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Writing: It wouldn't be fixing /my/ destiny per se...
Nephylim commented on J.T.'s blog entry in Fixing My Destiny
First of all you have to get permission from the people whose stories you are thinking of using. When you are ready to post then go to GAStories click on Submit Story under the Other Actions header and then it's pretty much self evident. Any problems give me a shout. I would certainly advise that if you get to the stage of posting you credit the story your are basing it on in the story notes. If you want to use any of mine as practice on then go ahead -
That was a beautiful chapter. The whole atmosphere, the colour, the beauty of the underwater world and the detail of the diving world THe end with Haze releiving the anxiety is wonderful
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Chapter 29 - It ends... It begins.
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 29 - It ends... It begins.
Thank you. I am, as always totally in your debt for your kind support of this and all my other stories. If I get better at all in my writing it's because of you and the other members who are kind enough to support me. -
That was ust magical. I have so many thoughts going through my mind about who Mordres might be and why he is there and where he is going... blah blah infinitum. That was true magic and it holds so much promise. I can't work out what fiction it was a fan of because it feels completely new to me but if there is then let me know. You MUST keep me updated as to this awesome tale as I want to go wherever it is going to take me
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Chapter 29 - It ends... It begins.
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 29 - It ends... It begins.
That's pretty much how it was with Luma and Raph. Luma didn't even know he was in the air until Raph pointed it out. They were lovers back in the day and always maintained a close connection which made it worse for Luma when Raph betrayed him by not supporting the rebels in the fall. Time heals... sometimes.Bridge is just the best. He will never be anything other than what he is. He is probably the most powerful being in the universe at this time... even if not for himself then because of the task he has been given and the power he has; physically and politically... but he has NO idea. He is still the same sweet boy and he always will be,Thank yuo so much for your support. I am so glad you enjoyed the story and the ending. -
Of course. It's more fun when you know death is round the corner
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A run down of the story so far Aqua is now Star who is a dragon Luma is Lumi'el who is a fallen angel Bridge is still Bridge but he is fey (faery) Sacha is still human Taz is Nephylim; the son of the Angel Tazi'el and a mortal woman Serif is now Rapha'el and is an Angel of the rank of Seraph (pl Seraphim) Abdi'el is a bad angel who was pretending to be Serif (Rapha'el) when he kidnapped Sacha. The Star Men are the angels, who came through star gates to make Earth a base i
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I SOOO love emoticons. These are my favourites and . I pretend to one and aspire to the other... I'll leave it to you to decide which is which:) Oh I think it i defiitely spaish guitar. look at how fast his littel fingers are moving. I love to watch spanish guitarists play because they have such nimble fingers Nice to meet you hun. I know what you mean about being intimidated by all the actual writers but I still take the risk and push my babies out to stand or fall in the glare. Most people are very kind so you should let your creations take a few tentative steps out; you never know they might inflame the imagination of someone If nothing else it is a massive boost to the ego when someone says they actually like it.
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I never thought I would feel sorry for David after reading the story but I come close to it in this. He still needs to pay though. I need to know what happens with Jordan so can we concentrate on that now please.
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High School and New Faces
Nephylim commented on Parchment_Of_Love's story chapter in High School and New Faces
Sweet start. I really like this story. I am terrible with names and I had no idea what story 'Always' was. This caught my attention the first time and is still doing so now -
It's a great story, really great and I am going to read every word, but did you know you've posted the chapter twice.
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Aw hun... thanks Bridge is really coming into his own. The last one is coming tomorrow. I think it's going to be a big WOW but hopefully ties up loose ends and finishes on a high. Yes THE Rapha'el and THE Lumin'el and the REAL Abdi'el REAL Astaria (aka) Ishtahar:) Thank you for your reviews which have totally made me smile. I am so glad that you like the story, and more importantl that you are following the story. I hope that reamins true for the last one.
