To Sammy With Love

Before I selected the five stars, I asked myself, "what was wrong with this story"? I thought, maybe the homophobes and the ex wife could be punished somehow. But, I figured it was actually more realistic, ending as it did. I thought about the flow. It was smooth. The dialogue was somewhat foreign, but still easily understood. The characters were realistic and relatable. There were several surprises along the way. This was definitely... I can't remember the word for when a play features several actors without having a single lead actor. I am sure I will the word will come to me and I will mentally kick myself, but I will not come back to edit this just to add that word. I think "ensemble cast" is the  phrase I seek.

I also felt such a kinship with Peter. Married with children and all those complications. My own experiences left me with the solid hope that he will find his way. 

I am not sure this review is what GA really expected. But, yours was a great story and I am eager to read more of your work.

Thanks for sharing,

Jim