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  1. Chapter 5 The Will Dean and his mom arrived at the lawyer's office promptly at nine in the morning on Monday. They were shown into the firm's law library which had a big conference table and a sideboard with coffee and rolls and told to help themselves. Shortly thereafter, detective Turner from the police department arrived with the U.S. Marshal who had sat in on Dean's deposition. Dean was surprised to see them and went to introduce them to his mother but found out that she too had been
  2. Chapter 4 July 4th Eventually, the police tape was taken down and a moving van came and emptied the house next door. The shot out window was replaced and the door which the SWAT team had kicked in was also replaced and cleaners came and cleaned the house. A for sale sign was posted on the lawn. Naturally, in their small town, everyone knew that a murder had taken place there and the property sat. On the fourth Dean and Debb
  3. Chapter 3 More questions Monday afternoon The deposition ended and then the detective read a statement to Dean: “We are holding a press conference this afternoon in which we will tell the media that; Bruno Weiss was killed by an intruder whom he interrupted in his home early on Saturday morning. Shots were exchanged and Mr. Weiss was killed. The crime scened was thoroughly investigated and no fingerprints other than Mr. Weiss' were obtained. On
  4. Chapter 2 Blood Moday morning found Dean back in classes and talking to his fellow students. He had to fill them in on all that he had heard. Nothing much had happened on Sunday except that he worked again from noon to 8 at night. A city police car remained in front of the neighbor's house whenever he came or went and anyone who slowed down or stopped was promptly encouraged to move on down the block. He reported he had a two o'clock meeting at
  5. Chapter 1 The Murder Next Door 4:57 a.m., Saturday, May 5, 2007 BANG!...BANG! Plinkk..WHFFFT...BANG! Twenty year old Dean came awake with a start, reached blindly for his cell phone and dialed 911 which was answered immediately. "I live at 946 North Ash, my name is Dean Warner and I was just awakened by multiple gunshots from next door at 940 North Ash. One bullet came through my bedroom window and hit my bookshelf just over my bed."
  6. A bullet crashes into Dean's room and the intrigue starts.
  7. The article I saw said his doctors want him to undergo another procedure ASAP and that he might miss a couple of the Idol tour dates. With all that distraction, and the pressure from the IDOL people, the fact that he was able to stay true to his own self and not try to be someone else is impressive. I bought his album on iTunes and listening to them through some decent speakers instead of my crappy TV speakers made a difference.
  8. I don't know if it was the MOST epic duet in AMIDOL history, but it was certainly a glorious moment and has to rank right up there!
  9. Two hunks in love, but for Christian on the cusp, it's like the first time all over... again! He's lucky he only has memory loss and no other apparent neurological deficits. Traumatic head injuries, often have much worse complications.
  10. Phillip Phillips wins American Idol Season 11!
  11. I noticed from your status update that chapter 2 was almost ready and I decided to check your story out. I'm "hooked" and will be looking for the remaining chapters. Thanks!
  12. I think you have raised an interesting point which could turn out to be validated. Being a player because you have to do it to survive is much different than being a player because you are basically a slut or going through a slutty phase...called adolescence.
  13. Phillip's sang last and his last song was a homerun. As a matter of fact, I think I'll head over to iTunes....
  14. Daddydavek

    Chapter 41

    Another Will chapter. The part I found interesting was his conversation with Robbie after the encounter with Darius. His interpretation that Robbie was able to write people off and that he may have pushed the envelope and been written off too was interesting. Maybe not completely right, but it does show he is thinking that actions do have consequences, sometimes unintended ones.
  15. Patience is a virtue I am sorely lacking. But hopefully this evening another dollop in the saga will be provided for us.
  16. Interesting article discussing the division among gay activist groups over the sentence at the LATimes: http://www.latimes.com/news/nationworld/nation/la-na-rutgers-suicide-20120522,0,4011641.story
  17. Don't wish your life away and enjoy your mistakes before you have a boat load of responsibilities....
  18. It would be interesting to hear Mitch's excuse, but I can't believe it would make any difference. So perhaps it is more tantalizing not to know? Shawn is interesting, but is ready to put up with Jordan's insecurities? Inquiring minds want to know!
  19. The latest chapter in fact has no cliffies. We still don't know what happens to Bridget and her sidekick Billie or whether Rachel fully recovers from her emergency surgery, but the chapter ended at a logical point and it was posted timely. Long-term I'd like to see Sanchez and his cronies make a slip and end up as shark bait as well So some Kudos to one of my favorite (and sometimes very frustrating) authors!
  20. Yeah! They got the bastard. Now they need to get the bitch! What no cliffies?
  21. The man was found guilty, but not of murder. I think the judge actually did a good job of explaining the sentence and his reasons for it. I read an article earlier from an LGBT organization expressing hope that the sentence wouldn't be too severe as he worried about a backlash.
  22. Mine would be Abraham Lincoln. I'd ask him what he thought of the Republican Party since Nixon down to the present time.....
  23. I was off reading a story on my Kindle an didn't check GA until I was ready to retire and lo and behold another chapter was posted earlier this evening. Well I read it and found it to raise more questions than it answered. However, I suspect that was intentional and that subsequent chapters may be similar.....
  24. Daddydavek

    Chapter 6

    It seems the old fogies of the Royal Navy are being true to form except for perhaps Bridport who was adamantly opposed to any suggestion of the use of force on his flagship. So I suspect, that is the chink in their hidebound thinking. Davina and Freddy as hosts are another vexation for poor George and their news is peculiar about the pregnancy. As a means to avoid making a voyage, it could even work.
  25. With Mr. Arbour you never know and I bet he sneaks one in just after I've gone to bed tonight!
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