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  1. Oh I love your comment. 😁
  2. People keep saying Chronos is being deliberately obtuse. If you asked him, he’d say he is very clear in what he is articulating. Maybe Clara just needs a class in Chronos-speak Do we like Sebastian now? 💚
  3. I knew people would latch onto that like a leech. 😂 Thank you, @VBlew, I’m glad you liked it.
  4. ‘Your mother smells different than the others,’ Dave echoed in my head. He was right. What happened to her? She seemed… better. Her scent flowed like a clear stream of water trickling down its path. Rejuvenated even, as if she managed to shed the heaviness that once cloaked her… that kept her from me. The others were as I remembered them—tainted and rotten—and this made her stand out even more. The present situation held no threat for us, not with three gods, and whatever Chronos was b
  5. 🫂 A sad day for your friend. And no, you don’t have to like the things that life throws at us. I am sending you hugs. I’m sorry.
  6. to rawbone 😂 ?
  7. drown

    Underwritten

    I’m acutely aware of my underwritten characters, but instead of just losing them, I try to interweave them in the tapestries of plot I’ve created. It’s just very hard for me to kill them. I’ll take this opportunity to really find out what each of my character’s goals are. It seems like some of that gets lost in the fantastic cosmic battles I’ve created. At the core, I just want to show interpersonal relationships, and… love and friendship. Let’s all make sure our characters are anything but one note! Have a nice 🐣 weekend.
  8. I still think the guy in the image is hot. My tastes are varied.
  9. I really appreciate this piece of information! Tonight I will be spending time with two of my oldest friends from my hometown. We’re going out to eat! Have a great weekend. 😄
  10. drown

    Chapter 14

    My sentiments exactly. Love will find a way. Yes! That's the spirit! I feel extremely vulnerable not having read past this point yet. 😂
  11. That is about the extent of celebration on my side as well. 😂 I'm just using the fact that Friday and Monday are national holidays here to take the trip across the country.
  12. drown

    Chapter 14

    Yet it is up to you to solve them 😛 Nothing will happen to him! No!
  13. drown

    Chapter 14

    Ok now. No. @kbois No! I know what you're doing here. This is the abyss in Elijah's and Kage's relationship. I am just infuriated I don't know yet where it will lead, because all your options are as yet unknown. But communication is key and I'm very happy that Kage put everything on the table just after the family event. I'm here for it all. We need tension in our stories, don't we?
  14. I wish everyone a happy Easter weekend (if that is something you celebrate). I will be visiting my dad.
  15. I'll grace you with my omelette, too. It started with the idea of making an omelette, but then I went overboard with the veggies and tomato (it's a FRUIT) so it looks rather ridiculous. But so tasty! There's also some cheddar.
  16. New things on my list … to read … AHHHHHH.
  17. drown

    Chapter 13

    ELIJAH MELLOWED HIM UP! In your head. I know what happens when characters live rent-free in your head. XD Yeah. 100%.
  18. drown

    Chapter 12

    I like fire elementals. And how does one jump in on a comment thread on page 6 that is so utterly derailed already. XD I don't want to see Kage gone from Elijah for too long, but I have separation anxiety, so there's that.
  19. drown

    Chapter One: Arrival

    Oh I'm so excited for having you here as a reader. This story… goes places, but I promise we'll always be back in Oregon Please enjoy. And thank you for your comment, it means the world. 💚
  20. I always wish I read more Sci-Fi. I'll use this post as a guide
  21. drown

    Chapter Nine: Mark

    💙 Thank you. It was rather hard to write, because of the heartbreak… I cried lol
  22. She did try her best, I guess. Like Beatrice, she might have her own agenda. But this agenda might be way bigger than pack politics … 🤔 Hmm.
  23. I shall repeat myself by saying that all my women are strong. Back in Ch 3 on Grey's 15th birthday, Grey perceived her as someone weak, dejected, uncaring. She appears different to him even after such a short period of absence from the pack. And she hopefully isn't as bigoted as her husband either. But who knows? I certainly don't! (Or do I?) 💙 I guess we'd have to find out where Beatrice's allegiances lie. I hope someone can shed a light on this, I would like to know!
  24. Oh thank you so much, I've had a rough day, and this helps immensely I'm seeing it through to the end and more. Thanks for being here, reading, and for the comment!! 💚
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