not as much... Can't wait to see where you are going with all of this, keep up the good work.
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Dean sees more than most; not only with his eyes but all of him. That is rare in any man. Kao is lucky that he knows right from the first what Dean truly feels about him, some spend a life with another and never know.
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Matters of the Heart
centexhairysub commented on Fantasyboy69's story chapter in Matters of the Heart
Never make a statement without a lawyer present; human or Were, doesn't matter... I really like the pacing and characterizations in this story. -
WOW, Alpha Kirkland sounds like the bomb... Can't wait for the next chapter...
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Excellent chapter, this just keeps getting better and better. Dean and Kao already seem to have a connection, not sure where it is going to lead. Was anyone curious why the girlfriend smelt sour to him? Is there something going on there? Wouldn't the fact that the enforcer for Kai coming onto the pack lands have been a bigger problem than Kao coming on?
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Damn, someone should have keep a better eye on things; or at least done a little better checking to see if the damage to Dean was more than superficial after the attack. Have to wonder what Kao is?
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Interesting start to this book in the series, I can't wait to see where you go with it.
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Really enjoyed this last chapter, and really this whole story. I do think the writing and pacing were better here then the first in the series, although it was good in that one as well. I have to admit I really thought that they would end up in a polyamorous relationship with Colton but what do I know...
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Well, damn, the kitten has claws... There really was nothing else to do; someone like Amos was never going to stop coming back; I guess because he changed him, he really felt like he owned Quinton.
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Ah so more than one persons past is coming back to haunt them; well misery loves company. This chapter made me sad, not sure why, but that was the feeling that it evoked.
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Well, they should have known that Amos was being way to quiet. But then you are never ready for a surprise, that is why it is a surprise. LOL. Can't wait to see how you get on with this next chapter...
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The fight scene was excellent. The pacing and writing were so good, especially in that section. I wonder how Zeke's parents are going to feel about him moving up there, cause you just know it is going to happen.
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This was a hard chapter to read. Chris is at such a low point in his life. He does seem to have support from this doctor and the pack whose territory he is in; but have to wonder if he does not need that one person that he can lean on. Someone to give him a touchstone in his current life. Good writing can invoke strong emotions and this chapter has proven how good you really are...
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So enjoyed this chapter; I really liked how Daniel and his family handled their Christmas morning; the way it should be in my opinion when there are not small children involved. The rest was good as well; I can actually see Daniel as a father more than Raymond. Raymond just never gave off that vibe to me; will have to go back and reread his chapters... Good job as usual.
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Enjoyed the chapter, found the writing and pacing so well done. The mythology was good; filled in a few holes. Keep up the good work.
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Exciting chapter; have to wonder why Amos just won't leave Quinton alone? Is he just that much of an ass or is it that he turned him? Questions.
