Andy Posted May 2, 2007 Share Posted May 2, 2007 I highly reccomend reading Luc's newest submission, the first part of a series of fantasies he is writing: The Shower. It is an enjoyable well written read Here's a link. http://luc.gayauthors.org/daydreams/theshower.php Start talking. That's an order. *resists the urge to post spoilers* Link to comment
viv Posted May 2, 2007 Share Posted May 2, 2007 OH MY GOLLY LUC!!! Always SO DAMN GOOD!!! I think I may spend more time in the shower! Thanks Luc, for sharing and making me smile fantastically! Link to comment
Camy Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 Erotic as hell, and beautifully written. The analogy of the milk was great, and my favourite line has to be "Is this finally real?" Thank you , Luc Link to comment
shadowgod Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 Definately have to agree with Camy! "Is this finally real?" rocked as a line and said tons about wants that were only hinted at previously. great writing Luc! Steve Link to comment
Tom Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 WOW...I mean...WOW...Really good I'd step into the shower to cool off but I don't think it would help any this time Hugs, Tom Link to comment
Bondwriter Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 A nice tale of frustrations at last unleashed. I have to agree that the writing makes the story fresh and attractive. And there's definitely an ascending move throughout the story, this eventual question being a nice climax (in the literary meaning). Link to comment
Conner Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 Let me add my kudos as well, Luc. Erotic and sensual. I really liked the palm thing. I keep asking for a smilie that smokes. Conner Link to comment
Jack Scribe Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 I keep asking for a smilie that smokes. The story was smokin'! Erotic, loving, uncomplicated and rewarding. Super fantasy, Luc. I look forward to more in the series. Jack Link to comment
Centaur Posted May 4, 2007 Share Posted May 4, 2007 WOW *Wipes perspiration off forehead* WHOA Congratulations Luc - what a great job! Rarely have I seen so much energy, passion, and eroticism captured in such a short space! That story felt like 5 chapters because you put so much in there. Awesome! I really enjoyed it - thank you. Centaur Link to comment
Krista Posted May 4, 2007 Share Posted May 4, 2007 Hello, I thought this story was really good. The underlying physically driven romance was interesting.. lol. I don't think I've ever romanced someone by stripping.. anyway, the, "Is this finally real?" - part was extremely cute. Probably the most well written and original part of a story I've read for a little while and it had me outwardly smiling because it let everyone know that it just wasn't erotic, that there was real feelings there and too long subdued by the characters. So yes... Good job, Krista Link to comment
C James Posted May 4, 2007 Share Posted May 4, 2007 Excellent, Luc!! I think the most moving part of it, for me, was the remaining unknown; why hadn't Chris acted on his feelings before? Just like like, some things are left unknown, and to me that was part of what made this story "click". Link to comment
Luc Posted May 9, 2007 Share Posted May 9, 2007 Thanks, all of you. I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed wriiting it, though it was hard to focus on...at times The inspiration for it was a dream I had a LONG time ago. The setting was a little different (you would all laugh hysterically and make fun of me if I told you where it was originally set in my dream), but most of the 'important parts' were the same. Thanks again, for reading and for letting me know what you thought. Link to comment
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