Nephylim

Tell me about it. If there were thirty six hours in a day there wouldn't be enough time. I'm struggling with longer stories but working my way through the anthos. There is some really really good stuff in there... yours included.

Nice start. Your descriptions were a bit hurried but the rest overcame that with a good flow and nice dialogue. I am interested in the characters, in what was going on with Zach and what is going to happen next so all good

You always skate the line between poetry and prose so expertly. You write the kind of stories that are unforgettable and this is no exception. Beautiful. Just beautiful and there is such a sense of sadness and time

God that was funny. Who would have thought it, a bank robbery foiled by a couple of cans of baked beans. Classic.

Feels very much like a legend to me. A legend is someone we remember, someone who has done a great thing... being a loving caring father who brings up a loving caring son is a great thing and he is certainly remembered... therefore, I would submit, he is a legend. It's a beautiful story; truly beautiful

I loved it... of course I had figured that Sebastian was more than human. Initially I thought vampire... of course But when you mentioned demon I was thinking more demonic but I truly didn't consider an incubus until the very end and I didn't catch the clever acronym until you pointed it out. Poor Jordan... at least he died with a smile on his face. Awesome writing.

Thank you so much. I am very honoured that you read and enjoyed the story. Vampire stories seem to be a love or hate niche and I'm glad that I managed to drag you briefly to my side of the line.

It's never easy to read your stories darling. Yes, there were some flaws but the overall concept was stunning. Gabriel, eh? There is a certain perverse pleasure in thinking of him dying and being resurrected over and over. Big boys? Maybe but there are ranks above archangels and he may have thought he way playing with the big boys but he was always a messenger after all. I liked it. You are really expanding the concept and I love the way you are doing it. Can you screw up Micha'el next for me please?

Good God that was exciting. Right to the end I couldn't imagine how it could work out well. Amazing story very well written. A brave subject too. Awesome

I agree with the others. I would really like to read more, although i also think it stands alone nicely. THere are so many possibiities that it lets the mind wander down many roads. Poor old Linus. The house sounds just like him in a way. I hope he'll be happy there among the ghosts of his ancestors

Haha, thanks hun. I was quite fond of Jack and Will but at least they died with a smile on their faces.

I have a feeling that Arial isn't going to stop fighting no matter what. That's why his father wants him back because he's so strong and free. I don't know what happens to him next; whether he becomes a strong leader who takes his clan on to great things... or whether he escapes once and for all. Whatever it is I think that eventually he will win Asta over because they are twins after all

Thanks hun. Yeah... creepy indeed. I loved the twin action. It was my first but I have a feeling it won't be the last

Thank you hun, always appreciate a review from you. Yeah, the twins turned me on and I owed it to them to give them the best writing I could

Sigh. That was beautiful. I love the bit where Kaleb took Chase to see the babies. And I love the way that the family have accepted Kaleb. When Chase explained to Kaleb that they were all special I had tears in my eyes. It;s awesome. The ending was perfect... except for Scott. I have a feeling of foreboding.

Okay... my thoughts and feelings. You may very well be gay HOWEVER. You fell in love with someone and loved them enough to have a child with. You say yourself that she is your best friend so I have to ask a question. Whether you like men or women generally does a label really take away the feelings you have for THIS woman?

Actually I was surprised that people didn't seem to 'get' the euphamism especially when there were plenty of cues. I would like to make it abundantly clear that i do NOT force my friends, or any human being, out of the door by gripping the door frame and straining. None of my human 'friends' need to worry about this post which is literally about a pain in the arse Weeeellll I mean come ON

Wow that was hot. Being a vampire I cant help but get incredibly turned on by the thought of being bitten. It doesn't hurt that I have a thng about snakes too. I just think you are soooo cruel to stop right there.

So, I went to check out your profile pic again and, know what... sigh. I am not going to tell you that you're beautiful... you and I both know that no matter what I say you won't believe me but I maybe you will believe that I'm not throwing up or deleting you from my list of friends Now... do you love Stu... of course you do. Do you trust him... of course you do. Do you think he's a fool... of course you don't. Is he blind... of course not. Does he have good taste... well I've seen Jon desperate to steal his shoes and jacket so I think we can assume that is a yes. SO... would someone who is stylish and smart and posessing excellent taste choose an ugly person to love? Would someone you trust lie to you? Of course not. You're beautiful my darling and I happen to think that the profile pic you have at the moment is so much more beautiful than the other because he's real As an aside did you really think that I really believed that the other pic was you. Come on. I've seen the real pic and I'm not stupid. So everything i've ever said to you was said to YOU and not that poor boy who isn't you. Would it help if I told you I cried and spiralled into a pretty deep depression for a few days when i saw the pictures of me at the meet. Now I know this is stupid so there is no need to say so and this is not about me. I am telling you so that you can know you're not alone in looking at photos of yourself or the image of yourself in the mirror and wanting to cry. That doesn't mean that the image actually deserves to be cried over. So get over it and get real. We love you no matter what you look like or how close you are to the gate... although I am sure that Stu would love you a whole lot more... on the physical side of course as he couldn't love you more inside... when you walk out of the gate and into his arms (and his trousers). I'm sooooo proud of you for pushing that actor out of the way and letting us see behind the mask. Blessings bloody woman

Okay, so I really really don't want to have to explain how i dislocated my shoulder to all the lovely people who have asked. Howerver, I realise that I am not going to be able to avoid it... SO you can blame this blog on all those horrible people who care enough to beat me over the head with a baseball bat and force me to post this blog. Warning TMI coming up and it won't be pretty. Okay.... I am NOT going to come out and say the words and no apologies for that. So here is an euphamism. I am taking morphing based medication for pain. This had been doing nasty things to my body... well part of it... the part that ends up alongside my mind... in the sewers. So... we move quickly on to the euphamism. So I have friends who visit and usually leave on a regular basis without me having to think too much about it. Recently my friends have been tending to outstay their welcome and this week they have been a right pain in the arse. So this particular friend really didn't want to go and I had to end up pushing him out the door. In order to give me extra leverage I held on to the door frame and... um... dislocated my shoulder. And yes, I did have to explain this to the doctor and yes, he did laugh. On the bright side I now have medicine.

You are the bravest person I know. I've cried tears for you hun; for both of you. Sadness at your struggles and joy at your successes. And generally OH YES have I cried tears, enough to drown in... happiness sadness, grief and joy.

Done. I've also signed some of the other petitions.

Thank you

As someone who participated in the previously mentioned Facebook prank all I have to say is... are you Okay *snigger* Oh, and happy birthday too I am excited about the story,,, do it so it

Thank you so much for your deep and thoughtful review. I am glad that you connected to the story and that you were able to read it all the way through to the end. This is actually my favourite story that I have written and it always really warms me when readers like my characters, especialy my darling Silver.