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Scraps from a Diary - 1. Scraps from a Diary, 1 of 3

Scraps from a Diary, 1 of 3

 

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1913

Monday, June 30th

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Famous-on-the-Meramec, near Eureka, Mo.

Dear Diary,

Well, I made it. The train ride from Union Station on the Frisco Line was twenty-six miles as the crow flies. The urban stand of steel mills and automobile factories, with their forest of belching smokestacks, gradually gave way to ever smaller warehouses, then working-class abodes, and finally trees and fields. Soon a bend in the tracks took us deep into the woods and into the picture-perfect community of Webster Groves. My travel companions told me this town was the first 'suburb' in the nation, having been settled in the early 1850s as close enough to downtown to commute by train, but far enough from city noise and grime to make it 'healthy.'

After our stop here, the train moved rather slower. The terrain came right up to the track bed – cliff faces on one side and wide-open vistas of the Meramec River far below us on the other. We ambled along, taking broad curves and passing over fords and creek beds on any number of black-timbered trestles. It was so quiet; when the train rounded some bends, the river surface sparkled in natural sequins, and tranquility seemed to settle in my heart.

My fellow Famousites were in a holiday mood. More than one of them inquired if I had packed lightly. I had indeed, mainly due to the circumstances of living out of a hotel room already, but then again I had also brought a tube of drawings.

We turned inland and small towns rolled by, after we stopped at each. Eventually, the animation of my fellow recreation-seekers jumping up, fetching bags from the luggage racks and shutting away sweaters, books, and uneaten sandwiches still in their wax paper, told me we were near.

"Next one, Miss Barrett!" my coworker from the office informed me. I stood and collected my valise and cardboard container.

Slowly, the train stopped and a flow of cheery Famousites exited.

Once on the platform, the engine whistle blew a farewell, and I looked around. A fifty-foot-long wooden shelter, rather like a cross between an enormous feed shed and a tiny Swiss chalet, had FAMOUS in raised letters on its side. After the caboose cleared this station, the sunlit embankment on the far side appeared to my eyes swaying gently in summer color tangerine-hued daylilies were in full bloom. They climbed the angled slope from the margin of the stony right-of-way to the living wall of forest high above. The color only parted to allow the path from the resort to come down to the tracks.

Here two teams of horses reared tack-laden heads as if to welcome us.

The crowd streamed across the rail line and deposited their baggage on a small farm cart headed by two bay-colored mares before going over the grass and climbing aboard a much larger pony wagon of sorts, one powered by four handsome Clydesdales.

Now my excitement was growing. The previous times I had simply walked the mile and a half to and from the station, but for this weeklong holiday we were bound to arrive in bucolic splendor.

The clippity-clop along the gravel road was again so peaceful. Several times my eyes drifted skywards and became pierced by delicate shards of sunlight through the moving leaves. All was well with me, except perhaps I could have done with a good lunch.

The wagons pulled around to the open area which formed the resort's informal square. From here paths led off to every grouping of outbuildings, the Dance Pavilion, shelter for the tennis courts, Billiards Hall, barns and stables, and of course, the various cabins and lodges.

We disembarked and I was lucky enough to be accommodated in The Clubhouse this time.

I hefted my valise, hiked my linen skirt to ankle-height, and made my way to this pivotal feature of The Farm, right at the heart of the square. From this side the structure resembled a three-hundred-foot long, two-story-high house. The entire ground floor was deeply sheltered by a wraparound porch. Rustic columns, along with 'X' bracing below the handrails, were all done in hand-hewed logs with the bark still in place. The second story windows, with flapping curtains and shades rolled up, looked inviting and cheery between the shingled walls. The same shake tiles carried up to the hipped roof at a shallow, summertime angle.

