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    Parker Owens
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Cider Press - 9. Predator

Hunting happens everywhere...this one is full of heat, so be warned.

Predator

I crouch, a hungry feral beast,
before me lies a scrumptious feast,
for you are splayed upon the bed,
so fair, my breath has almost ceased.

I pounce upon you to be fed,
it's for your flesh my lips were bred
and for your most exquisite taste,
my tongue between your hills is led.

I cannot dine at all in haste,
to hurry so would be a waste
of your involuntary groan
with which your room is loudly graced.

Your pleasure is the best I've known;
it will my every sin atone
until my fullness is released,
and I upon your body prone.

Comments or reflections are valued and appreciated. Thanks for anything you might want to say.
Copyright © 2017 Parker Owens; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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42 minutes ago, Valkyrie said:

*fans self*  I think I need a cold shower now... this belongs in your spice rack with the ghost peppers, Chef.  ;)  Predator, indeed.  Is it wrong that I want to let out a loud growl right now?  :gikkle: 

 

Not in the Spice Rack because it’s not a cinquain. But you can tell it was written around the same time...Go ahead and growl! Thanks for reading!

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On 12/2/2017 at 12:23 PM, BlindAmbition said:

Dayum Parker! Intelligent, beautiful with words, and an animalistic and hungry predator. That’s certainly the whole package. Very, very sexy poem. 

 

And while you may not see it, I’m blushing, too. But that’s because of your very kind words. I know it was kind of heated, but somehow it felt right.  Thank you for commenting on this.

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5 minutes ago, northie said:

Quite apart from echoing what everyone else has said, I love the way that the first 3 stanzas start with 'I', the 4th 'Your' as the emphasis shifts from the predator to the prey .... Wonderful, so sensual.

 

Thank you for picking up on that detail. For that reason, the whole mood and color of the last stanza changes, and with it, the tenor of the poem...at least that was the idea. I am so glad you liked this. 

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