NightOwl88

*Jumps in with Fishwings and JWinDC* I agree lol

I bow before a Mistress of the unexpected I really should have seen something with the Kinjari adaptation coming where Bel'loc was concerned, eventually. Its an obsession of mine to try see all the places someone can go in a story, don't ask why i dunno lol. I really enjoyed the most recent chapter it was sweet and informative. I am cetainly glad that you have explained why everyone is interesting Bel'loc's home world. The Shilan is in for a surprise, working with Willim=working FOR him or being destroyed lol. I look forward to reading more, as always. BEst Wishes, NightOwl

How can we allow people this DUMB into positions of power?

Cam my good man i am guilty of trying to lol and lmao in my stories at times, I have had to conciously stop myself from doing it with lol before. One story though that used lol in it and it actually worked well in was Joey's story 'I think I'm in trouble.' "sigh" I miss Joey, and that story. P.S Is anyone else creeped out by this smilie or is it just me?->

I'm some what different then ole' Acht Acht up there in that I usually can't get into stories with a hate the world/angst attitude but Shawn won me over pretty quickly, his reasons for being all angry are somewhat real rather then his own mental fabrications. I have to say though that I like Anthony a bit more, with Shawn you already know what his issues are, or can guess fairly accuratly but with Anthony, bull, house painter, afraid of the dark. He deffinatly offers more mystery. To be honest with you it was the title that drew me in first, then the summery but it was the first chapter that got me hooked. I can't wait for more. Best Wishes, NightOwl88.

Hey KJames, its been while since i heard from you. I am glad that you are sticking around and that you are enjoying the work. Don't be a stranger my friend. best Wishes, NightOwl

Hey yall, sorry its taken me so long to get here, things round my way have been hectic. I hope a Mass reply will work. Hey Paya, i am gald to see you here, as always. I am wondering how it is that you have been reading the story, that line is something that I am going to need explained to me next time we talk. I am sorry to say that what you are wanting will be a bit longer in coming. There is a lot moe ground work I have to lay before the healing can begin. I hope you will enjoy yourself and keep reading. Best Wishes, NightOwl Hello Jons317, its good to meet you. I am certainly glad to hear that Indiana Summer has become your favorite, it means a lot to me. I can understand what you mean about duel mains and multiple POVs, I have found several stories with duel mains that are diminshed because one or more main outshines the rest. I try to write in a different perspective then what most people expect, while still representing part of the norm, which is why I made Billy our mysterious and misunderstood charecter. Above that though I wanted to bring to light that not only people living in urban or metropolitain area's go through this kind of pain and confusion. I do my best to make my charecters real and alive and I am glad to have achieved a level of depth and reality in this story. Billy does feel alone, and he needs that; but he'll also understand soon that he's not, which is one reason I liek the alternate POV is lets the reader see the differences and commonalities between the charecters. I do look forward to hearing from you again and hope you wont be a stranger. best Wishes, NightOwl Hey Drewbie, and glad that you've stopped in. I am glad that you liked the first chapter, and i am very glad that the POV didn't keep you confused for too long. Billy is a unwilling looker, he hates it but at the same time he can't help himself, but he'll get over that soon enough. Best Wishes, NightOwl Hello Clara, it is very nice to meet you. I am very glad to ehar that you love the story, and that it is one of your favorites, hearing that means a lot to me. I know that at the moment Davids dad does indeed seem like the bad guy, but I assure you he has his son's best interests at heart, but We'll get to that later, but David and Billy are indeed on the road to surpassing their dads, but they do have some work to do first. I am glad that you like David, I needed him to be respectful and capable for what comes later in the story, but I also needed himt o aggresive and arrogant when it came to William Sr, one to show why he got sent there in the first place and two to bring out William's feelings toward his father, and I needed someone to stand up to William. Billy, I agree he is a sweet kid, i never figured he would turn out that way when i first started writing him. Like David I needed to make him capable of doing the hard labor, and he does his best to live up to his dads standards, even though he can't reach them and he knows he can't he still tries cause he desperatly wants that approval, that love... I can tell you that Billy will open up to David in time, what I can't tell you is why William doesn't want Billy to leave the farm, at least not yet. You'll find out later. I am very glad that you have figured Annie out so well, she is indeed up to something, stay tuned for more. I will say one thing, the old adage "mothers see/know everything" is very true in this story. Elder, I never imagined that he would get so much attention...really I didn't. Elder and Billy share a pain, which we'll touch upon later. I assure you though that your assumption is correct, he has VERY good reason to be mistrustful. I dunno how logn the story will be but I can promise its not a shorty. I hope you'll stick around to read more and I hope that you won't be a stranger. best Wishes, NightOwl AHHH Drewbie, two visits in one day, I'm flattered lol. Many things will happen between my boys, I promise. Best Wishes, NightOwl.