As I mounted the porch steps, I suddenly remembered the view. The wide double doors were standing fully open, and the central hallway carried my sight through the heart of the building and out the other side. On the river side, the building was three stories high and the veranda was twelve feet off the ground. Below it, terraced lawns were held back by fieldstone walls and offered about five hundred feet of grassy play area before trails narrowed and meandered to the river's edge, about a quarter-mile and thee hundred feet lower than The Clubhouse. The verandas on the Meramec side provided some of the best views any resort-goer could dare to dream of.

"Ah, Miss Barrett!"

Startled, as I could barely see in the nether-light caused by moving abruptly from sharp sun to indoor darkness, it took me a moment to recognize who was speaking: Mr. McIntire.

I barely prevented myself from blurting out a holiday-mood-moment of crushing upset. 'What are you doing here' would have indeed perturbed the man.

Instead of saying anything, I watched him guide the young woman at his side to step forward with him.

"Miss Barrett, this is my wife Constance. Dear, this is Miss Winifred Barrett, our Integration Consultant from Pittsburgh."

"Ah, Mrs. McIntire. How do you do?"

I shuffled my bag and extended a hand.

The tall, dark-haired woman glanced at it in a way that reminded me I had been traveling most of the morning; I suppose it was a bit dusty.

"Fine, thank you." She attempted an appallingly halfhearted grin, and gripped my hand with two fingers before wiggling it briefly. Despite this lackluster engagement of physical contact, or perhaps because of it, I could only keep my attention on the unpleasant scowl on her face.

'What a fine pair,' I thought to myself with a brief glance at her Mister.

"Bauer is with us too, Miss Barrett."

McIntire's bright statement knocked me out of my reverie, and my eyes followed his hand gesture.

Eight-year-old Arnold Bauer stood on the river-side veranda with his back to us. He was attired in a new linen suit with short pants, and had one foot propped up on an 'X' brace. He was leaning forward and apparently staring out at the Meramec and trees.

Mr. McIntire continued, "We were just stepping out, to stroll down to the water's edge for our first look, as neither my wife nor the boy have been here before. Isn't that right, Constance?"

The woman was anything but demure. "Yes, dear."

In any event, Mr. McIntire looked pleased with himself.

"Well then, I won't keep you." I hinted with a smile, "Perhaps we can dine together this evening."

Constance was already threading her arm through her man's and leading him away. "Perhaps," she said with oily ease.

Mr. McIntire raised the straw hat in his hand to tip it at me, then both turned backs and walked away.

I watched for a moment longer and felt my heart surge. McIntire patted the boy's back while saying something, and Bauer craned his neck to find me. He grinned and waved, which I returned, but when he motioned to come say hello properly, Constance McIntire turned the lad's shoulders roughly and started marching their little troupe towards the steps leading to the river path.

A short time later, I was standing in my room and had unpacked. I wandered to my window, which likewise peered down to the shimmering water, and sighed. All my appetite had gone.

I went to my bed, fell upon it, and cried myself into a fitful nap.

 

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I am out of likes. Drat. This looks like an intriguing tale, and I am already interested to see what all the characters are going to do on their holiday. Love the descriptions of the travel by train.

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AC, I loved it. But as I started reading I felt something. To me your writing is like coming home...its open arms and a comfy chair... I just wanted to say Ahhhh. I know that sounds nuts but it's been a while since I've read anything of our and well, no writes like you do, AC. No one. I'm so ready to read more! And I am out of likes too, but I will be back with some... tim

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Love that it's set in 1913...
'twenty-six miles as the crow flies.' Love these gems....
Interesting mix of characters... Can't wait for their story.
Im so looking forward to reading this AC.. Bring the magic...

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On 05/19/2016 07:07 AM, Parker Owens said:

I am out of likes. Drat. This looks like an intriguing tale, and I am already interested to see what all the characters are going to do on their holiday. Love the descriptions of the travel by train.

Thanks, Parker. I know this posting is a bit unusual, but these 'Scraps' from an entire chapter from a novella I have recently put to bed. I liked it so much I wanted to share it as an extended preview. I hope you like the other two installments as well.

