NightOwl88

I'm just now getting the chance to read throught he Antho's more. A great story David, I like Tony, he's got the sincere hyper-active thing going for him. its was a good read.

That was a low, dirty, EVIL trick Nephy, and I loved every second of it you devious Deva. The school did handle things poorly, but I needed it to in order to set up some future fun. Stay tuned lol. I guess to understand why Zeeks parents went off the deep end you'd have to know them how I know them lol. They've spent Zeek's entire life being open and honest with due to finding out about his disability early on. Finding out that Zeekadn Jake ahve been keeping something big secret from them causes them to jump to the worst possible conclusions. Before they got together they always knew about the incidents and fights, after they got together they started keeping things from them, they meant well but it ended up biting them in the butts lol. I guess its not so much as the fights as it is the fact that they were keeping it from them...does that make sense? BTW i love making you rant and rave, its a real perk of this writing lark lol. Hello Paya, so very glad you stopped by, as always lol. it was a bit long wasn't it, and i wrote it that way JUST FOR YOU lol. I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend Nephy is so good about being able to capture things isn't she, heck half the time she could say it better then I could lol. i am glad you picked up up ont he plausibility issues, i admit myself that I worried if some of the stuff wasn't a little too far out of left field. I'm glad you can see the reasoning behind it though lol. Best Wishes my dear friends. NightOwl

Hey all, I just wanted to drop a line letting you guys know that Lovers Blind 9 is up in the efiction. I hope you guys enjoy. Feel free to let me know one way or another lol. Lovers Blind CH09 Best Wishes, NightOwl

Hey Paya, It sucks that your browser didn't load, I would have LOVED to see what you had to say lol. I am glad you will stick it out and no I don't write fast enough, trust me you are not the only one who thinks so lol. You will not have to wait a month for Indiana Summer 8, I will post Lovers Blind this week and Indiana Summer next week, with luck by then I'll have Max and Josh either done or close to it *if this Sinus infection clears up* If your gonna stalk me though remember my room is on the second floor lol. It doesn't 'sorta' include you , it MEANS you along with all my other friends here at GA. You are not wrong Cia, I have gotten a lot of controversy on this chapter. One part of me is happy about it cause that means folks care about my work, while the other part makes me worry; for reasons I have yet to determine. I'm glad you enjoyed the glimpse into everyone's mental states. It took me a lot longer then I thought it would to bring Annie's inner conflict about staying with William into the story, but it just never seemed to be the right time before now. Her loss for a solution to the situation, for me at least, was really profound. I think every person is at some point in time in a situation that they don't know how to resolve. William is acting strangely, and he is up to something. I'll be bringing it into more focus after chapter 8 but I am not entirely sure how yet. I am glad that you found the Barn Scene so vivid. I wanted that scene to be just like you described, a heartbreaking emtional and physical struggle; not just for Billy but for David too. As will be revealed in the next chapter David has made some not so smart choices and while he is afraid that this is another one of those he has a sincere hope and desire to do the right thing for Billy. We really only saw the first crack in Billy's defenses, the subconscience desire to feel David's body pressed against his battling against the conscience desire to supress the feeling. I don't mean to tease or anything but Billy's full break down and mind-set will be viewed in the next chapter, i hope everyone finds it satisfactory. Billy doesn't have much choice now but to confront his issues now, now that someone actually knows he'd be torn apart if he kept trying to keep things under control using his current methods, which weren't working so well anymore anyway. I don't know if you'll like how the next chapter un-folds or not Cia, things deviate a bit from what you have in mind. But I assure you that despite the way i twist things up neither David nor Billy have an interest in persuing a romantic relationship right off the bat. David wants to be what Billy needs, somone who understands, someone who can guide him through his issues and maybe keep him safe from himself...and others. Which above anything else is what Billy is wanting too. Best Wishes, NightOwl

Now worries Young Sage, its a new system, there are bound to be gum in the works some where along the way.

