New Person, New Poems

[Caead]

Hey everyone, I'm new here!

 

Hope you enjoy them! I appreciate feedback, lots and lots of feedback

 

Here's the link:- https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=237

[DarkShadow]

Hey everyone, I'm new here!

 

Hope you enjoy them! I appreciate feedback, lots and lots of feedback

Here's the link:- https://www.gayauthors.org/eficiton/viewstory.php?sid=237

 

I read them all! I think they are all well written, but I have to say my favorite was Settling for Butterflies! The way the person watches the wedding procession and describes the good and bad of the bride and how people percieve her is very interesting!

 

I like the feel of how the onlookers settle themselves to the fact that, 'yes' he's marrying the bitch, suck it up. The personal reflection at the end I thought was amazing.

 

"But me I want to be sure, and never settle,

For anything less, than butterflies"

 

To me it reads as though you would prefer to find something a little less imperfect and closer to true love.

 

Yeah... I did like them all, but this one was my favorite.

 

Great stuff and welcome to GA!