 

I want to post a few choice pictures showing the environment Wini is in. I think I'll place them in the forum, and post a link in my status update.

 

Thank you!

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On 05/19/2016 08:17 AM, Mikiesboy said:

AC, I loved it. But as I started reading I felt something. To me your writing is like coming home...its open arms and a comfy chair... I just wanted to say Ahhhh. I know that sounds nuts but it's been a while since I've read anything of our and well, no writes like you do, AC. No one. I'm so ready to read more! And I am out of likes too, but I will be back with some... tim

Ah, Tim – that's nice. Great feedback you offer me, so thanks and a hug :glomp:

 

Stay tuned for the other two sections, and maybe we'll figure out why Wini was so upset at the end of this first one.

 

Cheers!

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On 05/19/2016 08:25 AM, Defiance19 said:

Love that it's set in 1913...

'twenty-six miles as the crow flies.' Love these gems....

Interesting mix of characters... Can't wait for their story.

Im so looking forward to reading this AC.. Bring the magic...

Thanks, Def! I'm not sure if you mean 1913 specifically is interesting, or that you like a nice historical piece (think Downton Abbey…? Lol).

 

I'll try to bring the magic, and I do think this particular chapter is pretty magical.

 

Thank you for your great review!

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Once again, you've transported us to a different time. It feels like we are there. We are familiar with the subject matter, yet wonder what's next. The characters change, but the arena feels safe. It's time to explore what things were like back then. What a fantastic chapter to introduce us. Mr. Benus, I cannot wait. :).
That being said, why is she crying, breaking down? We also wonder what changed now? There is a kind of posing and framing which beckons. We think we know what the Famousites might be, but do we? I am excited at the prospects. I also worry.

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An absolutely charming 'scrap'. You paint a picture with your words and put us
right into that unique and special moment in America just before The Great War.
Part of my father's family came from that part of the country and so it has a certain
familiarity to me. I have numerous old cabinet photos from that time and place
and having seen them, I can picture this time and place clearly. Southwest Missouri
and adjacent Arkansas were quite popular vacation areas in the US at that time.
So now I'm curious to find out what Winifred's story is, and why she's crying in her
hotel room so soon after arriving there.

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We're in for a treat again, judging by the glimps we are offered here. Like tim, I feel right at home with the atmosphere created in the diary entry. As ever, great attention to detail.
Strange how long forgotten stories can resurface from a part of your brain by a few words.
This occured here to me when Mrs. McIntire meets Miss Barret. The way Mrs. McIntire offers two fingers in greeting reminded me of tales of my grandmother, who was a teenager in 1913, relating that you didn't merely shook hands when greeting a person, but had to judge their standing at the same time. The less number of fingers you offered, the more inferior you estimated the one you greeted. Two fingers is not much: poor Miss Barret.
Looking forward to more.

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Another intriguing beginning to another curious tale. I am so much looking forward to the treat to come.

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Oh how I wish a place like this existed right now because I'd have my bags packed and be on the next train...the descriptions make it wonderfully inviting.
I thought I had a handle on where this story was headed then there was that sharp right turn at the end. Intrigue and mystery have invaded this bucolic scene. I need to know more and soon please. :)

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On 05/19/2016 01:35 PM, Cole Matthews said:

Once again, you've transported us to a different time. It feels like we are there. We are familiar with the subject matter, yet wonder what's next. The characters change, but the arena feels safe. It's time to explore what things were like back then. What a fantastic chapter to introduce us. Mr. Benus, I cannot wait. :).

That being said, why is she crying, breaking down? We also wonder what changed now? There is a kind of posing and framing which beckons. We think we know what the Famousites might be, but do we? I am excited at the prospects. I also worry.

Thanks for an awesome review, Cole. Wini wanted to get away for a few days…maybe to stop thinking about…but something happened in The Clubhouse to bring her back to reality. Question remains what.

