Mark Arbour Posted February 14, 2010 Author Posted February 14, 2010 And he really likes ass play like Robbie... My hypothesis here in this make-believe world we've created is that sensitive prostates are hereditary.
Enric Posted February 14, 2010 Posted February 14, 2010 Big bulky frame and lavender eyes! Lavender eyes? Lavender eyes! What was Aaron's surname? Wasn't that Hayes by any chance? Is there like a century-long ongoing sex between these three families? that's nothing incredible. in addition to outlooks being hereditary, also tastes are known to be somewhat hereditary. in the history, there has been a lot of marriages between step-siblings. When a woman found a man sexy and the man found that woman to be sexy (both being widoed....), it was not too unusual that the man's son found the woman's daughter (= step-mother's daughter by an earlier husband) sexy and vice versa. [they are not related by blood, so their marriage was legally permitted] the same with for example a man's son and his step-mother's niece. these sort of tastes and resemblances, were a contributing factor why in family histories, some two families seemed to have formed long-time repeated marriage partnerings. Pools for brides and bridegrooms to one another. plus, again within permitted degrees of consanguinity: a guy could find his first cousin, niece of his own mother, to be attractive....(it happened not too unusually in the past) they are legally allowed to marry, in most places. [and, many have observed along history that people married a spouse who resembled that one's parents (of opposite sex).] -------------------- My paternal grandmother came from a family whose earlier generations for at least four generations, had at least one marriage in each generation to a certain other family lineage. something of slightly differing variants of a nephew marrying his uncle's wife's niece. ------- in the world of genealogy, these sort of things are also known. an ongoing example of over a *millennium* (not only a century but a millennium), is that the lineage of Japanese emperors seemingly liked to marry with members of a family named Fujiwara. It started in about the 700s CE (if not even earlier), and repeated in almost each generation - and in about the year 1900 there still was at least one such marriage: the future emperor Yoshihito married a lady called Sadako from Kujo-Fujiwara family. [this couple was the paternal grandparents of the current emperor of Japan]
ricky Posted February 14, 2010 Posted February 14, 2010 I didn't realize that this was a continuation of bloodlines. Duh! I can be so thick sometimes.:wacko:
Mark Arbour Posted February 14, 2010 Author Posted February 14, 2010 I didn't realize that this was a continuation of bloodlines. Duh! I can be so thick sometimes.:wacko: Well it kind of is and it kind of isn't. It's the next story, but we're doing lots of flashbacks.
ricky Posted February 14, 2010 Posted February 14, 2010 :angry:Damn Mark, Your writing is such a life stopper. Once I get into one of your stories my everything else just goes on hold until I've read every word available.:king: Shit, I hope it's not to late to continue that CPR I was doing. Only 4 chapters so far eh? :PNow if you could just tie it all together so that we could find out that Stefan Schluter was related to Granger . . .
Mark Arbour Posted February 14, 2010 Author Posted February 14, 2010 :angry:Damn Mark, Your writing is such a life stopper. Once I get into one of your stories my everything else just goes on hold until I've read every word available.:king: Shit, I hope it's not to late to continue that CPR I was doing. Only 4 chapters so far eh? :PNow if you could just tie it all together so that we could find out that Stefan Schluter was related to Granger . . . Don't hold your breath on that one. I've already gotten a bunch of comments wanting me to make Max one of "those" Grangers.
Peter321 Posted February 16, 2010 Posted February 16, 2010 Don't hold your breath on that one. I've already gotten a bunch of comments wanting me to make Max one of "those" Grangers. Yes, I think it's obvious Max must be distantly related to the Bridgemont Grangers. If he didn't have blue blood, he certainly had blue balls for quite a few years, LOL!
Tiger Posted February 20, 2010 Posted February 20, 2010 It seems like it's been a while. Will there be a new chapter soon?
Mark Arbour Posted February 20, 2010 Author Posted February 20, 2010 It seems like it's been a while. Will there be a new chapter soon? It has been. I sent the next chapter to Joe, but forgot that it's a bad idea to send him stuff to do on a Friday night. He's handsome, and has a social life.
Tiger Posted February 20, 2010 Posted February 20, 2010 (edited) the movie sucked It's not a movie. It is a story, and they are not one in the same. I just read the chapter. That was a hell of a fight. Steven is a lot more brash than his son in that respect. He's completely different. I really like how Tonto tried pussy just to see if she'd like it. That's really open-minded of her. Edited February 21, 2010 by Tiger
paya Posted February 20, 2010 Posted February 20, 2010 lavender eyes, bulky frame, sensitive ass AND snaugh
Mark Arbour Posted February 20, 2010 Author Posted February 20, 2010 lavender eyes, bulky frame, sensitive ass AND snaugh We're going back to Paris! Now when we're going to see Maman and Tonto going at it again? I think I really need to re-read the CAP and maybe other stories with Tonto because this story is putting her into somewhat different light... I actually thought about that, about Tonto being in a different light, and I don't entirely agree. If you think about it, mothers and sons can sometimes be combative. We're seeing her deal with a teenage son who's been raised by her, and is thus probably fearless.
paya Posted February 20, 2010 Posted February 20, 2010 I actually thought about that, about Tonto being in a different light, and I don't entirely agree.
