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Hey guys, this is JPG, I write Jacob Finding His Way. Right now there is 8 chapters posted and I just want to know your thoughts on where the story is going. It started based on my life but as I got further into the story I moved further fictional. You willsee as more and more of the chapters are posted.

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Howdy Jacob,

I have begun reading this story. It is always interesting to find out about other peoples lives :)

 

 

Good Luck!

 

 

Love from Joey~

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Hi jacob, i've read 4 chapters of shadow of my father and am enthralled, hope this is gona be a good one as well as hoping it has many chapters, enjoy long reads. your writing style is seriously compelling and keeps one at the edge of ones seat and you get to care for the charateters.

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The story Shadow started out as a seperate story from Jacob but will land up running into the hundreds of chapters on the way I have it planned out

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Right now Jacob is the main story, then there are two spin offs on that story which is called Beneath the Mask and Regrets and Heartaches. Once these guys get into college, Regrets and Heartaches will rejoin Jacob Finding His Way and may Beneath depending on where the boys land up going to college. Eventually the stories are going to all go into Shadow and land back up as one. AS you know from chapter 1 of Shadow, Josh's father is about to retire as president, so this story will last in a long span. Write now there is 62 chapters of Jacob finding His way written, which will go over a hundred before high school is over. Shadow of My Father i have 39 chapters of that story written already. My other two stories which are not here yest Beneath the Mask, 32 chapters and Regrets and Heartaches there is 14 chapters. Once Jacob reaches chapter 24, Beneath will start posting, and once Jacob reaches 40 chapters, Regrets will start posting. You will need to read all three of those stories in order to understand everything that is going on once they start getting posted.

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looking forward to it, can't wait, keep going strong mate, post soon please

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In which order should i read these. I've started off with shadow of my father and am at chap9. I'm finding it absilutely enthralling

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In which order should i read these. I've started off with shadow of my father and am at chap9. I'm finding it absilutely enthralling

 

 

You must have found the stories on another site, because chapter 9 isn't posted of Shadow of My Father on this site yet. I need to find out if this site will allow me to throw on a lot of chapters all at once to get this site up to date.

 

Now if you are reading this stories on another site this is how you should do it.

 

Shadow of My Father is it's own story right now, so you can read that at any time.

 

You need to start with Jacob Finding His Way. Reason for that is it is the original story.

 

Once you reach chapter 24 of Jacob and read that chapter, you can start reading Beneath the Mask. But don't go to far on that because the stories are tied into each other and certaain plots are played out in both Beneath and Jacob. It is started in one of the stories and finished in the other. The way you know if that happened is read the writers corner at the end. It will tell you that you should have read a certain chapter before getting to the chapter where you are now.

 

Finally once you read chapter 40 of Jacob Finding His Way, you can start with Regrets and Heartaches. Once again keep an eye on the writers corner because it will tell you if you need to read a certain chapter of Jacob in order to know what is going.

 

I hope I helped and didn't confuse you.

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Once I get the chapters ready to post, I will post sometime today or tomorrow chapter Of Jacob Finding His Way all the way to chapter 24. That way On Monday I will be able to post chapter 1 of Beneath the Mask. As far as Shadow of My Father I will post two to three chapters a week until it is caught up. And once Jacob reaches chapter 40, I will start posting Regrets and Heartaches. But by the end of the weekend I should have submitted all the chapters up to chapter 24 of Jacob Finding His Way.

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I love your commenting after each chapter technique and Daddy Rick, your editor works, would love to know more about him. Love his comments, hoping in some way, eric and Josh, end up together, don't think that Josh and Kriss work, nor the latest love interest, I think that we in for a rocky ride now that Josh's dad is governor, the mercy waters of politics and who is gona remained scared because of that. my favs among your charactors are, Josh, Eric, Brandon, Josh's dad, beth. Shadow just does it for me, I love it, please post after chap39, i'm at 18 right now and I think lots are gona happen.

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Hey everyone, I just added chapter 9 through 24 of Jacob Finding His Way. THat way I can start bringing my other stories on board faster. Please look in and see what is going on in Jacob life.

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Hey everyone, I just added chapter 9 through 24 of Jacob Finding His Way. THat way I can start bringing my other stories on board faster. Please look in and see what is going on in Jacob life.

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I spent most of last night with Jacob find his way, compelling, engaging, edge of your seat stuff. My favs are, Jacob, joee, the doctor and jake's grandad. I hope jake and joee are in it for the longrun, they complement eachother. 3 cheers to daddy rick, love his comments and your techniques at the end of the chapter really works. something else that works are the twists and turns in your story and your always keeping us guessing. keep up the posts

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I hope new readers come on board the stories in which Jacob post. I started to edit his work when he wrote chapter 8 of this story and been his editor ever since. Love the stories and I know once you get into this story, the other three you will not be able to wait for.

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Oh one last thing Jacob you should start a blog on the other two stories you have already started to post. Right now you have 5 chapters of Shadowof My Father and 1 chapter of Beneath the Mask. The readers need to know that these stories are already being posted here and soon will be catching up to the other sites.

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Happy New Year to all my readers! I am glad to bring my stories here to GA and I hope those that have not read them on the other sites on am posting on you read them here. Let me know what you think about them either here, my home page, comment on the story chapter or via email. Enjoy the story and take care!

 

In the next day or two I will be posting another lump sum of chapters for you guys to read. Nothing like the last posting, but one or two chapters either. I am trying to get this site cuaght up to the other sites where you guys stay reading on this site. So stay tunes and I will let you know when the posting happens.

