There short updates are killing me also but I'm really liking it. What is an Orphic? (heh. I'm ignoring the title).
I want to know why and how Tek failed to protect him.
Still hoping for blood retribution on the uncle and cousin and I'm looking forward to next Wednesday.
All caught up!
Its funny that Zak didn't see the surprise party coming. I guess its some of his self confidence issues coming up but I think Dusty is doing the best work possible to increase Zak's confidence. I'm really looking forward to Zak's school experience now that he's gained some self assurance.
One final comment: Mattie seems too perfect. I'd like to see some character growth there as well as some more interaction with his family. There is an opportunity for a lot of conflict there.
Thanks for posting. I enjoyed this chapter.
Thank you for a well written story dealing with an important issue in the gay community. We need more understanding within the LGBTQ community on all aspects.
I'm following this on the other site also and can't wait for you to catch up. BTW, everyone who can should watch "Buck". It's a documentary streaming on netflix. The latest chapters reminded me of the trauma some horses go through and the best ways to care for difficult and/or abused horses.
I really enjoyed every chapter of this story. The perspectives were unique and I enjoyed the growth of the three boys. Thanks for posting and I'm looking forward to your next work.
I see the challenges you mentioned that Zach will face in the future as he adjusts to a stable environment. I'm sure there will be a bunch of hiccups along the way but I trust Scott and Noah to do what's right. Great chapter and thanks for posting!
It's my hope that this begins to happen more and more often across the country. Perceptions are changing and we're slowly winning the hearts and minds of America. Thank you for sharing this. It was very good.
I hope they both reach a point where they're comfortable telling Eric. After he gets over his initial shock, anger and disappointment that they didn't tell him sooner he will become their strongest ally.
I'm so worried about what is going to happen next. I want their relationship to succeed really badly!
I had my suspicions and I'm glad that he's still alive. Once again Mira's POV is my favorite and I really enjoyed the workaround of how he survived. I envision total complete control of the body's inner and outer workings and the ability to accelerate and focus healing throughout everything. Mira's like a young Wolverine!
Great chapter and I can't wait to read their reunion.
So incredibly heartwarming. I can't wait to read part 2 and I can only hope that this sort of mentality and situation will spread in real life as well.
Man. This was a train wreck of a chapter. The relationship is getting MORE complicated instead of going anywhere and it seems that they're started on a route to an unhealthy relationship.
I suppose that it's been almost a decade since my freshman year of college. I hope that explains why I really can't understand what the hell is going through Corbin's mind right now. That said, his actions are totally believable.
Great chapter. I love how we're learning more about the organization and seeing how the pledges are adapting to their volunteer work. Hopefully a few of them will join as mentors also.
I can't wait to see what you mean by mutiny. Thanks for posting.
I'd like to echo the wonderfulness of the first part of the chapter. Mira is totally my favorite character. Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
And things are getting complicated. I would really like to get into Pete's head to find out what he's thinking and I hope that Lee doesn't get hurt too badly when things go sour. He seems like a good guy.
On Beriut- I hope that your insistence on calling it by it's proper name means that you're familiar with the history of real pong with paddles and more beer. It's a lost art sadly.