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Momma Rush be good, don't scare the boy off by gawking....tempting as it maybe. I don't see your post as being selfish Gaytron, you're encouraging your fellow man/woman to get into better shape. I'm going to start on something along the lines of you, cutting out as much soda as I can and stopping my fast food as much as possible (which in all honesty I don't do a lot of anyway) and trying to get to the gym more often. I've got a membership to a 24hour place in town but in the two months I've had it I've only been able to get there about 6 times...I've had a helluva run of colds recently these last few months. I wish you luck all luck on your fitness endevors.

I have no idea what you're talking about, are you feeling well? I love Pineapple and ham it is awesome. I was just joking bout the fraid in the dark thing, really, honestly, I BELIEVE. Shawn be nice lol. I'll think of some questions for Shawn later, Best Wishes, NightOwl. P.S GOTCHA!!!!!!!!!! be honest did I really have you going?

I aim to please lol, i like making people laugh. I'm sure River does, and I am interesting in seeing what our meek carer doles out. Of course he is in for a rough time, the love of his life is about to DIE lol. A new friend, interesting. OMG You can't tell Julia, girl would have FITS if she found out lol. I saw your image it was very nice, though slightly paler then the my vision of Silver/Mathew but everything else matches up. No worries Sister Nephylim...it takes a lot to make me violent....that has only ever happened twice in the last five or six years...once willingly and once accidentlly, though i don't regret either occurance. Your reply to my review surprised...haven't seen the last of Faith, oddly enough that doesn't worry me...though with you it should. Dont worry bout my sanity, after a few smacks to the head and a pep talk i got over it lol. Luv yea Nephy. best, NightOwl

DUDE!!!!! I think I had a vision of your Announcement Summery for this chapter. I SWEAR I've read it some place before, it just SO familer... are you sure you didn't use that one already? Who's going to sue you? Anyway great chapter man, very clever, very funny. I liked the scene with Shawn and his mom, although i dunno why. The christmas scene was pretty cool too, Shawn and the gifts and all. Over all it was a great chapter, I look forward to next weeks chapter. before I go I ahve a few questions for Anthony: Favorite Pizza toping, how long you've been afraid of the dark, and....hmm I forgot the next one lol Best Wishes, NightOwl

The last two chapter have been great nephy, sorry I didn't get ehre to comment on the last one, its been...hectic lol. I like the name Mathew, the picture I have of Silver goes good with that name, I just hope he lives long enough to get to use it again. You are a terrible tease though, which I can't talk considering the wayI ended my most recent chapter lol. But seriously you have my nomination for Cliffhanger Queen in the next RCA's. I sympathize with River, I'm not (normally) a violent person but given the chance Faith and his goons would have been trused up like slaves and...well lets just say I'd be checking for jumper cables in the cars and unstrapping those car batteries...and I'm sure there would be a rusty pip somewhere around there...I suck at baseball but I ahve great batting skils... Looking forward to the next chapter, Best Wishes, NightOwl

Hey Cia, i am glad you stopped in. Max is good for Josh. It's perhaps something of a co-dependant relationship but I think I balance it well. Sometime in the future we might have a more personally secure Josh, I don't know though. Writitng the Grandfathers, if i can be big headed for a minite, was a good idea lol. I has always intended to link Maxwell to Josh's grandparents somehow but until i started on this chapter I wasn't sure how deep I'd take it, but I think i did this well. lol I'd be afraid of Maxwell some too if I didn't know him. Writing Maxwell has been a real treat for me, it's let me take some of those desires and fear's I have toward my maternal grandfather and sort of work with them and work through them. I don't know how much more of a place the grandparents will take int he story, I have toyed with a few idea's though. Max's temper is a somewhat murky topic, as with a lot fo things about him it has a deep route in his past, we'll likely see more of the reason soon, it ties in with his reluctance to play football or other contant sports. Your compliments I take to my heart, i thank you Cia. Best Wishes, NightOwl

None of my readers or stories are more important then the other's that just how it goes. I dunno. I hope to have Lovers Blind out within a week or a week an a half, depending on the grooves of life. So three weeks, best guess. Unless I get a miracle.

