Andy78 A Demon's Life

[Andy78]

The first story of a planned series has just been posted.

These will be tales of a day in the life of a different demon from myth or legend. A few will be demons of my own invention, as is the case with our first tale.


Story:

The Kindertotenlieder https://www.gayauthors.org/story/andy021278/thekindertotenlieder

The demon created for this tale is based on Mahler's song cycle Kindertotenlieder. This demon feeds on children, so warning dear readers, approach this one with caution.

[asamvav111]

Good story, intriguing read, realistic setting, disgusting demon, but more angst and pain was needed. I like the prologue more. All in all good. Liked it. Just a question, no tresspass on the children's behalf should keep them safe from any demon and especially a low level one. So how did he take Cherlie? Anyways Keep writing and keep sharing... er... nightmares. Hugs and chocolates.

[Andy78]

Thanks for reading and providing feedback.

 

 

As this series expands, the stories will probably become more detailed and intricate - this one is more so a kind of feeler, see what the response to it is like.

 

I didn't want to make this first story too dark and painful (especially since the victim was a child), though I'm sure some of the stories to follow will be filled with darkness, pain and suffering

 

So how did he take Cherlie?

 

It's one of those things that I decided to leave open to the reader to fill in for themselves. Most demons in mythology don't care about someone's protection by a god, so in keeping with that tradition, my Kindertotenlieder is not hampered by the innocence of childhood.

 

Hope that answers your question.