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Nemesis: Because I Want You - 19. Epilogue: Bright Lights

No one can take it away from me. No one can tear it apart. It may be an elaborate fantasy, but it's the perfect place to start. Because a heart that hurts is a heart that works.

EPILOGUE

Bright Lights

 

Nick stuck his head out the bathroom door. ‘Mel!’ he called down the corridor. ‘Where’s your eyeliner? The black one?’

‘Why d’you want to know?’ Mel called back.

He stepped back inside. ‘Need to borrow it.’ Nick poked through the medicine cabinet. Mascara, lip gloss, three shades of eyeshadow, hand cream . . . but no eyeliner.

‘What’s in it for me, then?’ said a voice behind him, and he turned around a little guiltily. Mel stood in the doorway, arms crossed, leaning on the doorframe. Her dyed brown hair was tied back in a ponytail and one eyebrow was raised above the rim of her glasses.

‘Oh, come on, please?’ Nick begged, folding his hands before him. ‘Just need it for the gig tonight!’

‘And I repeat, what’s in it for me?’

Nick rolled his eyes and sighed. ‘Yes, you can borrow my leather jacket for your next date with Brendan,’ he said.

‘Thank you!’ Mel squealed and hugged him. ‘Eyeliner’s in my room, top of the dresser. You know, you really should get your own. Not sanitary, sharing eyeliners.’

Nick shrugged. ‘I only ever wear it for gigs.’

‘Yeah, and you keep getting more of those, so just buy your own bloody make-up, won’t you?’ Mel laughed. Nick stepped out of the bathroom and Mel followed him down the corridor towards her room. ‘When’s Dave coming home?’ she asked.

‘He’s at the library, studying,’ said Nick. He entered Mel’s room and found the kohl pencil on the dresser. ‘He’ll meet up with us at the Students’ Union tonight.’ He turned to the mirror on the wall and applied the eyeliner around his eyes, smudging it slightly. ‘How’s that?’

‘When did you get so vain?’ asked Mel with a giggle.

‘The life of a rock star is one of vanity, narcissism and plain arrogance, my dear Melanie,’ said Nick, examining his reflection. ‘Ow!’ he squeaked as Mel slapped his arm. Then he grinned at her. ‘Cheers for the eyeliner. Will I see you tonight, and is Brendan coming?’

‘Stop saying his name like that!’

‘Like what?’

‘With that . . . tone. Brendan.’ She blushed.

‘But you’re so cute when you’re in love!’ said Nick with a smile.

Mel rolled her eyes. ‘Yes, we’ll both be there. Now, get out of here! Go soundcheck!’

‘Yes, ma’am,’ said Nick seriously. He kissed her forehead. ‘See you tonight!’

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Dave glanced at his watch and closed his anatomy textbook. He brushed a strand of blonde hair from his forehead and stood up, placing his books and notes into his bag. He wanted to get to the Students’ Union in good time before the gig.

The walk from the library to the Students’ Union was very short. Dave made his way down into the basement of the building, which was where the club was located.

Nick was up on the stage when he got there, his white Telecaster strapped on, playing a riff. He wore tight, grey jeans and a loose, light blue t-shirt. His brown hair was styled in a messy I-just-rolled-out-of-bed do, and his eyes were heavily lined with kohl. He looked every bit the rock star he was becoming.

‘Could I have a little less reverb in the monitor, please?’ he said into the microphone. Then he saw Dave and smiled, giving him a little wave.

‘Some vocals next,’ said the sound tech, and Nick sang a couple of lines from one of his songs. His voice seemed to go straight to Dave’s heart, or perhaps his groin, and Dave smiled. Nick on stage was like Nick in private—confident, charismatic and flirtatious. So very different from the quiet introvert he normally was in public.

‘Have you got what you need?’ Nick asked when he’d finished the chorus, and the sound tech gave him the thumbs up. He pulled the guitar over his head and set it in a stand on stage, then jumped down and ran towards Dave.

‘Hello, Gorgeous! You’re early,’ he said, wrapping his arms around him.

‘Wanted to see you before the gig,’ said Dave. He took a deep breath. Even now, Nick’s scent made him feel lightheaded. ‘Still can’t believe you guys are playing a gig here.’

‘It’s not that big,’ said Nick. ‘We’ve played big venues before. It’s no big deal.’

He sounded like he was really trying to convince himself of that. His voice was slightly shaky.

Dave took Nick’s face in his hands and kissed him. ‘You’ll be amazing,’ he said. ‘I know you will.’

Nick smiled at him and kissed him back, pulling him closer. Dave put his arms about Nick’s waist.

‘Are Mellie and Brendan gonna be here tonight?’ asked Dave when they parted again.