Hey Yall, Just wanted to let you know the long awaited 16th chapter of Max and Josh is up. i hope you all enjoy it, feel free to let me know what you think my good people. Best Wishes, Nightowl Max and Josh ch16

I don't live in the south either but I use it cause my whole family is fromt he south and they use, plus I jus tlike the word. Hey can i get in on the ruler action...though I'm more Dom then a Sub hehehehe jk. best. NightOwl

lol Don't look at me like that, it just the way the circle turns, I have to maintain rotation or I get all confused and start mirroring. Again SOWWY Best Wishes Nightowl

I'm sorry my good man. I am afraid it will be a bit longer. Max and Josh will be up tomorrow and Lovers Blind is currently in production...Indiana Summer isn't until after. I am sorry though... Best Wishes, NightOwl

Hello Young Sage, i am glad that you have stopped in, I've been hoping to see you. First I'm glad to hear that you enjoy the story thus far, and I hope you will continue to. As for Kylie, your right. While she does her best to be considerate she does tend to be a little more controling then is strictly needed. I think her attitude is a rather good mirror to the person she is modeled after, if a bit more intense. Its not been mentioned yet but her...drive...is born more of insecurity then a superiority complex. She may seem shallow, thoughtless, and reckless but thats more my fault then that of the charecter, she has been under represented. Due to some recent developments you'll be seeing a somewhat softer version of Kylie but I warn you, not by much. No worries about rubbing me the wrong way, I have rhino skin. Best Wishes, NightOwl Hey Paya, I am sorry that it has been so long, i am TRYING for a chapter every two weeks, following the rotation, but life hasn't been cooperatting lol. I hope you enjoy the next chapter, which will be out as soon as Rush has finished editing, I'm shooting for Monday. Best Wishes, NightOwl

Great chapter Young Sage, it was my favorite kind, informative and interesting. I noticed your bit about sex scenes at the end of the chapter. I know how you feel, I at times struggle when I write my own. I seriously considerd ommiting sex all together in my my stories as I constantly worry about if they're good enough but then I considered how realistic that would be given the sorta planned lengths of my stories. For what its worth the scene you wrote in was nice in my opinion. I think your detail was descriptive enough and Shawns reactions were very beliveable. Best Wishes, nightowl

One of my Sisters was in a similer situation to this not to long ago. She was with this one guy who kept dumping her and soon as she was over him would come back. After the last go around she was so devastated that one of her friends where she lived had to step in and get pretty physical with the guy. He was only doing it because he enjoyed seeing her get hurt but the threat of bodily harm * he was such a pretty boy* made him get the picture. I'm not saying that you have the guy injured but maybe getting to him and telling that your not gonna stand for him contuniuesly hurting her, some time a hollow threat works wonders.

Well of course I stopped in to comment, I love the work far too much not to. As i said before I think Bel'lels POV was a great plot point in the story, I especially like the implications of breaking the whole no touch barrier, i agree it would abe a sad way to grow up. I think you are right about Pres'lin, he likes a little fire, a woman who can whoop him if she feels like it and we everyone knows he can do it. As always I look forward to more. best Wishes, NightOwl POH Commentator.

A great, if terrifying chapter Nephy. I was wondering, I really was, if this was going to happpen. The things you've said in posts and review replies hinted at it. But reading the Chapter Title, and the scene in the bedroom with Silver talking about the van and the people and River's promise, I knew it. You've got me though, as much as I am dreading what will happen to River and Silver I'll waiting with bells on for the next chapter. Best Wishes, Nightowl. P.S I'll right there with Jamie lol.

