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Daddydavek

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  1. Well not to spill too much, but there is more to Dennis than is apparent so far... I'm glad you had a laugh over "Nellies." Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
  2. Well Steve is just 21 and Bill is still 18 so yeah, they do have sex on the brain almost all the time...Not like old guys like me. (LOL) Thanks for reading and taking the time to review. I appreciate it!
  3. Sex is a great stress reliever and Abel was worried about his cousins...
  4. Daddydavek

    July 4th

    I tried to make Sean real. I am glad you like him.
  5. Daddydavek

    More questions

    Did I mention I let some of my fantasies get incorporated into this story?
  6. Daddydavek

    Blood

    It's a mystery. You're supposed to be worried. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
  7. DWI does start with Dean getting the scare of his life and it's going to get a lot more exciting. Thanks for the review!
  8. And that is what has their father worried!
  9. The routine was needed for Abel III' s power to become habituated and second nature to him. You continue to get exact what I was trying to convey. Thanks for the feedback.
  10. I tried to convey the immensity and complexity of becoming telepathic. I think most people think.it would be cool without thinking of the probable consequences without some way to filter. Can you imagine being bombarded with stray thoughts. Think of schizophrenia and hearing voices....
  11. Daddydavek

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for great review!
  12. Well he is the only candidate so far.... Thanks for the review!
  13. Chapter 14 Free Time I awoke before the others with a huge piss hardon and the accompanying urgent need to extricate myself and get to the toilet. I accomplished that in record time to relieve my bladder. However, before I finished, two more joined me at the stool and we stood there with three sighs of relief. We had slept late for us and as one we moved into my shower to freshen up from the acrobatics of the night before. However, the body wash, the spray, the music and the erotic ambian
  14. Chapter 11 is a pivotal chapter in several ways including Abel III's emergence from sexual isolation. It is a process and one that takes some time. The Guardian is introduced as well....
  15. The showers use sonic waves, blowing mist and suction drains because they are in a low gravity environment. I'm sure everything gets washed down the drains! In this world people are much more exhibitionistic and they all have to work out regularly because of the low gravity. The results are pretty spectacular even on the "old" guys. The mind thing is hidden to everyone but other telepaths. Telepaths have to learn to be very discreet to avoid detection.....
  16. Well they are singing it at midnight just as 2734 begins so some things from the 'old' days remain in this new world...According to Wiki Burns wrote it in 1788 so I am not exaggerating too much.
  17. Abel is growing into his power(s) and is still learning about them. His shower has been his erotic release and toward that end he spent considerable time programming it. I'm sure he cleans up nice! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review. I always find your POV to be refreshingly candid and down to earth which suits you and me fine!
  18. Wouldn't the word sunder or sundered work as well as dismember or dismembered?
  19. Daddydavek

    Chapter 15

    Actually, in my opinion the missive George sent to Caroline just before the end of the chapter will be the one that finally convinces Caroline of the depth of her indiscretion and the possible consequences. If George had told her all that in the alcove in a cool, deadly calm tone of voice, she would have wilted then and there. To have him tell her he regretted raising his voice, but not what he said has got to be telling. As usual, a well crafted chapter with lots to think about. George's handling of the Elgin's was much more his style, but then again he has no real emotional involvement with them.
  20. Chapter 13 Arrival at Starview The last transit was uneventful if somewhat stressful for everyone. We kept our group psychic shield locked down within the outer hull plates and seemingly remained under the 'radar' from the Guardian. We timely arrived at the space station at Alpha Centauri and the entire crew seemed to experience a collective sigh of relief. The Earth's space station was named Magellan as it went around the planet. The space station at Alpha Centauri was called Starview as
  21. Daddydavek

    Chapter 37

    Of course the remaining big question is: Wade?
  22. Daddydavek

    Chapter 37

    Of course the remaining big question is: Wade?
  23. Happy Birthday Billy!
  24. You are very welcome and thanks for taking the time to let me know!
  25. Sailors have always been a bit superstitious and I think it's not to farfetched to think that will continue. Thanks for reviewing!
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