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WL's Mainstream Gay Book Reviews - 35. Top Secret by Sarina Bowen and Elle Kennedy
https://www.goodreads.com/en/book/show/45280797
For the End of September, I want to return to the beginning and review a book by the authors the Him Series, Sarina Bowen and Elle Kennedy. They had another joint venture in the same sex male romance fiction area around two fraternity brothers, who fall in love with each other, neither of whom identifies as gay. Technically, you can argue with me that this book technically falls under bisexual fiction with references to heterosexual sex and is outside the criteria of my book reviews. However, it’s a same sex relationship between committed male lovers, so literally it’s homosexual and gay. What they have with each other is what I am reviewing; even if they don’t identify under the same sexual orientation as me.
Length-wise, it is 318 pages long and 9 hours 25 minutes on audible. It is a decent romance novel with moderate to high heat intensity, there’s some angst and some drama towards the end.
Plot: Keaton Hayworth is the star of the College Football team, hugely popular, and has a loving girlfriend of many years. He comes from a wealthy family, which has a long legacy and business interests. He’s in a fraternity, which he is seeking to become President out of a sense of obligation to his friend and his familial reputation. His girlfriend, Annika, wants something special for her birthday, a threesome between her, him, and another man. Keaton goes on a hookup app and meets a stranger to arrange a threesome with his girlfriend, but finds himself aroused by the dirty talk of the anonymous guy from the app. It turns out the other man is Luke Bailey, a scholarship kid in the same fraternity as Keaton, who is also running for President of their fraternity. Luke is seeking the fraternity presidency, because he wanted to the free room that the position has. Luke comes from a poor background and can’t really afford a college education; he’s barely scraping by payments through a combination of thrift and his secret side job as a male stripper. Through a series of unlikely events, close calls, and escalating sexual tensions, Keaton and Luke fall in love with each other. However, trouble looms on the horizon as Keaton’s football friends hate Luke, Keaton is under pressure from his father to succeed as he had at winning Fraternity Presidency, Luke’s felon brother trying to scheme a robbery at their university, and Luke’s secret double life as a stripper. The story has a happily ever after, but there’s a lot of tension built up.
Review: Overall, it’s what you’d expect from a gay romance, but I will have to note that I was sort of disappointed by Sarina Bowen and Elle Kennedy’s effort in this novel. I know they did their best and parts of this novel were really good. The plot was a fun read, there were nice little pieces of humor, and the characters actually had great conversational chemistry through their chats.
In terms of chatting, LobsterShorts and SinnerThree were great alternate internet personas of the main character, I just wish Sarina and Elle pushed forward on that concept deeper as there are millions of people with alternate personas online engaged in same sex relationships, it would have been more creative to explore that angle further. Black Mirror tried to explore a gay online relationship in their Episode “Striking Vipers”, but it didn’t work as well as their lesbian effort in “San Junipero”, there’s a good amount of psychology and depth that could have worked for this story.
I thought Keaton’s character’s awakening to the fact that he only loved Annika, because he felt like he was supposed to, might mean that he’s been repressing his homosexuality for a while. It’s my interpretation and the character doesn’t claim to be gay per se, so I am not going to put a label on him, but I know through the experiences of other older gay men, it’s not that odd to realize what you are “supposed to feel” isn’t what you “actually feel”, when you finally find someone that brings out that part of you.
Luke was a fun bisexual character with a horrible background and secret struggle that I wish he’d share with others far more than he does in the book. He’s working himself to the bone trying to keep his education, his job, and his family from overtaking his life. Sexually, he’s quite confident and I am glad that he is comfortable enough around others, but I never quite felt like his stripping job played as great a role as it could have in the story. In the end, the male stripper angle just felt like a plot device that Sarina and Elle didn’t think completely through. His family issues also felt far too dramatic and abrupt, like he doesn’t need to be part of a vicious cycle. His mother and brother were two-dimensional villains, who I can understand being important for conflict, but did readers need them to be so nasty to Luke.
As you can tell, I’m of 2 minds on this book. Part of me likes it and really enjoyed the concepts that Sarina and Elle identified. The storylines of college kids and fraternity guys especially were fun. The main characters were developed well and they had great initial chemistry. However, I just feel like there was too many plot devices added in: Luke being a stripper, Keaton’s dad possibly hating him for failing, Keaton’s asshole Jock fraternity friends, Luke’s dysfunctional criminal family, and so on. One of the problems, I’ve noticed about good writers, there’s too many ideas working against each other, it was true for Bill Konigsberg as well. That’s why male or female authors of gay fiction really need a good beta reader filter, not just an editor, to help them focus ideas.
My Review: 3.5 out 5, it’s worth a reading, but I would advise readers to not have extremely high expectations for all the plot elements, because many of them go nowhere in the end. It's not horrible, just not as great as HIM. I enjoyed the plots that actually worked and the characters played off each other's needs and desires well. I've seen rave reviews on it and worst reviews, my reaction falls somewhere in the middle.
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Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are based on the authors' lives and experiences and may be changed to protect personal information. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you.
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