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Who is Fletcher mentioned early in the story regarding Mum? "she also had to look after Fletcher and keep us all fed,"
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Just for your info, Cadenza definition: In classical music, a cadenza is a long and difficult solo passage in a piece for soloist. A credenza is a cabinet-style piece of furniture that is typically used in a dining room.
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This has been one of the best series ever. Never boring and always moving forward. Thank you for giving me this pleasure. Bart
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Yo, Ho, Ho and a Bottle of Rum
badbart commented on R. Eric's story chapter in Yo, Ho, Ho and a Bottle of Rum
I tend to visualize a lot of things and this was disturbing. When Eric said, "I tightened my hold at his waste. “This was a once-in-a-lifetime trip.”" Waste is not something you would be holding, however it's more likely to be his "waist" that was being held. Even your mistakes are enjoyable. Bart -
I really enjoy your work, this is my second time to read the Kandric Saga. It just seems to flow so well that time races by. I have a feeling you are aware of the difference between ruin and rune, but just in case, check this link out. https://wikidiff.com/ruin/rune Bart
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I have enjoyed several of your stories and am enjoying this one too. I have noticed that a lot of your characters "sway their heads" I can visualize nodding, shaking, turning, ducking & so on, but not swaying of the head. Bart
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I have been following your stories for quite a while and I don't think I ever read one with so many errors in grammar, tense or that had to be read several times before it made sense. Even with these flaws, I still enjoy your work.
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This is without a doubt one of the best stories I have ever read. Wildly different from anything else, impossible to predict what comes next, hugely humorous. I loved the amusing names given to some characters, but Procura Tahrt is the perfect name for a MADAM. I definitely laughed out loud. I doubt you will be able to top this one, but I'll stay tuned to your efforts. Sincerely, Bart
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Without a doubt one of the best stories I've ever read.
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A great story and I am enjoying it. I'm just wondering why in the dialog there is no he said, she said. Everything is, he let out, she forced out.
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Great chapter, full of humor and other titillating activities.
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SO Not a Typical Monday!
badbart commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in SO Not a Typical Monday!
This is one of the best I have read in years. I found myself smiling through most of the story. Well written, wonderful humor and an overall feel good piece. A job very well done Robert, it's hard to believe this is your first story. Sincerely, Bart -
This is without a doubt the strangest, most unusual story I've ever read. It latched onto my curiosity and dragged me from chapter to chapter until I was finished reading and now I miss it's difference and humor. Great work.
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San Francisco: The Main Man!
badbart commented on MrM's story chapter in San Francisco: The Main Man!
This is the best chapter, out of many really good ones. I have enjoyed the "snowflake,snowplow, snowballs" banter all along, but the humor in this one and Snowflakes' description of what he is seeing is absolutely hilarious. Bart -
Some Questions Answered SOK3
badbart commented on Bill W's story chapter in Some Questions Answered SOK3
This is a great story, I have enjoyed each chapter and always try to mark the "liked" button, but I am often told I have reached my quota for the day. Never have found what the quota is or how it is determined, but know you would have received more from me had I been allowed. Bart -
I read this story quite a while ago and just re- read it. It's a great, fantastic work that cries for completion. Make it your New Year's resolution, PLEASE??
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I really like this story and especially this chapter, however, I seem to use up all my alloted "like" votes too soon. I'm an avid reader and since I wanted to let you know I would have given you a "like" for this one, I wasn't able to. Bart
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I just recently discovered this story and read through to Chapter 26. What I found is an extremely well written, exciting tale with a nice touch of humor added. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Well done LieLocks.
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I really like the story, but it's very difficult to read when your space bar only works occasionally.
