Haha Andy, after the 'gory' chapter do you think you should be linking to things like that?
Thanks, I am trying to keep things fresh and not 'rinse and repeat' things as that would get boring.
As for the scenery and the world, I'm constantly thinking in the back of my mind 'I know what it looks like but my reader doesn't so I need to pause and make sure they get a feel for what I see', so I'm glad that's paying off
The to work on: hehe, I'll try and remember that when I'm writing. (Too late for the next one, it's done and ready to go hehe).
Thanks Andy for reading
Oh and...anyone got any ideas what's going to happen yet? (besides the battle )