*grabs the binoculars* Am i the only one seeing dark clouds on that distant horizon? I loved the chapter, i admit I was surprised when the Doc asked River to move in with Silver, I mean forget professionalism lol. I look forward to the rain though, I get the feeling it will be as refreshing as it is terrifying. I look forward to more. Best Wishes, NightOwl

Hey Paya, i'm glad you stopped in, as always. I am glad decided to respond to the review here, I had hoped you would and I am SOOO very glad you happy to be wrong. Beyond doing some considerable damage to Billy if he were to kiss him or tell him he was gay Davids actions are more of an exercise in...prudance?...Professionalism? I dunno exactly David wants to HELP Billy, not bed him. He doesn't want Billy's way forward to be blocked by puppy love, or a crush. Yes chapter 8 is written, I finished a couple of weeks ago...and not to rub it in but is my favorite chapter so far lol....It will be out soon I promise. *Glares threateningly at Momma Rush* Your not supposed to let the cat out of the bag like that...now I am going to have a psycho group of fans *with Paya in the lead* using google maps to find me and kill me lol. I can't really comment on the rest of your post, I mean its spot on as always lol. Now, now Paya no dissing Rigby Taylor, he gave me his thoughts and I am very pleased that he was so candid. I am always glad for the review of a friend, and you now how much I love getting your POV lol. *Cowers behind Momma Rush* Lovers Blind will be up in a few days with Indiana Summer sometime after it....I'm not doing it out meanness or to hype up the story...its just been ages since Jake and Zeek have broke the surface... Well Best wishes, and as always thanks for stoping. NightOwl

I was born on June 30th, two or three weeks early actually. I don't mind though. I was born under Cancer on the third night of the full moon lol.

Basilisks are fun, one look and POOF your a stone statue.

I came into the story after the most recent chapter and after the first one I completely fell in love with it. i can sort of sympathiz with the situation. Every woman in my mothers family, starting at my grandma, has worked with the mentally handicapped (and several from my dads family have too) its also the field I plan on going into while I work on getting my LPN or RN. Most, if not all, of the folks my family has worked with have been lifers, people who couldn't function alone in society. There have been one or two people *if memory serves* that were like Silver *though NOT for the same reasons* that at one point in time had been normal people but due to some trauma were never the same again and had to be supervised and taken care of the rest of their lives. I guess because of that I do feel a certain connection to the characters in the story and to the story itself. Best Wishes, NightOwl.

Hey Jons317, WOW two posts in one day, I'm giddy lol. Right now, in my mind, Billy is so confused and upset that he doesn't know what to think of David. He is attracted to him, he does like him and secretly part of him wants David to be gay because then in some universe if he were to get over his issues he could get with him, on the other side he doesn't want him to be gay so then he'd never have to face his issues. So yea I guess it was a little ambiguous. Not sure if it was on purpose or not lol. Best wishes, Nightowl

I hope you guys don't mind a Mass reply, it has been a long day lol and I got a little behind. Hey Drewbie, glad you stopped in. I am glad that you liked the fight scene, it was one of my favorites. Annie, she will be curious...I do wonder what they tell her lol. Hope you stick around to find out. Hello Mark, good to see you again. I don't think lines were so much crossed as they were totally obliterated lol. Chapter 8 will be out soon I promise, and I do hope you like it. Benji, its been awhile since I saw you, glad you stopped by. It was obvious that David would be the one to instigate everything huh? William is a strange one, he does vanish quite often doesn't he? His crop is food, but we will find out why he doesn't let anyone in the fields later. I am glad you are looking forward to the next chapter, I hope you will enjoy it, I know I did. Hello Jon317, glad to see you again. I am glad that you liked the most recent two chapters. Billy doesn't FULLY realize how devoted his friends are but he's getting there. I am glad you (and everyone else) liked the fight scene. I've worried in the past that it might be a little under done lol. I couldn't have David kiss poor confused Billy, imagine what that would do to the boy lol. I hope you enjoy the evening after, I know I liked writing it, trust me there is NO avoiding it lol. Thanks and Best wishes you all for your posts, they mean a lot me. NightOwl

Hello everyone, I just thought I would drop a line letting yall know that Indiana Summer 7 is up in the efiction section. I hope you enjoy the work. As always I look forward to hearing from you. best Wishes, NightOwl Link: Indiana Summer 07

No worries Young sage, it'll get up soon. All of us *except some more of the well known authors* have to be validated due to some plagerism issues of late. Nothing to worry about.

