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The Mock Orange Shrub

   (6 reviews)
Genres: General Fiction
Sub-genres: Drama, Prompt, Family Drama
A backyard with a gate and several shrubs during autumn.

Dalit's wife was welcome to the house. But as the one who planted and cared for their backyard shrubs, Dalit got to decide where they went—and that included the precious Mock Orange shrub they loved so much. 

Prompt 381 – Challenge
Tag – Uncomfortable situation
Every writer has a time where they need to create a scene around something uncomfortable. This can be someone being fired, a death in the family, or breakup. Your challenge is to create such a scene and include as much detail as you can. What is the setting? What can we see or hear? Is the person sweating or can we smell antiseptic? Involve as many of the senses as you can in your scene and bring it to life.
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Story Recommendations (8 members)

  • Action Packed 0
  • Addictive/Pacing 0
  • Characters 8
  • Chills 3
  • Cliffhanger 0
  • Compelling 6
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 0
  • Tearjerker 6
  • Unique 4
  • World Building 0

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kbois

   4 of 4 members found this review helpful 4 / 4 members

@BendtedWreath grabbed his prompt with both hands and ran with it. 

The prompt wanted details.... you got them. This was very well written and invokes imagery with every paragraph. 

You can easily imagine yourself in Dalit's shoes as he deals with the end of a relationship and the reason behind it. 

Well worth reading. Kudos!

Response from the author:

😭 I'm so relieved it read decently! Thank you.

 

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E K Stokes

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

A voyage through the consequences of a devastating event whose impact is evoked by the author with a sublime passion eloquently described.

Response from the author:

I'm floored by your words, as I'd never describe anything I made that way. I look forward to reading more of your work, as well!

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