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    City

    Marzipan commented on Lugh's story chapter in City

    Urban aesthetics appeal to me with its dark side. In this poem I almost lost the the cracks of light forever present, but then I found the dandelion there.
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    Childhood

    Marzipan commented on Lugh's story chapter in Childhood

    That was kinda sorta touching. Yup. I liked it.
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    You bring a mystery to the story with this chapter! Jej.
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    Chapter 2: Jesus

    Marzipan commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Chapter 2: Jesus

    Self deceit to the max for Tyler. The throwing up afterwards, O-Ou... I felt quite sad and depressed reading Tyler's and Travis' hooking up. Then again, I have faith for you that you can walk me right through these hard emotions.
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    J, I'm hooked with this start. Really good. Two men stuck in a nowhere -place in their lives. The harsh reality of trailer park -life came through well.
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    Nicely builing up the connection between Bashta and Cavel. I like that the other cats get more role too The jungle is a great surrounding to this story! Is there gonna be any external danger? Or just the danger presented by the mysterious fever?
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    Chapter 2

    Marzipan commented on Freddyness's story chapter in Chapter 2

    *chills* This was just beautiful. I wish they will learn too.
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    Freddiness, this was a really touching, yet troubling poem to read. You definitely delivered the feelings of insuffiency and selfhatred and dissapointment to me. My favourite part was the ending, the pointless revenge.
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    Thanx for the tip Cia But I usually like to visit my fried's profiles at the same time, but maybe if I want to avoid this repeating problem I'm just gonna follow your suggestion
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    Chapter 1

    Marzipan commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Overall I liked this story's idea, the whole consept, especially the starting was so dramatic. And the ending was perfect with Mitchell's fater coming to his senses. At some points in the middle part of the story you maybe had too much explanation and stated the obvious, but not so much that it really bothered. Then there was the size 10' farm tool Still, enjoyable shortie
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    Sorry guys for having clumsy fingers I don't seem to be able to send a PM without removing peeps from my friend list first. Does anyone else have the same problem or am I the only one? So, just my public appologies to Frosty for excample
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    Epilogue - The End

    Marzipan commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Epilogue - The End

    I fell in love with both of your boys and I have a special place in my heart for David and Nikki too. Definitely one of my all time favoutite stories. I can't wait to start Enigma II, although I wanna enjoy of the serenity that you left this story with for just a little while. One thing was left to haunt me. Who was the faceless Master? I have a seriously bad feeling about the Master. Thank you Nephylim!
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    So, that was oficially hot! Wow!
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    This was even more a healing chapter. Yes! I needed this. Thank you Nephy! Tou brought me to the lowest of lows and now I'm climbing up again. **Sighs, this is going to end to soon**
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    This emotional setback of Silver's was bound to come. So nice to have closure to David's story. Btw I love graveyards. But really, do you notice a tiny parallel to The Face in the Window?
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    This was sweet relief after all the agonising dirt you pulled the boys through. Still few chapters to go... it is gonna be smooth sailing from now on, right?
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    Just a concussion, right? You are meanie XD **hops to the next chapter**
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    Enter Faith. I think I like this villain. He has a sence of drama in him. Even the name choice for him is interesting! But I still want him to suffer. I have few methods I'd like to try on him... Poor cute police guy...
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    I have watched it a couple of times and since it is a true story it is one of those heartbreakers. I really hate to see people suffer so much and bigots make my blood boil.
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    She must take her own path... The best thing you can do is to be there for her. If you do see that she needs more help, you must tell to someone. It might be the best friend act you can do - even if she hates you for it. Don't let her fall. And please don't take responsibility on her actions. Heartbreak can be a bitch. I hope she will be fine soon.
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    Start of a new life, I can see them growing happily old together. Poor Silver still hides his pain. I want him to get well and flexible enough to... you know I'll just read now
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    Omy, this was powerful. I think I'm in love with the way you play with the words. **reads more from this collection tonight**
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    Do not fear

    Marzipan commented on Agaith's story chapter in Do not fear

    Who need rhymes when the words put together open such a beatiful view. I loved this poem, I loved the way the "lover" made the protagonist feel.
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    Salvation

    Marzipan commented on Agaith's story chapter in Salvation

    Though it was ominous, there was the being together part. Sharing what ever may come. That I like
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    Wow. Just Wow. River is so good to Silver. They are so right together. I hope things won't go wrong again.
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