Popular Post Aditus Posted October 25, 2020 Popular Post Posted October 25, 2020 A couple of weeks ago someone mentioned the s*** word. And then I heard there fell s*** at some places. I think it's safe now to think of the Ch********* word, especially together with a story. A month from today, I will post the first chapter of my new/ old Ch**story Baby, it's Cold Outside. Sneak peek: I was on the subway, the hood of my jacket still drawn over my head against the nasty weather, mentally going through the list for the big dinner I had planned, when I heard Peter's distinctive laughter. I would have recognized it anywhere, these deep rumbling chortles that always made me feel warm inside. Surprised, I looked back over my shoulder and saw him talking animatedly to a woman I didn't know. It was too early for him to be on this train. Then I smiled. He wanted to surprise me and be home early before he had to go on that business trip tomorrow. I gathered the cloth bags filled with groceries from the floor between my feet, ready to join them, when Peter lifted his hand, stroked the woman's hair, and leaned in for a kiss. 5 1
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted October 25, 2020 Site Administrator Posted October 25, 2020 I can't wait to read the whole thing 1
Cole Matthews Posted October 25, 2020 Posted October 25, 2020 Oh my. This is intriguing. What a fantastic opening! I can't wait to see what's happening. Great teaser. 2
Daddydavek Posted October 26, 2020 Posted October 26, 2020 I expect the explanation isn't going to fly... 2
Aditus Posted October 26, 2020 Author Posted October 26, 2020 2 hours ago, Daddydavek said: I expect the explanation isn't going to fly... You have no idea. 1
Aditus Posted October 26, 2020 Author Posted October 26, 2020 13 hours ago, Valkyrie said: I can't wait to read the whole thing You'll be the first, naturally . 8 hours ago, Cole Matthews said: Oh my. This is intriguing. What a fantastic opening! I can't wait to see what's happening. Great teaser. Thank you! 1
Aditus Posted October 28, 2020 Author Posted October 28, 2020 I'm watching snow pictures. The first chapter is done: everything nice and shiny. 1 1
Aditus Posted November 18, 2020 Author Posted November 18, 2020 One week! I'm going to post every Wednesday till Christmas. 3 1
Aditus Posted November 25, 2020 Author Posted November 25, 2020 It's my birthday! As I can't invite you for coffee/ tea and cake I invite you to read the first chapter of my Christmas story Baby, it's cold Outside. 2 2
Aditus Posted November 26, 2020 Author Posted November 26, 2020 Thank you for the plentiful and different reactions and comments to the first chapter. I think I never before managed to get nine 'angry' for one chapter. 1 2
Timothy M. Posted November 26, 2020 Posted November 26, 2020 I'm looking forward to reading the story. No snow in Denmark yet, but they're warning about cold weather soon. 1 1
Aditus Posted November 26, 2020 Author Posted November 26, 2020 3 hours ago, Timothy M. said: I'm looking forward to reading the story. No snow in Denmark yet, but they're warning about cold weather soon. I'm looking forward to read your comment...*snicker* 2
Site Administrator Valkyrie Posted November 26, 2020 Site Administrator Posted November 26, 2020 10 minutes ago, aditus said: I'm looking forward to read your comment...*snicker* Me too 2
Timothy M. Posted November 28, 2020 Posted November 28, 2020 Hmm, sounds like I need to get my ranting hat on and dig out the likes. 2
Aditus Posted November 28, 2020 Author Posted November 28, 2020 1 hour ago, Timothy M. said: Hmm, sounds like I need to get my ranting hat on and dig out the likes. 2
Timothy M. Posted November 29, 2020 Posted November 29, 2020 Hmm, I wonder if Peter felt he had to have a girlfriend in order to become a partner in the firm and please his parents, but actually did love Tristan. I'm not excusing him, because he was still a player according to his colleague. But you have to hate a society where who you love can be a factor in success at work (unless of course your partner is someone who deliberately pisses your boss of). 3
Aditus Posted November 30, 2020 Author Posted November 30, 2020 14 hours ago, Timothy M. said: Hmm, I wonder if Peter felt he had to have a girlfriend in order to become a partner in the firm and please his parents, but actually did love Tristan. I'm not excusing him, because he was still a player according to his colleague. But you have to hate a society where who you love can be a factor in success at work (unless of course your partner is someone who deliberately pisses your boss of). That's a better explanation for Peter's betrayal than evil spiders or a head injurie. 3
Aditus Posted December 2, 2020 Author Posted December 2, 2020 The second chapter is up. There's and a involved. 2
Aditus Posted December 5, 2020 Author Posted December 5, 2020 Thank you for all the likes and comments! I'm floored. I apologize if I didn't answer every one yet, I had to pick up my new car in another city. Thank you!
Aditus Posted December 23, 2020 Author Posted December 23, 2020 The last chapter has been posted! Thank you for reading and commenting! It has been a blast! or
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