What a wonderful story! throughout the reading I always feared the worst would happen but you certainly brought it back in a beautiful way! You're an excellent writer and I thank you so much for bringing this entertainment to us. Thank you again, @empath!
A very inspirational story. It was a real tearjerker at the end. Thank you so much Bill W. Even though it has a supernatural touch to it it came out as quite believable just because of the sincerity of the entire story. Your effort in writing it is much appreciated. I've just opened up your whole selection that you've written and I'm going to start going through them now.
So much to do and so little background between them to make it work. Levi and Matt both are in a difficult situation. Hopefully, they will soon mesh a little bit better and obtain the position of father and son that they've been denied all of Levi's life. Levi appears to be a pretty good kid although obviously under great stress due to the grief and the potential changes coming to his life.
@Mark Ponyboy Peters, you are producing another great story. Thank you.
@Ivor Slipper, another story that could do with a continuation! It was great but it really opened up to a possibility of going along with them as they grew older. With such a great beginning so much could have been added to make it beautiful story.
A lot of emotion reveals itself in this chapter. It looks like a small chink In Levi's armor is revealing itself though. There is still a lot to overcome especially the fact that Levi believes Matt and Luke are living in sin. Homophobia is tough put behind you but for the sake of all it must happen eventually.@Mark Ponyboy Peters, this is an excellent chapter. You have captured everyone's point of view very well. Thank you for giving us another great story.
What a loving tearjerker of a story! Thank you so much to this contribution to GA. It's an unbelievable story and so warm and loving. You are a true artist in the art of writing. Hugs and kisses to you.
Such strong emotion @Mark Ponyboy Peters. This is a very moving chapter. You're doing fine work in presenting a very realistic handling of what would really happen in this case. Thank you for the story.
@Mark Ponyboy Peters, this is a stunning story of deep emotions. What lies ahead for Matt and Levi is unimaginable. I am sure you will handle it well as you always do. Keep these chapters coming as we area ll sitting on the edge of our chairs, hoping for the best.