‘Yeah, she said they would,’ said Nick. ‘And she took the Diesel jacket hostage for her eyeliner, too.’ He rolled his eyes.

‘You’re just jealous because that thing looks so good on her,’ said Dave with a smirk. Then he leaned in close and whispered, ‘Of course, it looks even better on you, and so does the guyliner…’

‘Nick!’ Matt called from over by the stage. Then he spotted Dave and waved. ‘Oh, hi, Dave. We need to borrow Nick for the full band soundcheck now.’

‘I’ll be right there!’ Nick called back. ‘Duty calls,’ he said, turning back to his boyfriend. ‘I’ll see you in a bit, okay?’

‘Yeah,’ said Dave, releasing him reluctantly. ‘Go. Do your thing.’

Nick just stood there for a moment, head cocked slightly to one side and hand on his hip.

‘What?’ said Dave.

‘Nothing,’ Nick replied. ‘Just . . . four years. It’s a long time.’

Dave nodded. ‘It is,’ he said. ‘I can’t wait to get you out of here and back home tonight,’ he added softly, unable to help himself. ‘You look so fucking hot like this.’ He smiled happily at the way he could still make Nick blush by complimenting him. ‘Now, get your sexy arse up on that stage before I tear all your clothes off!’

Nick smirked and looked him square in the eye. ‘That a promise, Thompson?’

‘It’s a guarantee, Davis.’

 

END

Lyrics from Bright Lights are © Placebo.
Well, that's all folks. Or, almost, anyway. The short story collection Hubris, about the story's supporting characters and antagonists, is in the works, with two completed stories that will be up soonish and more to come. I also intend to start plotting the sequel very soon, though you might have to wait a while for that. After all, this novel was ten years in the making. Hopefully the sequel won't take quite as long.
Epic thanks to everyone who's read, commented, given me their (sometimes very) honest opinions, encouragements and love, and to everyone who's welcomed me to the GA community with open arms. You are absolute stars! I love all of you.
Copyright © 2013-2019 Thorn Wilde; All Rights Reserved.
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Stories posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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Playlist (YouTube)     Playlist (YouTube)     Playlist (YouTube)     Alan Matt Craig           Hubris reading order: Alan - after the final chapter of Nemesis: Because I Want You. Matt - between chapters 4 and 5 of Nemesis: Soulmates Never Die. Craig - after chapter 8 of Nemesis: Soulmates Never Die. Alan & Matt - after the final chapter of Nemesis: Soulmates Never Die. Patrick
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When a story you like comes to an end, it feels good and sad at the same time. It's good because you now know all that happened to the characters you came to love and sad because you know it will be the last you hear of them. Still, to put in a cliché: "All good things must come to an end" and "Nemesis" was definately a good thing. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to read another story by your hand sometime soon.

 

Cheers!

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On 05/15/2013 08:30 AM, Phoenix1977 said:
When a story you like comes to an end, it feels good and sad at the same time. It's good because you now know all that happened to the characters you came to love and sad because you know it will be the last you hear of them. Still, to put in a cliché: "All good things must come to an end" and "Nemesis" was definately a good thing. Thanks for sharing this story with us and hope to read another story by your hand sometime soon.

 

Cheers!

Thank you so much for sticking with the story! I'm so happy that you've enjoyed it so much, and that you seem pleased with the ending, however bittersweet. :)
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I'm sorry to see the end of this story, but what a story. Nick went thru so many trials but he stayed the same shy, quiet but very compassionate. I think Dave is the one that changed so much, grew so much that he didn't even resemble the boy in chapter one by the end of the story. Amazing what love can do eh?

Looking forward to Hubris when it comes out. Want go see what hpened to Craig, Dave, Matt and Mel. Maybe a bit of a peak at Nicks mom too. And sequels are always worth waiting for.....maybe not ten years lmao

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I really enjoyed this story and looked for updates every day, happy when I saw them. The characters were really well-developed. Even the minor characters were developed and that is why I am sure we all will be interested in seeing their stories. I'm interested in both Matt's story, b/c I want him to find someone of his own, but also Alan's b/c it will be really interesting to see how he goes from such self-denial to finding any sort of peace within before he comes to accept himself.

The only thing I would note is that the chapter before the epilogue felt a bit rushed or less developed than the rest of the story. I felt that the way his father accepted the reality of his son coming out suddenly didn't feel right. Especially, given it was with Nick who there seemed to be such strong feelings against. A small part of me also would have liked to see some of their relationship after the coming out...even if it was just an overview of how it was when he came out, since his not doing so hung over them and stopped their relationship from progressing throughout the entire story.

It was nice to have the epilogue, which showed Matt not going back to where he was from which was sweet. Also, seeing Nick come out of his shell during the time that passed was great, b/c he'd not have been in a band at the point the story ended. It was nice to see they weathered the storm.