You are very welcome Cia. I try to follow the golden rule when it comes to comments and forum visits. I love to hear what folks have to say about my work so why not do the same for other writers? In regards to the newest chapter it was wonderful. Bearest (think i miss spelled that) is a very nice charecter, I am liking him more and more. I also like the more human version of Cale, i think it is a nice to see the change, it gives an even better insight to the changing nature of the charecters. As to Bel'loc, i saw this twist coming to be perfectly honest with you, it was just a little TOO perfect lol....I'm sensing some divine intervention lol. I look forward to reading more. Best Wishes, NightOwl

Hey Yall, I just wanted to let you know that the fourth chapter of Indiana Summer is now in the efiction section. I hope you gay and gals enjoy it. Indiana Summer CH04

Cute kid, sweet scene. I don't reall care who won or lost, none fo my concern.....just don't tell the lady who works at Circle K or she'll start spiking my diet mountain dew lol...she's a Colts fan

*Grabs Cia and Nephylim and does a three way happy dance* I KNEW you didn't kill Bel'loc I just knew it....ok I admit you had me almost beliving it though ALMOST lol. That was just the cherry on top of the hot carmal sunday (my favorite icre cream) that is this chapter. I loved this chapter, it was great. Cale's devotion to Bel'loc is just touching the bit about *joining him at the Threshold* was a very nice look into Cale's psyche, drugged as he was. Its also very nice how you showed the darker side of *love* with Maisy's obbsession with him; although i think she is going to be paying for that with the King later lol. The Kinjari is a very cool concept, they way your write it is very interesting and something that would very cool to be able to witness. I could go on for days on this one but I think I'll leave it here. it was WONDERFUL, Best Wishes, Nightowl

Very Nice, the cop man handling the one student could actually get in some trouble.

Two Ancient cultures I don't know a lot about, outside their Diety Mythology and my Egyptian is better then my Sumerian.

Your welcome Kjames, I hope you aren enjoying them *knocks you out, ties you to the chair and gets jumper cables* remember me now? It is cool to get quoted.

"Redneck Hell" (it hurts me to say this) Kentucky "Gay Mecca" Atlanta Georgia (there is a reason the call it HOTlanta) "Middle of Nowhere" Sardinia Indiana (trust me I been there, you can drive the length of the town in 20 seconds)

You can't siwng cat in the subject of Greek Mythology without hitting a male god with a same sex lover or two lol...Also I wonder if they realize that all the wrestling matches back in the day were done all oiled up and in the buff, really learn your history/myth. It is really cool what these guys are doing, the part with NROTC guy was especially cool. I've never sat foot on a college campus, and most likly never will (unless community college counts) but I do have a few friends spread out over the country in college (most gay) and very few of them have ever saida nything negative about the Frat/Frat brothers they've come in contact with.

Hmmm, i am not entirely sure how I feel about that....on the plus side it could be rather fun...but then like Cia I think my germaphobe side would prevent any action. But more power to you should you decide to go through with it.

I'm ashamed to say that i just found this story thanks to the intervention of Momma Rush. I have to say I love this story, i love the charecters, the plot the *scenery* its all just great. Your dialogue is amazing and just so real, its like you cna actually hear the characters speaking. I finally managed to get caught up with all the chapters and I have to say that by far my favorite person is Ms. Carol, don't ask why I just love her lol. The parts you've written in for the kids are very interesting and endearing. As much as I hate to find out the story is almost over i look forward to seeing how it ends, and who this third soul that Ms Carol was talking about is gonna be. Best Wishes, and great work, NightOwl.

I think from what I've seen I can saftly say that there are people here who are better off having known your brother, sadly I wish I could count my self among the. I agree with Rush and Mark you are somethign special too, as I know your brother IS also.

Way to go John, congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for coming by Nephy, you know I love hearing from you. I'm glad you enjoy my *questionable* ways lol

Of course I'm gonna stop in and give you my thoughts, the story has bewitched me and I have no other choice, i go a little nuts everytime I see its been updated. No spoilers...I understand lol..... We should introduce Cale to Billy, he gets mouthy at times too lol

Paya, DUDE so good to have you drop in. I am glad that you liked the chapter, I try to keep things mildly complicated, but interesting. To be honest with you there are currently 8 about to be 9 chapters to this story when originally it wasn't even supposed to be half that. The situation and the characters just evolved so much more that I had to keep it up. Don't worry bout the letter, it will come up soon enough. The girl...well she will be a steady charecter from now on and her motives will become clearer overtime. Seth...to be honest this is the last time Seth will come into play for a little while...sorry. The father son relationship, seems to be the question of the day so to speak. Like with Seth I have to tell you a full explination won't come for a little while longer, although there are some bits and peices. Elder, you and Nephy are the only people to ever bring him up. I should tell you that his story is tied in with Billy and his dad's situation. Well I am sorry to toss out the questions without answers, you'll get them later I promise. Best Wishes, NightOwl.

Hey Yall, I just wanted to let you know that Indiana Summer chapter03 is up. Its quite a bit later then what I usually post things but I am going to be crazy busy tomorrow and i wanted to get it out there. I hope you guys enjoy it. Indiana Summer CH03

Cudo's on the most recent chapter Cia, it was disturbingly lovely. I am curious as to how much of what the King says is truth and how much is fiction, or if he is indeed in league with his sister. Cale's bit about his siblngs being interesting Bel'loc's planet is interesting, what could they want from it? As for Bel'loc....I'm looking forward to finding out if he is indeed dead or not. Personally I'd like him to be alive but if he isn't then thats ok....the suspence is killing me though lol. Best Wishes, NightOwl