 

Please stay tuned and cheers for your review and support :)

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On 05/19/2016 10:04 PM, Stephen said:

An absolutely charming 'scrap'. You paint a picture with your words and put us

right into that unique and special moment in America just before The Great War.

Part of my father's family came from that part of the country and so it has a certain

familiarity to me. I have numerous old cabinet photos from that time and place

and having seen them, I can picture this time and place clearly. Southwest Missouri

and adjacent Arkansas were quite popular vacation areas in the US at that time.

So now I'm curious to find out what Winifred's story is, and why she's crying in her

hotel room so soon after arriving there.

Thank you, Stephen! I always treasure feedback from you, as you were the very first one on GA to encourage me. These scenes at the resort were inspired by company pictures of the place published in an employee newsletter. It looks like they had tremendous fun on the Meramec, and indeed, lots of folks like to visit Branson, Missouri, nowadays.

 

Thanks again for your support. I hope you enjoy the other scraps I have planned.

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Wini very quickly became a favorite character for me, because she is curious, clever, and compassionate.
and you already know my opinion of the other 'lady' :rolleyes:;)

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On 05/20/2016 04:41 AM, J.HunterDunn said:

We're in for a treat again, judging by the glimps we are offered here. Like tim, I feel right at home with the atmosphere created in the diary entry. As ever, great attention to detail.

Strange how long forgotten stories can resurface from a part of your brain by a few words.

This occured here to me when Mrs. McIntire meets Miss Barret. The way Mrs. McIntire offers two fingers in greeting reminded me of tales of my grandmother, who was a teenager in 1913, relating that you didn't merely shook hands when greeting a person, but had to judge their standing at the same time. The less number of fingers you offered, the more inferior you estimated the one you greeted. Two fingers is not much: poor Miss Barret.

Looking forward to more.

Thank you, Peter! You always leave wonderful reviews, and it's a treasure to have them on GA.

 

I can only claim 'idiot savant' status for the finger thing, but it did seem to my mind Constance McIntire would not look too highly on Miss Barrett. In the next Scrap we will learn about more on the Missus' view of Winifred.

 

Thanks again for a great review. I appreciate it. :)

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On 05/20/2016 05:52 AM, dughlas said:

Another intriguing beginning to another curious tale. I am so much looking forward to the treat to come.

Thank you for reading the chapter, Dugh, and for your fine review : )

 

I hope you will enjoy the other Scraps and be eager for the whole novella when it's posted later on in the year.

 

Thanks again!

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On 05/20/2016 10:00 AM, Reader1810 said:

Oh how I wish a place like this existed right now because I'd have my bags packed and be on the next train...the descriptions make it wonderfully inviting.

I thought I had a handle on where this story was headed then there was that sharp right turn at the end. Intrigue and mystery have invaded this bucolic scene. I need to know more and soon please. :)

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On 05/21/2016 03:23 AM, Timothy M. said:

Wini very quickly became a favorite character for me, because she is curious, clever, and compassionate.

and you already know my opinion of the other 'lady' :rolleyes:;)

(First of all, Sorry Reader! – I went to paste my reply and hit the 'post' button while it was still blank :blushing: )

 

Thank you, Tim, for all of your support and fine insight as editor and beta-reader. This may seem an odd way to preview this novella (being chapter 6 as it is!), but I thought it was strong enough to stand on its own.

 

I like your description of Wini – reminds me of very fine writer I know who has a pair of American twins waiting patiently for us in Denmark.

 

Thanks again!

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Okay, I was confused at first, not knowing how this fit into anything...the name of the resort got me wondering if this is part of the Christmas at F-B series...but it doesn't seem to be the right season. :)
With the other reviews, I know it is, so now I'm chomping at the bit to get the whole story...you're evil for teasing us this way, my friend! :)
With it being hard for me to follow discussion groups now, I've missed out on any background info...I had sort of thought the 1945 novella would be next. This one is perfectly fine since I can picture it so well, based on old pics of my father's family--all from the turn of the century or earlier since he was born in 1918. Lots of nostalgia potential for my mind. One of the better pieces I wrote back in college, which got me off of trying cheesy sci-fi, was set in my dad's childhood on the family farm...my professor said I had a real knack for period pieces, but I got out of the writing habit for more than ten years, being busy moving, working and having my parents divorce while I was still in college.
I'm going to love this when it comes out--how soon, huh?