Looking forward to more

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An excellent job! I enjoyed taking this journey with you and seeing the characters develop. I'll make sure that I keep an eye open for the supporting character stories and the sequel. Thank-you for sharing with us B)

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On 05/15/2013 12:47 PM, Daithi said:
I'm sorry to see the end of this story, but what a story. Nick went thru so many trials but he stayed the same shy, quiet but very compassionate. I think Dave is the one that changed so much, grew so much that he didn't even resemble the boy in chapter one by the end of the story. Amazing what love can do eh?

Looking forward to Hubris when it comes out. Want go see what hpened to Craig, Dave, Matt and Mel. Maybe a bit of a peak at Nicks mom too. And sequels are always worth waiting for.....maybe not ten years lmao

I'll try not to make you wait that long. Lol! i'm so glad you've enjoyed the story. This world is my baby and I intend to nurture it. :)

 

Thanks for sticking with it and being a star!

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On 05/15/2013 07:12 PM, Cannd said:
I really enjoyed this story and looked for updates every day, happy when I saw them. The characters were really well-developed. Even the minor characters were developed and that is why I am sure we all will be interested in seeing their stories. I'm interested in both Matt's story, b/c I want him to find someone of his own, but also Alan's b/c it will be really interesting to see how he goes from such self-denial to finding any sort of peace within before he comes to accept himself.

The only thing I would note is that the chapter before the epilogue felt a bit rushed or less developed than the rest of the story. I felt that the way his father accepted the reality of his son coming out suddenly didn't feel right. Especially, given it was with Nick who there seemed to be such strong feelings against. A small part of me also would have liked to see some of their relationship after the coming out...even if it was just an overview of how it was when he came out, since his not doing so hung over them and stopped their relationship from progressing throughout the entire story.

It was nice to have the epilogue, which showed Matt not going back to where he was from which was sweet. Also, seeing Nick come out of his shell during the time that passed was great, b/c he'd not have been in a band at the point the story ended. It was nice to see they weathered the storm.

Looking forward to more

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Thank you so much! Alan's and Matt's stories are the ones that are finished, so you'll get your wish fairly soon. :)

 

I think Dave's father was forced to weigh the shame of having a gay son against the shame of disowning said son. He in no way accepted the relationship, he just realised there was nothing he could do about it. Disowning or kicking his son out would have resulted in further scandal, not to mention that he only has the one child and heir. He did the math and grudgingly made a deal with Dave.

 

Writing the epilogue was a lot of fun. Makes me a little sad that I have no plans of writing about their time in Manchester in detail. Part of the reason for that is I really don't know Manchester well enough to place a full length novel there, only been there once.

 

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments! :)

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On 05/16/2013 01:13 AM, CW Prince said:
An excellent job! I enjoyed taking this journey with you and seeing the characters develop. I'll make sure that I keep an eye open for the supporting character stories and the sequel. Thank-you for sharing with us B)
Thank you for reading and leaving your comments! It's been a pleasure. :)
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I am so very sad to see the story come to an end, but I'm thrilled you'll be doing a sequel and a new story w/the minor (and not so minor) characters.

 

I'm curious to see how Nick's mom is doing. Love the fact that Nick's in a band, that's totally awesome! What is Dave doing though? What was he studying? I'm glad Matt's still there and they're all friends. And of course Mel has a b/f now and that's great.

 

I will miss reading about these guys, but I look forward to reading what you're working on now. :)

 

Oh, I ran out of "likes" otherwise I would have "liked" the rest of the chapters I just read.

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Firmly, one of my favourite stories on this site, and by far one of the very best Gay Fiction stories I've read in a long time.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful adventure with us.

Your story telling ability is masterful, and I so look forward to the spin off stories that come out of this.

With anticipation I must tell you! :)

Well done on a marvellous work of fiction bud. This is the way writing should be done, and along the way, you might please some of the people some of the time, and some of the others, at other times, but it is nigh on impossible to please everyone all of the time, so well done. I think you produced a remarkably balanced and sound tale of two lads coming to terms with the complexity of sexuality and its impact on our lives.

Furthermore, I think you do yourself great justice in your humble and genuine response to your readers.

I am so very glad I came across your work.

:)

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On 05/20/2013 10:47 AM, Lisa said:
I am so very sad to see the story come to an end, but I'm thrilled you'll be doing a sequel and a new story w/the minor (and not so minor) characters.

 

I'm curious to see how Nick's mom is doing. Love the fact that Nick's in a band, that's totally awesome! What is Dave doing though? What was he studying? I'm glad Matt's still there and they're all friends. And of course Mel has a b/f now and that's great.