Mark Arbour Posted February 20, 2010 Author Posted February 20, 2010 He needs to be fearless, he'll end up in a World War... That is why I put there "somewhat", it's not totally different light, but Tonto as I remember her almost freaked out when she found out JP "molesting" Stef. She seemed to me to be a conservative uptight woman that via some events in her life came to terms with her gay nephew and adopted him and his whole "family" being supportive and all. Now you have to add she's seeing in that scene the son of her Steven, son who looks so much as her dearly bemoaned Steven, heading the same direction, same hell, as his father some 18-20 years ago. It adds a bit of understanding for her stance, and it also explains why was she so supportive later on. I'm sure she had means to press Barry to buy Stef a condo in Chicago. "Do for our grandson what you didn't for our son!" I see your point. I think the age difference is what did it for Tonto with Stefan, the fact that JP was so much older, and Stef was this vulnerable, helpless young guy just in the US.
ricky Posted February 20, 2010 Posted February 20, 2010 Just read 5. What a meaty chapter. Wonderful solid characters continue on the quest. I could taste the chlorine in the pool it was so well written. And I think a lot of us have had an Arron in our lives. Mine was a Ricky. I don't know if Arron ever comes back but Ricky never did. He was shot in bed with another man's wife at 18. One of the few times that being gay would have saved a life. I'm surprised that he didn't write in his diary that it was difficult driving home through the soft warm tears. Beautifully done Mark. The only problem with your writing is that there is never enough of it. That is probably a good thing or a lot of us would not have jobs anymore from staying up late to read every last word. thanks
Mark Arbour Posted February 20, 2010 Author Posted February 20, 2010 Just read 5. What a meaty chapter. Wonderful solid characters continue on the quest. I could taste the chlorine in the pool it was so well written. And I think a lot of us have had an Arron in our lives. Mine was a Ricky. I don't know if Arron ever comes back but Ricky never did. He was shot in bed with another man's wife at 18. One of the few times that being gay would have saved a life. I'm surprised that he didn't write in his diary that it was difficult driving home through the soft warm tears. Beautifully done Mark. The only problem with your writing is that there is never enough of it. That is probably a good thing or a lot of us would not have jobs anymore from staying up late to read every last word. thanks Thanks Ricky. I'm so sorry to hear about the "Ricky" in your life. What a tragedy.
ricky Posted February 21, 2010 Posted February 21, 2010 Thanks Ricky. I'm so sorry to hear about the "Ricky" in your life. What a tragedy. Thanks, that was a long time ago. But . . . well you know.
Tiger Posted February 21, 2010 Posted February 21, 2010 I see your point. I think the age difference is what did it for Tonto with Stefan, the fact that JP was so much older, and Stef was this vulnerable, helpless young guy just in the US. Stefan vulnerable? He was already a sex fiend when he arrived, not that it's a bad thing.
Mark M Posted February 21, 2010 Posted February 21, 2010 i now think tonto is a little self centered. She tried Pussy! YAY! for her. Next thing Stef and JP are f**king and she FREAKS but yet was all so sensitive to steve.......makes no sense!!!! (Maybe because there not open back then like they are now?) I wonder. Either way Arron is definatly a Hayes....Who else would he be a Hendricks?
methodwriter85 Posted February 21, 2010 Posted February 21, 2010 Again, I think Tonto was more freaked out about that fact that JP was 26 years old, while Stefan was 16. In most states, that would get a guy sent to jail. She didn't know Stefan well enough yet to know that Stefan was far from being inexperienced, and Tonto was worried that Stefan was being taken advantage of by an older man. I mean, I know that if I had a 16-year old in my care, and they were messing with a guy who was pushing 30, I would be freaked out as well. 1
Mark Arbour Posted February 21, 2010 Author Posted February 21, 2010 Again, I think Tonto was more freaked out about that fact that JP was 26 years old, while Stefan was 16. In most states, that would get a guy sent to jail. She didn't know Stefan well enough yet to know that Stefan was far from being inexperienced, and Tonto was worried that Stefan was being taken advantage of by an older man. I mean, I know that if I had a 16-year old in my care, and they were messing with a guy who was pushing 30, I would be freaked out as well. That's exactly it.
methodwriter85 Posted February 21, 2010 Posted February 21, 2010 Yeah. And note that Tonto forgave JP after she caught Stefan in bed with his math tutor or whatever and realized that Stefan was no innocent.
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