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That was really mean and real. Sometimes it feels there is no way out of such situations and the bullies keep on going, getting more motivated. So hopefully can Marcus start something better.
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It's awesome how Orel sees things and claims them, a wise ghost with a new friend. And now has Finn two allies he can rely on Andrew and Garrett. So who's gonna defend the fortress when Tarquin comes with fire. Finn should repair the oven soon so Orel can bake his magical muffins using them as ammunition against Tarquin's army.
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Chapter 1: The car that purrs
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: The car that purrs
Btw he didn't have the key, he never got it from Julia, that's why she was sitting there 😅 -
Chapter 1: The car that purrs
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: The car that purrs
Actually he did not run the red light. Sometimes the yellow phase is pretty long so it is better to keep on driving, since almost every one drive and if you brake you probably cause an accident. Thinking about it, the colors of the traffic light are green, orange and red so for orange we say it was cherry green. It really does not make sense and is not funny in English,😅my bad. PS: There are very few countries you can push the electric cars to their speed limit. -
Rick heard Liam before he saw him, which was usually a bad sign only if you believed plans were meant to be announced in advance instead of assembled mid-motion like a jazz solo that assumed everyone else would keep up. The underground garage had a particular talent for turning normal life into theatre: the lighting was clean and bright without being flattering, the concrete was pale and polished in a way that made every footstep sound deliberate, and the air held that sterile blend of dust, rub
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Rick likes order, rules and the fact that he is always right. Liam is an endless chaos, making the world look more complicated with his mathematical formulas and magical scientific crap. Putting these two together in the same room causes nothing more than misery, disorder, and fun. Malicious Glee is a collection of short stories following Rick and Liam—partners who love each other fiercely, argue publicly, flirt dangerously, and take an almost academic pleasure in pushing each other's boundaries. Warning: Although the whole plot, jokes, scenes and thoughts are mine, I used a lot of help from AI. So my apologies.
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Tick Tock, time is up! "Background music : Hunger games" So the game is on now. Tarquin and his crew, against Orel and his team. Orel surprised me with his strength, so let's see who's writing the roles and games.
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And I just realized I wrote a new story with dungeons and dragons without reading these crazy stuff. So I guess I gotta write something about purring cars, otherwise it wouldn't be fair. *Starts a new series just for purring cars*
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I can't believe I started with the second book. There was so much into the story. How Orel and Oliver walk in, the Cleric, good choice. And the game, I so much miss those nights throwing dices and waiting for the mighty bolt to strike the Orc.
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Swim in the ocean with the sharks? It was too much for all the three but on the positive side Garrett knew what he wanted and made it clear. *Adds sound of TARDIS leaving with Garrett and Kyle*
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That's such a performance for Kyle. *Applause* not I thought Kyle was tender but he's mean. There's nothing worse than I turned your straight friend gay and fucked him too. Poor Finn.
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So they are going to meet in the barn and make the memory their story to tell, to pull Tarquin down. The question is is Tarquin going to burn them with him? And like always bullies are the real cowards. Btw I found my Audi, it's an e-tron GT
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"What the hell is a Dalek, and why does it look like a pepper pot with a toilet plunger sticking out of it?” This was awesome. The best explanation ever. And I already miss the strange TARDIS sound. I want to binge the doctor with someone. * Plans something evil for the weekend with popcorn und lube*
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Lids is really good but Kyle is a lot better. I wonder if I can get some lessons too. I'm so tired I want to sleep but I have to read the rest 🫠
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As I read Finn and Orel story and the comments I thought why is it like I am missing something, now I know. I missed the first book 😁 And Kyle is the best.
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Chapter 1: One More Reincarnation
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 1: One More Reincarnation
That's something to learn 😄 -
Nope. No way. I just care about purring German cars. But hmmm I can destroy the delorean too.
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Lol, thanks. I'm gonna hate your characters for helping me procrastinating to the confetti and gala there. BTW I thought the Audi was Oliver's car. But then Audi has some nice electro cars that purr or they practically don't make any sound. *Change of plan for the Christmas list. An Audi battery to destroy in a shredder....devilish laugh*
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Rick had already opened his third beer by the time the launcher finished patching, the bottle sweating faintly against his palm as if the room itself had decided to participate in the heat. The summer evening pressed in through the open window, thick and unmoving, carrying the distant smell of cut grass and the quieter, more intimate scent of the house still trying to decide what it was going to be. This was not the house he had grown up in. He noticed that every night—in the way the walls
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Between dungeon wipes, beta reads, and one badly timed confession, Liam and Rick's friendship is pushed into a space where good intentions become dangerous. This is a story about games you can’t pause, choices you can’t reload, and the terrifying moment when caring too much starts to look like a horrible plan B. Warning: Although the whole plot and thoughts are mine, I used a lot of help from AI. At some point I might go through the whole story and write it myself but I don't know if I ever do it. So my apologies to those disapproving the use.
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This story is so dark and so mean, I love it. I just wanted to take a quick look insid and I ended up my break time + break time for the whole week reading it. Tarquin is a real villain but the question is do the four find enough leverage against him. BTW I've never heard an Audi purr, im gonna pay more attention when I see one ..... *Add an Audi to the Christmas list*
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The Three of Us, We’ve Always Been So Misaligned
Kileoli commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Three of Us, We’ve Always Been So Misaligned
Lyn sorta deserves to feel depressed and miserable. I think the real loser was Alexander , so let's see if Brad and Lyn meet.🤔- 36 comments
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CHAPTER 9: THE SECOND DATE, SCENE 2 - CUPSHUP DATE
Kileoli commented on LJCC's story chapter in CHAPTER 9: THE SECOND DATE, SCENE 2 - CUPSHUP DATE
I think it's very brave of you to write a story about the time and impact of COVID.its something I prefer not to think about anymore. Its pretty much the whole world and societies, So wish you luck with the writing. ....goes back scanning all the chapters to find Waldo.🙃 -
It's such a horrible cliffhanger so who got Jack, the dead wolves or the undead witches? Can Theo and Vee see what's happening to Jack or is it all imagination?
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CHAPTER 9: THE SECOND DATE, SCENE 2 - CUPSHUP DATE
Kileoli commented on LJCC's story chapter in CHAPTER 9: THE SECOND DATE, SCENE 2 - CUPSHUP DATE
So finally Dennis managed to get Kleb's attention and they're going on a cheap trip 😅 At this point, pretty everyone knows what a horrible time during the COVID was, and how things got nasty real quick like a low budget film. Im very curious to read how they survive this. And being trapped with people in a limited space did a number on me. So it's an interesting aspect to see what it did to Dennis and Kleb. The question is if they survived it without killing each other, why did they break up?