 

I will miss reading about these guys, but I look forward to reading what you're working on now. :)

 

Oh, I ran out of "likes" otherwise I would have "liked" the rest of the chapters I just read.

The first Hubris story was just posted, actually. ;) Thank you so much for coming on this journey with me and sticking with the story until the end! I am so, so happy that you've enjoyed it this much! You're a star! <3
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On 05/21/2013 02:45 AM, Yettie One said:
Firmly, one of my favourite stories on this site, and by far one of the very best Gay Fiction stories I've read in a long time.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful adventure with us.

Your story telling ability is masterful, and I so look forward to the spin off stories that come out of this.

With anticipation I must tell you! :)

Well done on a marvellous work of fiction bud. This is the way writing should be done, and along the way, you might please some of the people some of the time, and some of the others, at other times, but it is nigh on impossible to please everyone all of the time, so well done. I think you produced a remarkably balanced and sound tale of two lads coming to terms with the complexity of sexuality and its impact on our lives.

Furthermore, I think you do yourself great justice in your humble and genuine response to your readers.

I am so very glad I came across your work.

:)

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this story! I am honoured and humbled that you've had so many kind words for me, and overjoyed that you've enjoyed it this much. It makes me ridiculously happy to know that people read and enjoy what I write. This story was a long time in the making, and it feels so good that it's faced the success it has.

 

I just posted the first Hubris story today, if you're interested. Alan's story. :)

 

Thank you, once again, for leaving so many fantastic reviews. You're an absolute star!

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Very easy, enjoyable reading. I wasn't all that keen on trying another teen episode, but you did this well and kept me reading right to the end. So I have to say it was a good read. Thanks. I liked the English setting and nuance - so refreshing after so much American stuff.

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On 08/31/2013 11:12 PM, Jaro_423 said:
Very easy, enjoyable reading. I wasn't all that keen on trying another teen episode, but you did this well and kept me reading right to the end. So I have to say it was a good read. Thanks. I liked the English setting and nuance - so refreshing after so much American stuff.
Thank you! :) Makes me happy to know that people are still reading this. I'm really very happy that you enjoyed it!
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I absolutely loved this story, loved all the Englishness, loved your writing style, loved the characters (most of them anyway). I better go and see what else there is about them all. Thank you for this wonderful story :)

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On 12/22/2013 10:05 PM, Suvitar said:
I absolutely loved this story, loved all the Englishness, loved your writing style, loved the characters (most of them anyway). I better go and see what else there is about them all. Thank you for this wonderful story :)
Thank you!! Thank for for reviewing every chapter, that means so much to me, and thank you for thoughtful comments. It's always so awesome to follow a person as they read one of my stories for the first time, so thank you epically for being an awesome reader, an encouraging reviewer and an over all fantastic person. :)
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I started to read book 2 and then decide to read nemesis and realy pleased I did its a great story and I thought you dealt witth the situation with Craig and Nick realy well . I also like the way Dave and Nick have eyes for each other even though they both had a chance with Matt And Nick with Andy lt makes a change from most stories where the boys always want to have sex with lots of different boys , also the situation with Dave and his father it makes a change Dave didn't get thrown out of the house. And what a great friend Matts turnd out to be . It's the first story I have read of yours and I will definitely be reading more

Thanks for sharing it with us

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On 12/22/2013 11:40 PM, paul.b said:
I started to read book 2 and then decide to read nemesis and realy pleased I did its a great story and I thought you dealt witth the situation with Craig and Nick realy well . I also like the way Dave and Nick have eyes for each other even though they both had a chance with Matt And Nick with Andy lt makes a change from most stories where the boys always want to have sex with lots of different boys , also the situation with Dave and his father it makes a change Dave didn't get thrown out of the house. And what a great friend Matts turnd out to be . It's the first story I have read of yours and I will definitely be reading more

Thanks for sharing it with us

Thank you so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so much, and I hope you'll enjoy my other stories as well. Always makes me happy to welcome new readers, so thanks so much! :)
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I just discovered your writing through this fabulous story. Late to the party, I know. This novel portrays the complicated and sometimes tragic reality of life - but with a very sweet romance to soften the edges and lift the spirit. I absolutely loved it, and found Nick's and Dave's loyal devotion to each other deeply reassuring.
I also enjoyed the British setting and unique (for American readers) vocabulary. The escape is nice, especially given our national disaster November 8. :-/
Thank you for sharing you considerable talents with us.

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Absolutely loved it and looking forward to reading the rest of the series. Thanks for sharing.

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On 5/2/2020 at 4:36 PM, Goodie said:

Absolutely loved it and looking forward to reading the rest of the series. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you for reading it! I'm so, so pleased you enjoyed it. ❤️ 

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