I noticed from your status update that chapter 2 was almost ready and I decided to check your story out. I'm "hooked" and will be looking for the remaining chapters. Thanks!
I think you have raised an interesting point which could turn out to be validated. Being a player because you have to do it to survive is much different than being a player because you are basically a slut or going through a slutty phase...called adolescence.
Another Will chapter. The part I found interesting was his conversation with Robbie after the encounter with Darius. His interpretation that Robbie was able to write people off and that he may have pushed the envelope and been written off too was interesting. Maybe not completely right, but it does show he is thinking that actions do have consequences, sometimes unintended ones.
Interesting article discussing the division among gay activist groups over the sentence at the LATimes:
http://www.latimes.com/news/nationworld/nation/la-na-rutgers-suicide-20120522,0,4011641.story
It would be interesting to hear Mitch's excuse, but I can't believe it would make any difference. So perhaps it is more tantalizing not to know?
Shawn is interesting, but is ready to put up with Jordan's insecurities?
Inquiring minds want to know!
The latest chapter in fact has no cliffies. We still don't know what happens to Bridget and her sidekick Billie or whether Rachel fully recovers from her emergency surgery, but the chapter ended at a logical point and it was posted timely.
Long-term I'd like to see Sanchez and his cronies make a slip and end up as shark bait as well
So some Kudos to one of my favorite (and sometimes very frustrating) authors!
The man was found guilty, but not of murder. I think the judge actually did a good job of explaining the sentence and his reasons for it. I read an article earlier from an LGBT organization expressing hope that the sentence wouldn't be too severe as he worried about a backlash.
I was off reading a story on my Kindle an didn't check GA until I was ready to retire and lo and behold another chapter was posted earlier this evening.
Well I read it and found it to raise more questions than it answered. However, I suspect that was intentional and that subsequent chapters may be similar.....
It seems the old fogies of the Royal Navy are being true to form except for perhaps Bridport who was adamantly opposed to any suggestion of the use of force on his flagship. So I suspect, that is the chink in their hidebound thinking.
Davina and Freddy as hosts are another vexation for poor George and their news is peculiar about the pregnancy.
As a means to avoid making a voyage, it could even work.
I think the drama immediately ahead is between Wade and his family and the pending election. Mommie dearest isn't quite convinced that Wade can play in her league and we've yet to hear from her over his plans for the D.C. properties she dumped on him for the land for the ski resort.
Whew Hoo, what a hot ending to the chapter!
Wade seems to fall into it with hot guys while poor Matt is stuck on a bus.....
Great job on a nice transitional chapter.
Now for the dragon lady and the campaign?
Rachel gets her chance at Bridget but can't deliver a knock-out blow even with a cane.
B'stoke is on the boat with Trevor and Shane and the chapter ends.
It's not even close, this is the biggest cliff-hanger EVER in CJ's infamous career as a writer of cliff-hangers!.
All hail to the KING OF CLIFF HANGERS!