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Daddydavek

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  1. have you heard Chet Atkins version?
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    Chapter 28

    Buzz is a player? JJ is done skating, but is he really ready for Alex or whatever else he decides to mess with? John doing John Mayer and nailing it? So many questions and hopefully some answers in about a week. Please!
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    Collide

    Well that was an interesting chapter. Well done!
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    Nightmares

    While Ryan does have some of the symptoms of PTSD, I think his insight about the timing was good. Most everyone who has been in heavy combat has experienced at least some symptoms. Ryan's reassurances to Clayton did not smack of him trying to hide anything else. The second nightmare in the bar could be a catastrophe...
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    New Story

    Sounds great!
  6. Thinking of all the characters who Marked "killed" off, I am still convinced that the one that weighs on them the most to this point in the story is Robbie....
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    More questions

    Thanks Gary! I've been re-reading and enjoying some of the other comments as well.
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    Blood

    I posted it in May and June 2012 so it is almost four years ago... Thanks for reading (again) and reviewing.
  9. Thanks for your kind words! I've just reread it myself and cringed as it needs editing...
  10. The best general advice my parents ever gave me was, 'you can't tell a book by its cover.' The best personal advice was 'you have good instincts, go with them.' The best working advice was 'do your best to do it right the first time.' The worst advice was 'keep it in your pants.' It was bad advice because every time I thought of it I'd get a hardon that showed....
  11. Happy 21st Birthday Drew! & Many, many more !
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    Chapter 27

    Darius should know better than to demean JJ, even in a joking manner....
  13. Three-fifty for a well made rocking chair with exotic wood sounds like a real bargain. I paid two hundred for ours nearly forty years ago. The boys are settling into their relationship and this chapter demonstrated that. Good job!
  14. HAPPY BIRTHDAY & Many, many more!
  15. Thanks everyone, especially Cia! This was my first story and I'm so glad so many reviewed and commented on it. If you haven't read it yet, I encourage you to give it a try.
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  17. Everyone has a past, some of it best forgotten. It sounds like Clayton and Ryan both are sensitive to the other, but quite understanding as well. It's called maturity. Good chapter!
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    About Time

    Great chapter that calls for a ballsy plan B. A big kiss just might be in order...
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    Mary's Place

    At last!
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    Chapter 26

    Brad is right about Elizabeth...now he just has to figure out his counter moves. JJ is developing into his own and is becoming more interesting in the process. Good chapter. More please!
  21. Here's a look at several TV openings from the 1980's and some of them were certainly cheesy
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    Long Shot

    There are more than a few on GA who are really into hockey....players.
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    Chapter 1

    Jammer and his AI are certainly unconventional characters. More please!
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    Growin' Up

    Great chapter until the "oh shit!" ending. Now anxiously awaiting spring....
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