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You made me Google Tata tea.
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Just a preemptive strike against humanity. I'd be here, at home, and could ignore people! I'm ok though, actually had a quite decent evening paired with some good news. Now spending time with my favorite human. Thank you, Tim 🧡 It's easy to long for things you rarely get, like snow XD Berlin is just … grey right now.
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Send some here, I could use the solitude. ❄️💙
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Hummm Hummana Hummm.... This makes no sense whatsoever.
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Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
Isn't that essentially, what I said? Aside from me assuming, Wepwawet is a reincarnation from an earlier period from which the temple is—not even Wepwawet might be aware of. But this might just as well merely be my imagination running wild. Well now we're getting somewhere. Maybe I misunderstood. Reincarnation is an interesting topic, but something that has not been explored by the characters yet so I will keep my mouth shut. No one told me anything about the kind of sex I was describing in this chapter in school. Literally nothing about it. 0. 🧡 -
Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
Rectify? No. Justify? Sure why not. Sorry, Mr. teacher, I had to write pornography to make the story believable, give me an A kthx. -
Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
FYI, Hayden Christensen was extremely hot in Star Wars (and Jumper) <.< What? No… Wait… What? Think of the wolf and human mind as two separate entities, but growing up together from childhood. They are intertwined, they are one. This is why Grey was so afraid of turning Dave, an adult wolf coming into an adult human is known to cause irreparable harm. People lose themselves forever. They go insane. So far Dave is faring just fine, right? Right? -
Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
AHHHHHH what a great way to start into the weekend Thanks, @Bdamdifino 💜 If I had stretched this out for five chapters, I don't think I'd have survived the process. 😂 With gods and wolves and glowing people, I felt the only way to make the scene believable was to make the sex as visceral and detailed as possible. So the readers can feel it. I certainly did while writing. No one complained so far I think, it's just my own insecurities of posting such a thing lol. I'm glad you're hooked on the main storyline :3 I am too. Thank you. Every comment helps and makes me faster at writing. Yeah, it's the detachment. Chronos might imitate English right now, but he surely hasn't mastered any of it. Interpersonal relationships between humans and human-likes is very foreign to me. In this world, gods used to mean something, and people cherished them. Now in 2023 (time of story—it is in fact the night from September 24th to 25th), they are a foreign concept. Prayed to, sure, but with no tangible results, and definitely not "among us". Wepwawet might be a special thing happening right now, and we have to stay tuned to find out why! ❤️💙🧡 -
Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
😄😁😁 (Thank you so much 💙) -
You would never hurt me though.
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Hummmm......dinger..... It’s a drsawzall comment. Usually makes me feel dumb for not getting it. XD 💜 Like Jamie feels when RMW does an intellectually superior thing.
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Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
THERE ARE NO VAMPIRES IN MY WORLD! I do have dragons though. -
Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
Just look for the light emanating from it 😉 I feel you’re making fun of the fact that my protagonists are glowing! -
Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
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It is. And I just realized the slip, I called her Elijah's mom, but she in fact is just as much. The whole family is great. 💜
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Evil! I like it
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It's Friday! I hope everyone can enjoy their day to the fullest. I will make an attempt.
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Slowly but steadily re-reading the original story, I realized this was the moment I fell in love with it: Even among outsiders, there is prejudice and hatred. We're all just (super)human after all. Yeah, you go ahead, Michael, and plan your own demise. 🖤
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I'm so torn between liking the word and being reminded of lard instead. 😂
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This chapter was just exquisite. The characters, all of them—from children to the parents to our protagonists—shone. Brightly. Fuck. I love Elijah's mom. And: Can't wait. Have to read tonight though, work. 😁
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Nice coherent world lore there. I appreciate it! That's also where I draw the line. Yup. Some parents should just not exist. I would like to acknowledge a perfectly placed author's voice bleeding through here I really hope @kbois will not break my heart here ;; HAPPILY EVER AFTER please. I'm setting myself up for trouble because I could read up ahead and see what's going to happen, but I will not. Herrings are just as as anchovies, so cut it!
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I'll stick to the opinion that RMW is not a bad guy, and I really like how he intellectually challenges Jamie. Kinda want to see a dinner with RMW and Mike at the table. lol These situations are always great, because Jamie has confidence and knows how to handle himself—educating one bigot at a time. Good, because I don't want to see the ethical dilemma of Jamie having to kill one of those ghosts again. He realizes the facts now. And wtf, cliffhanger now? Weren't you going to leave for holiday, Law? AHHHHH. A thoroughly enjoyed chapter once again. Excellent writing!
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Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
Oh thank you thank you. Like @Anton_Cloche said, the author is embarrassed. 🫣 -
Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
Yeah, that's me. It feels like I've had uninterrupted sex for four days and now the world is going to see the sex tape. Send help. 💜 -
Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
drown commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Eighteen: Confluence
I don't even know what I was doing. It manifested in my head that the hunt and sex were connected in this chapter. Clara commented on the cosmic light show sex—should they ever have sex, and now they did—back in Ch 4. I just knew they had to be in a private area, far from people. Because it would be loud and rough and bright. 😄 What do you think is going to happen when these four arrive at Grey's pack grounds? They need their shit together. But the dynamics are going to be very very interesting. 💙
