Ties That Bind 1. Ties That Bind

Conner · March 1, 2012

WOW!! That was excellent. It flows so beautifully. The way it builds and builds was breathtaking. I couldn't wait to get to the next sentence. The sentiments expressed simply enveloped me.

Great work!

Kiltie69 · March 1, 2012

Well what can I say. It was four....and woof.

Rebelghost85 · March 1, 2012

Really awesome. I loved your first work and this story looks like it will be amazing. Thank you.

Jasper · March 1, 2012

Hey that was great. I love how sincere and earnest it was, you really got the emotions down perfectly. Can't wait for more

JOeKEool · March 2, 2012

SoullessCynner · March 3, 2012

This story was breathtaking in it's beauty. You really captured the emotions,and... It was just beautiful.I was actually teary-eyed there at the end. I wish they had a 5 thumbs up emoticon. will just have to do.

Roan · March 5, 2012

On 03/04/2012 01:24 AM, SoullessCynner said:

This story was breathtaking in it's beauty. You really captured the emotions,and... It was just beautiful.I was actually teary-eyed there at the end. I wish they had a 5 thumbs up emoticon. will just have to do.

Thanks SC. Im glad you liked it, I wanted to start off with something that made you want to know the characters and their journey, hopefully it succeeded for you

Roan · March 5, 2012

On 03/02/2012 12:07 PM, JOeKEool said:

heh thanks Joe. I know what you feel, though you couldnt find the words to say. I get that way with my characters sometimes, I get a surge of emotion but it feels like ashes on the screen.

Roan · March 5, 2012

On 03/02/2012 05:38 AM, Jasper said:

Hey that was great. I love how sincere and earnest it was, you really got the emotions down perfectly. Can't wait for more

Thanks Jasper. Well the emotions and the physcality will continue, though not always at the same time and at this pitch. I hope you like following their journey on the way.

Roan · March 5, 2012

On 03/02/2012 05:11 AM, Rebelghost85 said:

Really awesome. I loved your first work and this story looks like it will be amazing. Thank you.

Thanks Rebel. Im glad you like my work, I am really still vry uncertain as this is new to me, so its great to know tat it hits the mark for some people and I am on the right track

Roan · March 5, 2012

On 03/02/2012 04:41 AM, Kiltie69 said:

Well what can I say. It was four....and woof.

heh heh glad for that Tom.

I guess here I was trying to start with a love scene but with the emotions underpinning it that would drive the story later. Hopefully they remain as exctiting as well as developing as characters.

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