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Confessions of a Diabetic Cat - 1. Chapter 1 - Ruby

Prompt 734 – Creative
Tag – The Ring
You’ve inherited an old family ring from a distant cousin. Unfortunately, the ring comes with a lot of responsibilities and powers you didn’t know about before you slid the ring on and became the new owner. What exactly does the ring do?

Chapter 1 – Ruby

 

Haley could feel one of her headaches coming on, but she wasn’t going to give into it. She rubbed her temples vigorously, attempting to massage the ache away. It seemed to work, at least, for the moment.

She brushed her long, brown hair, luxurious and silky to the touch, and tied it back. Smacking her lips and breathing deeply, she readied herself for the day.

Pulling on a dusty smock, the young woman then sat to pull on her Doc Marten boots, scruffy at the toes and form-fitting at the ankle. The studio beckoned to her, calling to her from afar.

She needed to finish another piece. Perhaps six pieces were enough to present with all the other artists involved, but it felt wrong. The ‘lake at midnight’ execution wasn’t as strong as the others. Haley vacillated on whether it should be part of the collection.

After all, this was an opening for new artists and her first introduction to the public.

Haley stood and stretched, her long lanky frame twisting in place. She was stiff from yesterday’s work.

Outside her window, a pair of birds, sparrows from the look of them, were fighting over space on the tree branch. It was funny watching the two of them squabble.

As she walked away, another pang pulsed in her head.

The headache was coming. Regardless of her plans or her wishes, it followed her like a stalker, lurking closely.

Stopping in the kitchen, Haley took a glass of water and swallowed one of her prescribed pills, the ones she kept in a special place.

The dull throb had stopped. For now. But, she knew it could return. Would probably return. In spite of her best efforts, it would control her all day and probably into the next.

Shrugging off those thoughts, she grabbed her bag and locked her door behind her. Bouncing down the steps, she suddenly felt a lightness, already. Maybe this prescription would work. Perhaps this time the drug company would have found a way to calm her banging brain.

At the bottom of the stairway, she paused and unfurled the keys still in her hand. Slipping the smallest of them into the slot and twisting, Haley pulled open the mailbox. There were a couple of flyers and a letter with a clear plastic window. A bill, no doubt.

Something else caught her eye. In the back there was something square with a yellow wrapper, manilla-colored, and surprising. Surprising because she never got packages unless she ordered something online. She hadn’t, and so this intrigued her.

Reaching in, she grasped the bag with two fingers and pulled the small box out. It was light without much to it.

Haley studied the address first, doubtfully. It was to her. In carefully crafted cursive writing, the package was addressed to Haley Green, 120 Seventh Street, Apt. 4b, Jacksonville, Florida. The lettering was beautiful, almost like a font in its flow and shape.

Then she looked at the return address. It was sent from Homestead, Florida. She puzzled over the name.

It appeared to be from a law firm. The name “Shandler, Tate, and Lewis”, was foreign to her, but the cadence of three names suggested attorneys.

Haley ripped open the packaging and inside was a small cardboard box, tan and unremarkable, but carefully taped shut. Using a fingernail, she started to slit it open when a voice startled her.

“Got something from Amazon?”

“What?” Haley looked over to see a wizened older woman sashay in from the hallway. It was old Mrs. Turgeson.

“You got a package,” the woman continued. “That’s always fun I think.”

“I didn’t order it,” Haley answered. “I mean, I don’t know what it is.”

The white-haired woman, a handkerchief wrapped about her head, smiled at her. “Even better.”

“I guess,” Haley said, and continued to open the box.

“What is it?” her neighbor asked. “I shouldn’t ask,” she added quickly.

“No, I’m wondering as well,” Haley said. The flaps opened and the tight folds of bubble wrap greeted her.

“Maybe it’s a treasure,” the older woman said, waving her mail at Haley. Then she wandered back toward her first-floor apartment.

Haley bit her lip and set the box on the small table next to the mailbox bank. She picked up the wad of bubble wrap and ripped it apart. Layer after layer of plastic packages came undone until she came upon a smaller box, a ring box, with a proper hinge on one side and mounded on top.

The young woman flipped it open. Inside was a lovely white gold ring, adorned with a small but glittering red stone. Around the red stone were sparkling clear stones.

On the side, there was a corner of white paper peeking out from underneath the ring.

Haley pulled on the paper, and it cleanly slid out from under. The note was small, merely a slip of white paper, and it had only three words on it.

“From Cousin June.”

Haley crinkled her nose at that. Who was June?

Then it came to her.

June wasn’t really a cousin to her. June was a neighbor of her mother’s back in Ohio.

Why was she sending her an old ring?

Haley picked it up and looked at it closely. The stone glittered in the sunlight streaming in through the front glass door behind her. It was lovely.

The white gold was just her style.

The tiny diamonds were a delight, making the red stone, presumably a ruby, gleam.

