She doesn't get it from me...
Okay, so last night, I discovered that my daughter (13yrs, 8th grade) was supposed to have written the rough draft of a story about a painting. And it was due three days ago. Apparently, it had to be between 1500-4000 words, and my daughter was avoiding the assignment because she didn't want to write. Obviously, she doesn't take after me in that respect... (Ask her to read a 300 page book in one night, no problem, but write more than 50 words--like pulling teeth)
So after discovering on the online grading system that she had received a 0 for it, which caused her grade to drop, of course, I sat her down to get to it.
After an hour, she had 288 words. And it was in one huge paragraph. Again, not my child...
It was going to be a long night at this rate.
So, I started offering suggestions, like write out the dialog, describing the setting, or hey, write a flashback there. Of course, being a thirteen year old (teen being the operative word) she didn't want to listen to anything mom might suggest....until a half hour later and she was still at only 327 words.
I ended up sitting with her, talking through how to write dialogue and how she could use the flashback to the relationship she had implied to add so many more words. Thankfully, about 2 hours later, we had reached just over 1500 words, and I told her to get it emailed off to her teacher.
For as much as she reads (and as much opinions as she has to offer her silly parents), you'd think she'd be able to be a little wordy...
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