Andrew Q Gordon

Am thinking about getting an eReader for the Metro ride to work each day - Metro is the DC subway/rail system. Mike has an iPad and I don't want to spend that much - a color Nook is have that price. I know I can format my stuff in ePub format and read it on an iPad, so I am pretty sure I can read it on a Nook or Kindle. Anyone have an eReader - not an iPad but an eReader? We bought one for both our mom's for Christmas and they are both very happy with them. But I wanted to know if anyone has one and has used it to upload or download stuff from GA onto it? How satisfied are you with it etc. Thanks Andy

OMG Mike, that was too funny. If you did that you have too much time on your hands but still funny

Nah sorry Bee, the fantasy is no where close to being ready AND the lesbian couple doesn't make an appearance until the second book anyway - BUT you would like it I'm sure. Oh and I am going to just assume since you are reading right now - that you were the 25,000 read/view. SO thank you Bee.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY SKY!!!!! MAY ALL THE PRETTY MEN ... errrr WOMEN OF YOUR DREAM COME TRUE Just have some fun whatever you do.

Bee, I wish i could be helpful, but our three dogs were Odin, Sophie and Emma - so we are not exactly pickers of good dog names - I only got to pick one - and it wasn't Sophie and Emma. But Mable is always cute or Maris [i'm kinda on an "M" kick] Geraldine is good too, you can call her Dino for short Okay, I'll stop. Congrats and good luck

Thank you my dear - you might like my fantasy story a bit more - by book two one of the lead character is a lesbian. She and her partner are two of my more favorite characters in the book. As for this, I think the last 25-30 chapters are better written than the first 20-25 so hopefully you will enjoy it more as it goes on. At least I hope so.

Haha you think I didn't see that last bit - BUT - this is not Q-topolis, this is Jwolf's forum and it's about his story - not me -so this is Then again, I don't set the rules here so I cant stop you. And no more red - it's not my best color.

HC, thanks for the detailed review - I am not sure all of mine combined on ATSW were this long . I didn't really think 45 was a sudden reversal. I mean Peter had issues almost from day one with Jason's family's wealth. After the attack, it began manifesting itself here and there. As I tried to explain, by the end, it just boiled over. I planned from the start that this would be the end, and there would be a difficult period following the attach for the two. I think what you refer to has more to do with this being too long, by maybe half. It was suggested by others perhaps I split it in two. That might have been a better course. IDK. Food or thought for the next story. As for what's next, not sure. The fantasy needs work before I can post it. But I'll let you know Thanks for reading and reviewing - and all the points - I am sure they came from you LOL. Andy

So clearly the impression last chapter that Cooper was basically gay but didn't admit it was premature. He and Kyle are clearly liking each other but Kyle is correct to keep things on the causal for now, two dates does not a life time make. Not sure how much I like Rusty - no reason, just not sure. Okay, are there any ugly gay men in this story? Just wondering cause I'm feeling a tad insecure all the sudden

Several things, a) I like that we are learning more about Cooper - but it does seem a bit IDK odd maybe? that he went from straight to curious to a total horn dog for guys. b ) I like Kyle, he seems the perfect balance for Cooper - secure and confident but willing to let Cooper be in control. He knows what he wants and isn't shy about asking. c) This is dangerous - Kyle doesn't want dutch to know but he is hooking up with his best friends roommate. HMM. T-R-O-U-B-L-E! Good chapter Andy

Interesting how quickly young Mr. Cooper went from totally into girls to scaming on his tutor. Then when giving a chance to 'lose it' with David, he waited to lose it to Spencer instead - Freud would have a field day with this one And yeah, no more reading this on the Metro - don't want to be branded a perv.

I'd suggest Coronado - just across the bridge from San Diego. Has some touristy stuff - but what beach area doesn't - but is mostly a residential community - they have plenty of hotels etc, but it is isn't one giant tourist attraction like most beach areas. San Diego is as I said just over the bridge, or you can take the water taxi. The beach is decent - not the world's best but still good, and there's lots to do. Whatever you decide - enjoy it. Andy

I do think that would be appropriate JW - I mean who knew and it was almost embarassing - good thing I could turn and face the door. Serves me right for what? I can't believe Jonathan lets mean people like you to post here hmph Okay so you really aren't that mean, but it is fun to tease you .