I never went to high school so I never had the issue of having to deal with Prom and being gay, to be honest I wouldn't have gone anyway lol. Maybe its because I don't have that stigma but I can see both points being made here. I agree that a canceled Prom isn't the end of the world but you've got to step back and take a look at the broader implications. How can we solve harrasment and discrimination in the work place if we can't prevent it our schools? You can't fix the big issues without fixing the small ones first, it undermines the entire system. We learn hate and discrimination at a young age, from home, from tv, and from school. We can't change what kids learn at home, what their exposed to, but we can make a difference by changing the rules of the schools, making them a safer more fair minded place. I'm sure I'll get argument here *what good does changing the schools if we don't change the rules for society as a whole* You've go to think though, Rome wasn't built in a day. Build the foundation first, then the structure it supports. Older minds, older people don't change just because you repeal and pass laws. I'm not saying people don't change but the vast majority don't because they are still chalked full of the programing they recieved as kids. PUBLIC schools are a place where a real and tangible difference can be made, examples can be given that will carry over into the adult life. Do you think this girl or the other LGBT students will be better for this experiance or worse, will this make them champions for Civil Rights or make them hopeless jaded assholes who don't care about the world around them. People may not think so but this 'little' story could cause VAST changes in the people involved, positive and negative and affect anything they might do and any LGBT laws or movments in the future, ever heard of the Straw that broke the camels back? As for Don't ask don't tell. I don't have any strong feelings on the subject, I don't intend on joining the military but I do feel for the people it affects. I understand that it's not fair not to be able to be yourself in the defense of your country but you have to admit there is safty in silence and ambiguity. I can't honestly believe anyone would think repealing the Law would make military life for LGBT soilders any easier, sure they wont be discharged but they'll always have that stigma hanging over their heads, marked men/women, if you will. My final point, if I've even made one in this little ramble, is that does it really matter? Media coverage should be balanced between *large* and *small* issues but in the end it out of the common people's hands, its for the government and the courts to decide. best Wishes, NightOwl

Sorry bout the delay in getting here Cia, I just had a chance to read the chapter this morning. I loved it as alway's, hearing the back story from Bel'lel POV was a very nice touch; you know me I love duel POV lol. I especially like the part with Bel'loc and Pres'lin in the hover car it was very touching. I liked the bit where Cale came back looking all stunned, and Pres'lin and Darea's bit about the dirty deed, it was funny. A great, funny, informative chapter. Best Wishes, nightOwl.

*shakes head reprovingly* Be paitent Skylights lol

Hey Young Sage, just wanted to stop in and give you my comps on the most recent chapter. It was great, as usual and very interesting. While I read it the old saying 'No good deed goes unpunished' kept coming to mind though in this its Shawn who is paying for Anthony's good deed; hence the punch in the face at the end of the chapter. I suppose Anthony is getting a bit too but I mean come one how bad can it be having people think you're using a guy for sex just because your being nice to him? All in all I think Shawn is getting the shorter end of the stick. You've got a very Nephylim-esque feel pushing Shawn from good to bad extremes, though in a substantially tuned down manner. All in all great work and I look forward to next friday. BEst wishes, NightOwl P.S the chapter set up and the little ~ ~ ~ things work great in my opinion.

Hey H.J Sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you, I've been running behind on a lot of things recently, i hope you can forgive me. It simply melts my heart to read that IS is one of your favorite stories, it really does, usually I'm not a fan of addiction but in this case I'll make an exception lol. I like the Billy and David dynamic, like I've said before I thought it would not only en elightening experiance but also a fun twist to make the country the scred up in the head one instead of the city boy. David is trying not to fall for Billy, trying and failing lol. Walker...I never really figured folsk would get all into him, but I am glad that they have...although it worries me that when folks find out the reason his silence they might be dissapointed...which will be happening in the near future. Best Wishes, Nightowl

Thats cool that there is gonna be a sequal, I can't imagine what it will be like having no firm idea of where this story is heading but I look forward to it none the less.

Hey Nephylim, The chapter was great, as always. I love the progress Silver is making, the role reverasl between him and River was priceless. You have left me some very deep curiosities though, what Silver did with the painting of River before the Dr. got there for instance...oh I hope you didn't have him destroy or deface it...that would a waste of a good paiting. The painting of the couple and the child is another point of interest. Whats really got me interested is what Silver is planning...I mean you have River state early in the chapter that he is deathly afraid of going outside but then you have Silver telling the Dr that he is feeling cooped up...I think the boy is plotting a way to get River to forget his professionalism. Your warning...."disaster is looming"....I'm actually looking forward to it to be honest. Great work. Best Wishes, nightOwl

I agree lol. I really liked the first season of the show, I've set up a recording for it on Scifi although I'm hoping they bring it to ONdemand as my shows have a tendacy to be erased...which IRKS me lol.