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Thanks! The cousins are certainly a lot more uninhibited than Abel III, but he is becoming a bit more adventurous.

I'm glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for your kind words.

Chapter 5 Meeting the Browns I awakened the next morning feeling better than I could ever remember. I felt like my ability had finally settled and become completely integrated. I was mentally wired and up for any task. I contacted Hal and asked for an update and he provided telepathically a trove of data on each of the almost four hundred I identified as true threats. He also told me the Browns would be arriving in about an hour. With that news, I headed to the facilities, did my business and

Happy Birthday!

Thanks for the update and best wishes for you and your BF!

Yuri is making good progress and I want more!

Hugs Billy! I think you have to give yourself some time. The shock and sense of loss is a bit overpowering right now and it's almost too much to consider. I lost my dad at age fifteen and it took me forever to really grieve and have a good cry. I was just sort of numb and worse I felt responsible. My point is, that we all grieve at our own pace and the more serious the loss, the longer it may take. One suggestion, when something reminds you of your mother, don't push it away. Remember her with all the love and care you can. Especially remember the good times and her favorite things. She will always be a part of you and wants you to be happy and successful!

Still not sure where this is going.

Wow, what another great review! Keep them coming! Like life, sometimes things are not immediately clear or explained and sometimes things seem to happen all at once and at other times nothing much seems to happen. So I hope you will stick with me and the story to see how it develops. Thanks again!

Wow, what a great review. You raise many of the questions I had when I was trying to put the story together. Most will be answered eventually. As for as the pace of this chapter, I slowed it down intentionally as I was trying to convey the immensity of processing everything he received. I hope it worked to some extent.

Thanks for your review! I think most of your questions are answered in chapter 2. I hope the story continues to intrigue you.

Thanks Jim! I hope it continues to hold your interest! I appreciate your comments.

I am glad you are enjoying Abel III's story. Hopefully it will continue to excite your interest. Thanks for the review and reading my story!

I believe I said that their views are a bit parochial as they never had the experience of college or of travel. The first part that you quoted was meant to convey that they were a bit self-righteous. And yes there are some who are well traveled and well educated who are also self-righteous.

Frank gets staying out of things legitimately so it seems, unless he decides he has to and it explains some of the behavior of his family. Brad is doing good. Mark has dropped several bits about the gift of the Google stock which in fact will make the boys really rich. Finally, Tony---he is forgiven and now can be consigned to the background where he belongs. More please!

Chapter 4 Earth December 2733 After my grandfather had commented that I was more like old Angus than he expected, I took some time to review my family histories more closely. Of the family history going back eleven generations that my father provided, Angus Silversmith was way back in the fourth generation. He was the premier telepath of all the families, being the only proven fifth level. He also was the first one to live an extremely long life, reaching the then unheard of age of one hun

The scenes at the store and at the pool were well done and had me interested to see where this was all going to lead. More please!

She entertained Treadwell's troops?

Perhaps it is for the best that you will have to make such a drastic change. While I know you will continue to worry about your dad, you do need your own space and perhaps so does he. Finding someplace affordable that is decent is the challenge. Good luck and best wishes!

I think as written, Wally and Clara are good solid blue collar people who value work, respect, discipline and what they perceive as middle class values. In other words, their views are a bit parochial as they never had the experience of college or of travel. Zach is the star athlete and they cannot see anything that distracts him from that as having any worth or value. That he has defied them and continues to do so, rankles and is not something that appreciate as normal for teenagers, at least not one that they raised....

Mark promised a cliff hanger, but a misplaced Sovereign?

Now that is what I call a CLIFF-HANGER! It is interesting that George thinks that Caroline has not figured him out well enough to know she should have just told her story when confronted. It almost makes me worried that the news is such that George may not forgive her. More soon, please!

Many people chew gum quietly while flying. It helps equalize air pressure in your ears and keeps your mouth moist in the arid cabin air.

While giving a blow job?

Well Mark chose the route of Matt having the jock to jock talk with Zach and it worked really well. I think that Matt making Zach think things through on his own and to make his own decision worked out perfect. That Zach told his 'advisor' who caused the problem to fix it or he was fired and then fired him when he couldn't fix it, says volumes. That he is seeking legal assistance to have a new guardian appointed and wants Frank to take on that responsibility is logical and despite Frank's misgivings and not really wanting to be involved, it seems to be a solid choice. Poor Frank, his life is going to get so much more interesting dealing with teenage drama which he has studiously avoided in the past. Will summed it up perfectly. Don't make promises to him that you can't keep. Will they ever get to Europe??