As Sam said, this was a gallop. There was a line from Monty Python's Meaning of Life movie I always thought so apt in situations like this. The teacher asks the kids how to get the woman ready for sex - and the first kid says rub the clitoris. The teacher shoots back - what's wrong with a kiss boy - and lists a few other things then says all this before we stampede to the clitoris. BUT this was fun. Spencer sounds like a real piece of work - he is going to have some effect on Cooper. Now to see what happens. Seems like cooper might not be so sure he is straight after all. Andy

Wow, that was some journey. I hope you do write the sequel, which is really more a continuation of this story because clearly this one isn't over. Still, Jacob surviving, in some fashion is good I guess. What puzzles me is why Victor Cross would make that deal with Jacob. it prevented him from doing what he told Anehol he was going to do. Or then again did it? Tricky HC. Which is why you need to write book 2. I'll save the thanks for the epilogue, or maybe they won't be so thankful if you really leave us hanging. Andy

So Wolf, I realize I am late to the game, but things being things it took me a bit to get to this. I sent you an PM with thoughts but figured I would toss these out here - First - dude you should write porn - no seriously. Very little makes me uncomfortable reading on the train, usually its just - meh, whatever - yeah, I can't read the list on the train, Tried reading chapter two - Big mistake - Huge [sorry I just read the shopping comments] Second - Clearly I went to the wrong school - work in the wrong place - shop in the wrong stores - cause there ain't near the trade Cooper and Spencer are collecting and I am only on chapter 2 LOL. So 3-8 are gonna have to wait until I am home - don't want to be obvious in public. Andy

Rather disappointing that Monday's chapter didn't make it up today - Oh well, maybe tomorrow it will be fixed?

I'm told I do sad well, not sure that is good, I must be a very sad person to be able to make people it so strongly But, even though no one died, it was how I saw the story unfolding. Probably should have ended it around 35 and started a second story - with the rest. Oh well, it's done. Thanks for read HC - -- Andy

Gracious but the love struck are dim. Bashta's lament that he has no clan to sing for him would seem foolish even to him if he took the time to think. But, then that is for the next chapter to work out, isn't it?? Nice images by the way - poor Cavel, having to endure Bashta's naked body - such a terrible burden. Oh you are so mean Cia.

FINALLY!!!! That's all, just finally. [Hey if you can be a great big Cia tease, why not me???]

We have three - I have a '08 Jeep Wrangler soft top with 8600 miles on it - I plan to pass it on to the Kid some day so I am babying it. He has a 06' Jaguar XJ-8 Vanden Plas - complete with snack tracks in the back seats. And the dogs have a '04 Subaru Outback Wagon. Not sure why I do, but I have this undying passion for Jeep Wranglers. It was my first and so far only vehicle [it's not a car] I've owned, this is my fourth one. Just something about taking the top down, sitting up high, shifting gears with the music blaring that you don't get with other cars. Oh well, watch my kid crash my baby withing a month of me giving it to them. :wacko:

Does this mean Derrick is the 'Love Doctor?" I mean Patty wanted his 'Professional' opinion didn't she? Or was that him just offering it? So the funny farm just got crazier. Poor Blake, Just when Haze is about to profess his undying love, Patty shows up and pushes Blake into the arms of her irresistibly hot gay BFF. So, a little mind numbing drugs, a little drinky, a horny gay man trying to score - yup Blake's gonna get laid next chapter and Haze is gonna be PISSed - See my chapter name suggestion from last chapter will be perfect for the next one. Of course Haze can't say too much, after all his beard is with him, so Blake is perfectly free to while away his time with Derrick, who of course is only there for the fun. So when he and Patty leave, then Haze and Blake are free to shack up - Oh wait, mum's still there - she won't like it if he screws up his 'thing' with Patty. Shucks, just when I had it all worked out. See this is what happens when you write a chapter with nothing to complain about - I just go off on crazy tangents, speculating about things that haven't been written yet. Okay, I shut up and hit, 'add review.'

Lovely title for a chapter, so engrossing. Can I suggest a title name? Pissed Off? Okay enough Potty Humor. At least we know where Haze get's his crazy behavior from - Mum isn't all there herself now is she? On second thought is anyone all there is this story? Blake - no, Haze - no, Mum - no - Nats - no. Quite the interesting cast of character from which to weave your web.

Hmmm. That chapter was interesting in many ways. You wove so many subplots and hinted at other things that it's hard to say it was satisfying - and I don't mean that in a bad way - It left me eager to hit the next chapter button, but alas there is no next chapter just yet - this is why I wait to read things, I am too impatient. But wow, I really like how easy to grasp your world is. Now if we can only get the boys together.

No arguments - this time Soo does this mean they will get together or are you teasing us? Sorry about all that. Why just temporary? Seems like it's gonna suck moving again soon. For me??? Awwww Gonna go read now