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Featured Story: A Bad Day to be WET


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Another Monday, and another great story to be featured! If you have overeaten ham, turkey, or other holiday weekend fare, then why exercise when you can sit back and read another fascinating story brought to us from our great Story Review Team!

 

 

A Bad Day to be WET
Myr

Reviewer: spikey582
Status: Complete
Word Count: 5,341

For this review, I felt like looking at something a bit different from what I've reviewed in the past. My first love, as far as genre fiction is concerned, has always been sci-fi/fantasy stories, and yet I’ve not read many of the GA offerings in that genre. So, to remedy that I decided to dip into some of the writing of GA’s own Myr.  

In A Bad Day to be WET, we get to experience a day in the life of one Bill Thomas, a test pilot in the Terran Confederation Spaceforce. Bill is a Jumper, one who can sense “jump points” in space time, and psionically “jump” a ship from one point or another. We meet him in the midst of calibrating the navigation system in a prototype bomber spacecraft. Shortly, he is being called away on a priority mission, flying through a hurricane, and transporting civilians through an active war zone.  

What I particularly love about this story is that it feels like an episode of an exciting sci-fi tv show. We get taken for a thrilling ride, and it is so much fun to experience. While this is a short story, that is somewhat episodic in nature, Myr still does an amazing job of developing his main character Bill. Be it through his daring flight skills, his forthright banter, or his casual flirtation with a senator’s son, we get a well-defined picture of what he’s like and what he’s about. The best part is that it’s all done through the action and dialogue of the story.

A Bad Day to be WET feels in every way like it should be part of an ongoing sci-fi tv series. In fact, considering that Myr has written several other shorts set in this same universe, it can certainly be read as such a series.  

This is a fun, action-packed read. Go check it out, and hopefully you’ll enjoy it as much as I have.

Category: Anthology: Crossing the Line  Genres: Adventure, Sci-Fi  Tags:  young adult, psionics, space, military, future  Rating: Teen

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It's one of my favorite sci-fi stories on GA. I hope we meet Bill Thomas in more stories. Cool review, @spikey582

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Excellent review, spikey! You are spot on that this story feels like an exciting episode of a sci-fi TV show. Myr does a great job of strapping us in for a thrill ride, and while I know there are other episodes in this universe, I would love to see a continuation of this one, with Bill and Aegis... not nagging... just stating a fact. :) 

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When I first read it, I liked the story. I like all of them set in Myr's SciFi world. It's a new twist, on an old theme.

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15 hours ago, Timothy M. said:

So, @Myr, did we manage to take you by surprise with this review ? :lol: 

Yes.

And Thanks Everyone!  There is a sequel to this one in another anthology.  And I do plan to continue that, of course. :)

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Awesome - to both replies.

We tried to be sneaky by not naming the topic in the review team forum, and @spikey582 uploaded the text as late as possible. I think wildone also posted the review just before it went live.

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