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Well, I got up this morning and thought I heard something dripping. I went downstairs and there was a hole in my living room ceiling... I was only a lttle hole but there was a crack from the hole to a number of others ones along the edge of the plaster board. The plumber (who fortunately is covered by insurace) arrived at about 12.00. Took a look at it and turned the water off. He said it was a two man job and he would return with his mate in the last couple of hours. Now, almost 7 ours later, with no water... no loo, heating or dry towels, he's rung to say he's on his way. What did we do?.... we played guitar hero, ordered chinese, ate chocolate and had a laugh. I'm just hoping I can finish this chapter of my story before they get here in case I lose my 'flow'
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It's the end of the world as we know it (and I feel fine)
Nephylim commented on J_Ross's blog entry in Jordan's Blog
I'm sorry that it's been such a shitty year but I know exactly what you mean. If I list eveything that went badly for me this last year I'd be here all day and have everyone in tears. As a taster, my central heating died on Xmas Eve and didn't get fixed until January. We managed fine. I got up this morning and there was water pouring through my living room ceiling and it was no big deal; we phoned the insurance company organised the plumber and played guitar hero So yeah... I know what you mean. This place has been a total lifesaver... or at least sanity saver and I'm glad you're back. Here's to this year being a good one -
Just in case you haven't been keeping up... Aqua is now Star who is a dragon Luma is Lumi'el who is a fallen angel Bridge is still Bridge but he is fey (faery) Sacha is still human Taz is Nephylim the son of the Angel Tazi'el and a mortal woman Serif is now Rapha'el and is an Angel of the rank of Seraph (pl Seraphim) Abdi'el is a bad angel who was pretending to be Serif (Rapha'el) when he kidnapped Sacha. Keep up, it gets interesting. We are in the centre of
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:) You are so right that it is easier to be honest with strangers. For me, I don't think it has anything to do with respect. Its more the fact that I can't hear the hysterical giggling on the other side of the conversation. I know his brother 'sicasadog from the ' Do u Want a Twatting' guild which I eschewed for the 'No But u Could Do With a Slapping' guild
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I am so totally not grown up. I am never going to grow up. I am going to grow old disgracefully
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I think The End means The End. I have had people ask for a sequel to some of my stories but I have only written one so far. For me once the story is out there it's done... The End. I have had plenty of occasions though when I have read the last page of a book or story and longed for the end to be the beginning
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People are people. If you form a relationship with someone there is a connection, and that doesn't have to be at a physical level. People form attachments for all kinds of reasons and fr me falilng in llove with someone's mind and personality can be just as real as physical attraction. Yeah you have to be careful but if you make sure your first meeting is somewhere safe then after that there is no difference from meeting someone in a pub, club or anywhere else. There are many couples who meet on the internet who go on to have long, wonderful relationships. There are couples who meet and find they have nothing in common in 'real' life and it all goes wrong... just like people who meet anywhere else. Viva la internet (yeah shoot me I don't speak whatever language that is )
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Chapter 14 - Past Present
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 14 - Past Present
I was concerned that it would have been too trite if help had just appeared. I wanted there to be some tension regarding who arrived first... help or horror.For what it's worth I think that Faith is an irredeemable prick. He came from the same background as Silver and there is no way Silver would ever have done something like that.As for finishing the story too quickly... don't worry; book II is going to start to be posted next week so you will have to get through this before you can start on that. And if you think the boys go on a journey in this one... -
Well, if that's only half decent I would really like to see a decent one. I LOVE the outfit. I am the last to comment on anyone's technological skills Small but perfectly formed hun I'll take some cookies too. And actually I like your hair just like it is Cam Nice haircut, and whether you look like a boy or a girl you're you and you're gorgeous.
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Chapter 27 - The Choir and the Wheel
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 27 - The Choir and the Wheel
Thank you. I was a bit worried about how people would take the total change of direction. The last two chapter are going to be... um... er... explosive. Thanks, as always for your review. -
HAPPY BIRTHDAY Remind me to buy you a drink when I see you
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It is the middle of the night and I am disoriented. We are all tangled in each other as we’d fallen at the end of our lovemaking. With a few pauses to eat we had pretty much been making love all afternoon and evening. It was dark before we finally fell into an exhausted slumber. And now I’m awake. There is someone there; in the darkness. I can see well in very little light but there is something I am not seeing now. “Who’s there?” Star hisses next to me and I am surprised to see that he
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Chapter 13 - Ghosts from the Past
Nephylim commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Ghosts from the Past
Well, I think Karma will play its part but I'm not sure that it's River who suffers. I love this part of the story. It really is a pivotal point so I hope you enjoy the rest of it even though....