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On 05/23/2016 10:37 PM, ColumbusGuy said:

Okay, I was confused at first, not knowing how this fit into anything...the name of the resort got me wondering if this is part of the Christmas at F-B series...but it doesn't seem to be the right season. :)

With the other reviews, I know it is, so now I'm chomping at the bit to get the whole story...you're evil for teasing us this way, my friend! :)

With it being hard for me to follow discussion groups now, I've missed out on any background info...I had sort of thought the 1945 novella would be next. This one is perfectly fine since I can picture it so well, based on old pics of my father's family--all from the turn of the century or earlier since he was born in 1918. Lots of nostalgia potential for my mind. One of the better pieces I wrote back in college, which got me off of trying cheesy sci-fi, was set in my dad's childhood on the family farm...my professor said I had a real knack for period pieces, but I got out of the writing habit for more than ten years, being busy moving, working and having my parents divorce while I was still in college.

I'm going to love this when it comes out--how soon, huh?

I know it's unusual, but I thought this chapter could stand on its own. The only real piece of intelligence that may not be clear to the reader concerns who Bauer is. He's an orphan who was removed from school, and Mr. McIntire signed for him as a sort of work-release program. The child now spends his days on the loading docks doing odd jobs. The final installment of the Scraps will have more about why the man did this.

 

Thanks for a great review, ColumbusGuy. I hope to post the entire series on time.

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Yes, AC, I did like this chapter! :) I haven't been on here much lately :( , and I didn't even realize you had another story out. But these are characters from another story? Which one?

 

I'm intrigued already. Why is Wini crying? Why is Constance such a beyotch? What's with the boy?

 

Ok, on to the next chapter. :)

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On 06/07/2016 10:38 AM, Lisa said:

Yes, AC, I did like this chapter! :) I haven't been on here much lately :( , and I didn't even realize you had another story out. But these are characters from another story? Which one?

 

I'm intrigued already. Why is Wini crying? Why is Constance such a beyotch? What's with the boy?

 

Ok, on to the next chapter. :)

LISA! Hi, and lov ya! It's great you read these Scraps. These three segments are an extended preview of a novella I will begin to post soon. You ask many good questions…but…you might have to wait and see. Wouldn't want to rain on anyone's parade, especially not my own ;)

 

Thanks for a great review!

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This is an interesting start. The resort sounds absolutely lovely, and clydesdales are my favorite breed of horse :) I wondered about the dynamic between the frosty boss's wife and Wini. And why Wini was crying at the end. I thought the boy was their son, but from what I read in your response to another review, he's an orphan they took in? I guess I'll find out more as I read on. :)

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On 06/09/2016 01:24 PM, Valkyrie said:

This is an interesting start. The resort sounds absolutely lovely, and clydesdales are my favorite breed of horse :) I wondered about the dynamic between the frosty boss's wife and Wini. And why Wini was crying at the end. I thought the boy was their son, but from what I read in your response to another review, he's an orphan they took in? I guess I'll find out more as I read on. :)

Thanks for a great review, Val. Bauer is an orphan who has been withdrawn from classes as 'un-teachable.' Mr. McIntire has signed him out on a sort of work-release program, and employs him in his shipping department.

 

I was a bit startled to read about child labor laws in the U.S. and how it took the New Deal to (mostly) end them (except for farm labor, where kids are still employed today, sadly).

 

Thank you once again!

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"I went to my bed, fell upon it, and cried myself into a fitful nap"

 

Familiar...This was an interesting time travel to say the least.
Off to the next one. :)

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