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Daddydavek

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  1. @Graeme said: " always keep in mind the end goal. Work out how you want the story to end, and then write in that direction. Don't lose sight of that goal, because that's how you can write yourself into a corner. If you know where you're headed, that will help remind you to leave an escape route to allow you to get to that goal. Meandering on your way to the goal is fine, but don't forget where you want to finish while you wander." In my experience this is a truth worth repeating!
  2. OFTEN Oliver feels that Edward needs TOUCH
  3. above board
  4. Daddydavek

    Chapter 11

    Still loving the story, but now I have my doubts about the FBI as it seems there is a mole...and somehow Harris does not seem so reliable.
  5. Daddydavek

    Chapter 10

    Just got to this and see that Corbin has committed to stay in a big way. Now on to the next chapter!
  6. ...and back to me!
  7. ..and back to me!
  8. shot put
  9. BALLS Becoming a low level surprise PRIZE
  10. IDEAS Isn't Dave enjoying Andy's six PACKD
  11. holes started
  12. ...and back to DDK!
  13. Daddydavek

    Chapter 16

    Kieran's power is growing along with his ability to wield it in new and novel ways. The thought of ten Fetches is daunting. More please!
  14. PAINT PAUL ANXIOUSLY INHALED NED'S TONGUE KISSD
  15. ...and back to the baby sitting grandpa!
  16. ...and back to me! (It's no secret, LPW!)
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