Haley slid it onto her right ring finger, and it fit. Well, maybe it was a little loose, but otherwise, it was nice.

She held out her hand and looked at the jewelry on her calloused, knobby finger.

Haley liked it.

Grabbing her phone, she hit her mother’s number.

We'll see what the next prompt brings us. I think we'll meet our main character. His name is Snuggles.
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I'm hooked.  I can't wait to read more and meet Snuggles.  :)  What a delightful surprise for a dreary evening.  :hug: :kiss: 

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I was expecting a more familiar setting. A happier story in a building that recently endured a tragedy. The site of a just untangled mystery.  ;–)

 

But there’s a thread of a connection with the dusty smock of an artist and her selections for her collection. But ‘lake at midnight’ doesn’t sound like the typical title for pottery! Maybe she's an artist who works with chalk or charcoal? Or maybe one that make collages from found materials? Probably not a digital artist whose work is done on a computer, nor a filmmaker.  ;–)

 

I do hope that one side-effect for the ring wearer is easing of the headaches.  ;–)

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Of course, I want to meet Snuggles! And I want  to know more about the ring, and Haley in general, and.... In short, I'm hooked.

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Great start! Everything just right to grab my curiosity and tack it to the floor. I'm caught in place! Waiting for more...

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Your story title caught my eye, so I'm anxious to meet Snuggles and curious about the ring. Nice hook. This is off to a good start.

Nick

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Rubies are known to be magical and able to transform lives, be it as slippers or a ring... ;) She'd better look out for witches!

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On 2/19/2019 at 5:56 PM, Valkyrie said:

I'm hooked.  I can't wait to read more and meet Snuggles.  :)  What a delightful surprise for a dreary evening.  :hug: :kiss: 

 

Well, there's more coming.  Here's a new chapter for you.  This won't be a long story, but hopefully a fun one!

 

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On 2/19/2019 at 6:02 PM, Headstall said:

Hmmmm. Interesting. A treasure from someone who isn't even a relative. Color me curious, Cole. :) 

 

Let's see what''s next!  I hope you like meeting the boys.  They are up next!

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On 2/19/2019 at 6:33 PM, Parker Owens said:

Okay, I want to know more. Lots more. I’m intrigued and interested. Great first chapter. 

 

 

Thanks Parker!!!!  Next up, we meet the boys.  There's something interesting going on with them, but what?

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On 2/19/2019 at 8:33 PM, droughtquake said:

I was expecting a more familiar setting. A happier story in a building that recently endured a tragedy. The site of a just untangled mystery.  ;–)

 

But there’s a thread of a connection with the dusty smock of an artist and her selections for her collection. But ‘lake at midnight’ doesn’t sound like the typical title for pottery! Maybe she's an artist who works with chalk or charcoal? Or maybe one that make collages from found materials? Probably not a digital artist whose work is done on a computer, nor a filmmaker.  ;–)

 

I do hope that one side-effect for the ring wearer is easing of the headaches.  ;–)

 

Very good!!  I love supplying surprises.  We'll see what will alleviate the pain.  First, we must meet the diabetic cat.

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On 2/20/2019 at 2:25 AM, aditus said:

Of course, I want to meet Snuggles! And I want  to know more about the ring, and Haley in general, and.... In short, I'm hooked.

 

I'm glad you're hooked.  Let's meet the boys next and I hop you like them.  They are sweet.

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On 2/20/2019 at 10:49 AM, Geron Kees said:

Great start! Everything just right to grab my curiosity and tack it to the floor. I'm caught in place! Waiting for more...

 

Great!  Next up, we will get to meet our protagonist.  He's a sweetheart.  

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On 2/20/2019 at 11:05 AM, Ivor Slipper said:

I guess as Snuggles hasn't appeared yet, I can't really say it was a 'purrfect' start. :)

 

Hahahaha!!  Very good!  Well, let's meet our furry friend.  That will hopefully give you more of a purr-spective on the story!!

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On 2/23/2019 at 9:35 AM, Nick Brady said:

Your story title caught my eye, so I'm anxious to meet Snuggles and curious about the ring. Nice hook. This is off to a good start.

Nick

 

I'm glad you like.  We will meet the main character next and his sidekick.  Thanks for commenting!

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On 2/25/2019 at 11:10 AM, Puppilull said:

Rubies are known to be magical and able to transform lives, be it as slippers or a ring... ;) She'd better look out for witches!

 

That's very true!  I'll keep the ruby idea in mind going forward.  In the meantime, let's meet Snuggles!

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On 2/25/2019 at 2:39 PM, AC Benus said:

Not what I was expecting, but a very intriguing start :)

 

 

Thanks Al!  I hope you enjoy!  It's more of a fun story than anything else.  

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7 minutes ago, Cole Matthews said:

It's more of a fun story than anything else.  

Something light to help us recover after the three murders?  ;–)

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