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My Christmas is complete😆. I am a man of simple tastes. Thank you mr arbour
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I think Carter manipulated that scene to perfection! Hope his luck continues....
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I didnt get a notification of this, so I am playing catch up. Interesting spin the bottle game. In my youth (back when we pretended the world was more innocent) spin the bottle always involved the removal of clothing....
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Why do i have this "calm before the storm" feeling?
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Mark, I hope this finds you well, and prepared to enjoy Christmas/holidays/Hanukkah/.... the way you want to. As for me... well, a little more Bridgemont would not go astray ... Regards A
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Great story. So glad you found a way to get rid of that mother - she needs a strong does of reality fast... Thanks
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Cowboy reverse Asian?..... Hmmm, I am just SO vanilla!!!!
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The first half of this chapter was the most depressing and disheartening thing I have read for a while. I was hoping that at some point there would be a hint that their "plans" were all sarcasm. I understand that the winter climate is not great, but I don' see that as an excuse to turn a country into a copy of all that produced the failure that is malls-and-fast-food designed around a car culture. The country has money; use it to buy the best advice from around the world on infrastructure development. The views of an undergrad student will not produce a great country. He's barely old enough to have the faintest idea what he does not know, let alone know enough to move forward sucessfully.
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Lets just say that gaydar is neither of our main protagonists strong suit!
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Harrowing testimony about a dark period. Too many places it is still dark....
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Great ending. Jake realising his f'up, and Kaiden actually growing up. Great writing. Thanks.
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And I’ll never have that recipe again
Canuk commented on Sam Wyer's story chapter in And I’ll never have that recipe again
Kaiden is an idiot. Immature. Doesn't deserve anyone. Hope he's happy alone. Thanks for writing characters a person can really engage with! Cheers -
Whole -heartedly agree. Quite sad really....
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I skip convoluted sex scenes, particularly when they are an adjunct to the plot. Also consistently bad grammar, weird syntax, and signs that no editor or beta reader has been anywhere near the story really turn me off and make me skip stories. Reading should not be hard. The subject may be complex and difficult issues may be addressed, but writing should be clear and the process enjoyable.
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Northern Exposure: General Discussion
Canuk replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
...and a quiet seems to have descended over the northern front.... May we expect a George infusion any time soon, Mr Arbour? -
Great to get this chapter. Ido love the sort of inevitability of this story, while knowing nothing of the path. And the suspense of Caleo's illness, raising the possibility of misssed opportunities.... Good read, thanks
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great ending to a great story. Thanks for the journey.
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Great read , very much enjoying their journey. One small slip up; not even the Queen Mary could get from Brisbane to Fremantle overnight, 5 to 7 nights yes, overnight, no way!
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I suspect a third party is either interfering or thinking they are doing good in some half baked misguided way.
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Jakes internal fight between desire and independence is well written. Very much enjoying this Thanks
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Sorry, I have to disagree with the first coment. This does not appear to be a story of "opposites attract"; its seems to me to be a story of two men both of whom have had life changeing events trying to find some sort of solice. Despite their difference places of origin, they are both on a similar path. It looks like these paths intersect. Looking forward to the next instalment! Thanks
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The dreaded "ex", nothing adds complication like an unwanted ex...
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"About Jared" is a little ominous.....
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Dearest C-T-H-S, with both the above statements you hit nail squarely on head! Yeh! 1) jj was bloody immature, but he has learned and 2) mark is first rate. We are in perfect and unanimous agreement. May your weekend continue as blissfully.
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Is jj showing faint hints at maturity? The first step is admiting you dont know something. After all the debate over the last episode, i really feel this moves things along. You are a bloody good writer Mr Arbour. Thank you.