I know you don't Nephy but i still feel bad, I feel like for every writer who is kind enough to review my work whose own work I hardly get time to read. I am resolving to change that though. I am writing in my own work which is why I get so little time to read. Price of honor is great but if anyone is getting a sandwhich with Cale and Bel'loc its me and Pres'lin could jump in too lol, you can have Kataya and Darea though lol. As for your own brand of good evil I SHUTTER *in a good way* to think about what that could be.

PRES'LIN IS ALIVE!!!!! That makes me happy, really it does; I always liked him. it was a great chapter Cia, Pres'lin..appreciation...of Darea is very nice, very interesting. I really liked the scene with the three of them surveying the Villiage and Cale going all 'death watch' on them, it was freaky but at the same time very well done. The ending has an ominous forboding to it, I mean having to kill a guard to get in that pretty much SCREAMS bad omen, not to mention the reaction it got out Bel'loc, Pres'lin and the Priest, sad. All in all though a great chapter, I can't wait to see them in the Inner Courtyard. Best Wishes, NightOwl

*grabs Nephy and heads for the hills* We've been made HAUL BOOTY!!!! You KNOW that deep down inside there is a little Big Gina in you Momma Rush, don't try and deny it.

Not really Cam, you can be the proprietor of the card here on GA, you can be the orginal 'Card giver' at GA, therfore you don't hae to be given one, but you have to give one to everyone else. I would apply for one but it would either be revoked for my poor fashion sense or I would get docked points for not know who Lady Gaga is lol JK!!!

Hey HH5, its good to see you here. First can i ask what you WERE expecting, if not a full story lol? I am glad you enjoyed and it's nice to hear that you'll probably read it again, repeat costumers ROCK lol. I'm glad fate brought them together too to be honest, I wasn't sure how it was going to end when i was writing it. BEst, NightOwl Hey Bugeye, good to see you again. I am glad you like the story, it was fun to write. I hope you'll continue reading when I serialize it later this year. BEst, NightOwl

Hello Kevers, its good to meet you. I am really glad that you liked the story, I know I had a lot of fun writing it lol. This may sound callous but I am glad that you could sympathize with their pain. I do try to make the emotions real enough for folks to feel, I am glad that it worked in this story. AHHH Nephy I am glad that you stopped by, as always. I am glad that you loved the story, I LOVE to hear that lol. It was fun writing about *spontaneous* love instead of the whole *crush* thing that I have done up until now. I do plan on writing more for Abe and Tris later on as I can think of some *fun* things to get up to lol. (Sits in a dark corner *whispers* Yea she actually is modeled after a specific person here at GA, and i think we BOTH know whos he is but it keep it on the DL) Hello David, its good to see you again. As always your comments are as heartfelt as they are poetic. I'm glad that you liked the conclusion, I worried that it might be a bit weak but I tried to make it *feel right*. Love is indeed where you find it. (I love that line lol)

I have a new one to add, 'Don't Laugh at me" By Mark Wills

I don't think I know this one, though if you happen to have a name of one of the charecters it could be useful in finding it.

Shells and cheese, grilled pork chops with cayenne, garlic and onion, and peas with mushrooms. YUM. THis is the first time in nearly two months when i've got to cook on my own.

A very sad yet very wonderful story Cia. It was very nice, I had thought before that there was more to Teranna then met the eye, this story confirms it and if possible makes me look forward even more to the rest of Price of Honor.

I have no idea why you are thanking me, I didn't do anything but tinker with your intro, the genius of the story was ALL YOU MOMMA> I loved this story, it was funny, erotic, and sweet, and thats only the resturant scene lol. But seriously this was a great work, I look forward to the *Discussed story* Thats right Nephy i know about too lol jk.