22 hours ago, Kitt said:

tim can tell you I seldom get poetry. This I understand very well. 

Thank you, Kitt. 

22 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

This moves me, and fills my head with images. Thank you for this. 

Thank you, Parker.

21 hours ago, Emi GS said:

Much appreciated Emi. It's nice to see you.

19 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

Thank you, for sharing your experience with us, Mike. I feel that you did a fantastic job with this, and that it's well crafted. Like Parker said, it brings up many images.

Thank you, A. 

18 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

You may have struggled with this one, Mike, but what you feel in your heart and in your mind comes through loud and clear. You are tim’s boulder, and for that, we are all grateful. 

 

Well done.

Thank you, Reader

17 hours ago, AC Benus said:

...I wish there was a combination of a hug-n-heart 'like' to give this... 

 

❤️ ❤️

Thank you, AC.  And for your assistance also. 

16 hours ago, MacGreg said:

This is a wonderful lyric, Mike. You've expressed the struggle of waiting and wondering about your boy very powerfully here. Strong piece. 

Thanks, Mac. I appreciate your comments.

11 hours ago, Thorn Wilde said:

Very moving. Beautiful. Don't know what else to say.

Thank you, Thorn.  I appreciate it. 

9 hours ago, Wayne Gray said:

Beautiful, heartfelt, intentional and moving.  You did a fantastic job, Mike.  Thank you for sharing how you feel with us.

 

Thanks, Wayne. I appreciate it.