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I'm up to date on all 4 stories and :2thumbs::worship: about sums it up.

 

My favs Alex & Matt, aww Chase, Joey is growing on me again. Don't really want to say too much, don't want to give away any spoilers :wub:

 

HAPPY NEW YEAR

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I'm up to date on all 4 stories and :2thumbs::worship: about sums it up.

 

My favs Alex & Matt, aww Chase, Joey is growing on me again. Don't really want to say too much, don't want to give away any spoilers :wub:

 

HAPPY NEW YEAR

 

B)......... I'm caught up to all the stories from a different site, I do wish they where all brought up to date in here so I can comment!

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B)......... I'm caught up to all the stories from a different site, I do wish they where all brought up to date in here so I can comment!

 

Same here. Been a week and getting antsy for a new chapter from any one of the stories.

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There will be no updates on this site on any of my stories. There has been updates of them on the other sites trough out the week. On other sites I have Jacob posted up to chapter 61, Beneath up to 30, Regrets will get a new up date on Saturday which will make it chapter 13 and Shadow of my Father will get a update tomorrow which will be chapter 40. I hope you enjoy the new chapters and let me know what you think about them. I love writing them and I hope you do enjoy reading them.

 

By the way I love the hunk in your picture. He doesn't have wings in Superbnatural, but still very cute.

 

Thank you

 

J.P.G.

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There will be no updates on this site on any of my stories. There has been updates of them on the other sites trough out the week. On other sites I have Jacob posted up to chapter 61, Beneath up to 30, Regrets will get a new up date on Saturday which will make it chapter 13 and Shadow of my Father will get a update tomorrow which will be chapter 40. I hope you enjoy the new chapters and let me know what you think about them. I love writing them and I hope you do enjoy reading them.

 

By the way I love the hunk in your picture. He doesn't have wings in Superbnatural, but still very cute.

 

Thank you

 

J.P.G.

 

:(................ Me thinks you have moved on too quickly here Jacob, you did not give it a chance!

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Benji I am sorry truly I am. My editor talked with a mod today, will not give name, he got from the conversation from that mod I will not get moved up. It is to soon and I have to wait longer. I gave it time, but never was given an answer. Now that I have, I don't have the kind of time this mod feels I need to give it. a year to a year and a half. You know the story and all that so I will not bore you with the same ow same owe. I wanted this to be my place to post, but cannot do it if I cannot get moved up.

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There will be no updates on this site on any of my stories. There has been updates of them on the other sites trough out the week. On other sites I have Jacob posted up to chapter 61, Beneath up to 30, Regrets will get a new up date on Saturday which will make it chapter 13 and Shadow of my Father will get a update tomorrow which will be chapter 40. I hope you enjoy the new chapters and let me know what you think about them. I love writing them and I hope you do enjoy reading them.

 

By the way I love the hunk in your picture. He doesn't have wings in Superbnatural, but still very cute.

 

Thank you

 

J.P.G.

 

I'm hooked on all four so as long as you keep writing I'll keep reading.

 

Yeah Sammy is no angel that's for sure. I actually kinda like the "Souless Sammy" he pulls it off well and he's kinda funny. :devil: Just glad new epi's start tomorrow.

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You know, as long as there are readers, there are going to be new chapters being posted of my stories. I have big plans for t he stories and let me tell you where they are going to go in the future.

 

Jacob Finding His way was my first story, which will reach over a hundred chapters before the first book is done. The first book will end on graduation day from high school. The second book, different title, but same character will pick up in the college years. It will run around hundred chapters before that book ends and joined into Shadow of My Father.

 

Beneath the Mask will do the same as Jacob. First book will end around 100 chapters, graduation day from high school, move to college, second book, different name. Around 100 chapters and then end and join into Shadow of My Father.

 

Regrets and Heartaches will only have one book, around 50 chapters. It will rejoin up with Jacob Finding His Way in college years.

 

Shadow of my Father will do the same, end at high school, over 100 chapters, then go to college, different name, over a hundred chapters, and then go on in the adult life, different name, but will swallow up the other stories. By the time they get out of college, it will be only one book, but with all the main characters in it.

 

As these stories go along, they will be tied into each other. Share plots and characters, but they will have their main character for just their story. If you skip one story, or posting, you will be lost in certain plots. To give you a exampled. Beneath and Jacob right now are running along the same time line and sharing certain plots. It starts in one story and continues in the other. If you don't want to get lost, need to read all stories.

 

Plus right now I am fast forwarding the time line in Shadow to catch it up with Jacob and the other two stories. It need to be caught up because a lot happens in the future, that Shadow needs to be on the same time line or the wait will be to long for the reader. I will not rush it to fast, but it will catch up by around chapter 56.

 

So as you can see, lots of plans and the stories are going to be here for a long time. More than likely not on this site, but will be posted on a site for your reading enjoyment. Please keep reading, writing me and letting me know your thoughts about the stories and new chapters. I have taken ideas from readers and I even created characters after certain readers. So drop those emails.

 

Thank you,

 

J.P.G.

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Dear Reader's,

 

As of today, my stories have been completely removed from the GA site. The issue in the back ground was not resolved and I was left with no other choice but to pull my stories. They are not gone, just no longer being posted on this site. If you want to keep up on the stories, please email me and I will send you to the site where they are posting at. Sorry for this inconsistence, I had hoped to have had this resolved, but it never did. The two sides couldn't come to common ground. I hope to keep you as readers, but if not I will miss you. I never intended to leave the site and leave you readers. Sorry again, take care and hope you keep reading my stories where I am at.

 

Thank you,

 

J.P.G.

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