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Shit, shit, shit, Toshiro has to live, damn it! lol Poor Jason is such a mess. But thank God Toshi's alive. Hopefully he'll heal and stay with Jason. What happened to the guys who kidnapped him? Did Sakura die when she fell out of the window? And how the hell did that happen? This was another nail-biting chapter, Sui!
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Chapter 1- "Secrets Best Kept Hidden"
Lisa commented on Insurgency's story chapter in Chapter 1- "Secrets Best Kept Hidden"
I'm so sad for Asher. He's gotta be heartbroken that his best friend broke up their friendship over something that should not have mattered to a "friend" at all. Well, maybe the crush part, but still...I can't imagine ending a lifelong friendship with someone b/c of something they can't even help. I love Asher's mom though; he lucked out in that regard. I'm looking forward to reading more. -
I LOVED QAF, but I didn't like Brian Kinney's character. Personally, I thought he treated Justin like shit and with Ethan, Justin finally had someone who treated him right. Well, until the whole Ethan-cheating-on-him-at-the-concert thingy. lol I just thought Fabrizio (Ethan) was just yummy. lol For lack of a better word. I used to be obsessed with him, always checking his website, etc. Crazy. I wonder what he's doing now? Anyway...I didn't read the chapter yet. lol Just wanted to comment on how excited I am to read about QAF characters.
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Chapter 2- My frist real crime
Lisa commented on Another Gay Writer's story chapter in Chapter 2- My frist real crime
Another sad chapter AGW. Things will get really bad for Jimmy if Matt's parents forbid Matt to see him. Then what will Jimmy do? -
H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y J A M M I !!! I hope you had a great day yesterday! I got to wish you a happy b-day twice now.
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H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y J A M E S !!! I hope you had a wonderful b-day yesterday. Now I got to wish you a happy b-day twice.
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I'm glad Matt went back to get Andy and I'm glad he apologized to him. I think an LGBT club or GSA is a great idea! They should all join! I hope Andy eventually throws out Derrick's card w/o ever calling him. Derrick is just like Dillon. Another great chapter, Elias!
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Hmmmm, sounds so familiar!! I have to go back and reread the beginning of RRS. lol And of course I know why this story is coming to mind. Unfortunately. Yes, you are quite the tease with your chapter ending the way it did.
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Omg, Ron's comment had me cracking up! lol They were very sweet together. Alex seems like the real deal. I don't even want to read how it's all gonna come to an end. But of course, I can't stop reading. Great chapter, Val.
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I don't know how I missed this update. It was wonderful. Alex is such a sweet guy and he's not looking for a quick wham, bam, thank you Sam (I just thought of that off the top of my head. lol); he wants to take it nice and slow, which is nice nowadays. Like the LBO, I forgot all about the fact that Alex isn't alive anymore. It definitely makes the chapter more poignant. Ok, on to chapter three.
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Very good start to the story, Mark Anthony. The chapter was short but well written and engaging. I'm looking forward to the second installment.
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Oh, I forgot to tell you, AGW, that I LOVE your avatar! It's so pretty! Where did you find the picture?
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Chapter 1- This is my life
Lisa commented on Another Gay Writer's story chapter in Chapter 1- This is my life
Jimmy has a very sad home life. I wonder if Matthew's dad just feels sorry for him and that's why he wants to give him a ride home. I could see it both ways though; he could not like Jimmy b/c he thinks he's a bad influence on his son. And yes, to agree w/Roland, there are quite a few typos, lack of punctuation, etc. that if corrected would really clean up the chapter. I look forward to the second installment. -
H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y M A N N !!! I hope you have an awesomely terrific day, Mann!!!
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You go, Toshi! I hope that he's able to pull this off; he's definitely at a disadvantage though with his hands cuffed. How the hell is he gonna get his daggers? And thank God Jason's alive. Hopefully he and Agent Baron will track them to the city. Great chapter, Sui! I'm so glad you're back!
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Oh wow, what a chapter! lol I was reading your response to Benji's review and I had to laugh. You did a great job with the sex scene. I wrote a couple of sex scenes for two stories I edit; it was fun. But then again, if I didn't read all this gay porn I wouldn't know what the hell I was doing! I wonder what Cj has up his sleeve in regards to C&C. Nothing good I know. I know how Corey's parents want to protect him from the fallout and I think that if that wasn't in the back of their minds they wouldn't have had THAT big a problem with Corey sneaking out. Well, Lee would, but Corey's mom is a gem and she knows just what to say to calm Lee down. Thank God. lol Excellent chapter, Krista! Especially the truck scene!
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Omg, this is my song, I've been listening to the radio all night long, sitting around waiting for it to come on, and here it is. Woops, wrong song. Seriously though, I just LOVE this song, Edward! My kids can't stand it but I crank it up when it's on. Good taste!
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Between A Rock And A Hard Cock
Lisa commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in Between A Rock And A Hard Cock
Yep, I agree with Timothy and Jo Ann; of course Shas kept Kieran a secret from Becca's family and he kept Robin a secret from Kieran for pretty much the same reason, well, to protect him. But Robin sounds like a little spitfire; I think he can hold his own with Kieran. Great chapter, Sasha! At least I'm not crying!! lol -
Wow, I'm just speechless, Sasha. I was reading this in my car while my kid was having a driving lesson. When I got to the hospital scene (not realizing there wasn't much left to read after that), I put the phone down b/c number one, I was crying my eyes out in the car, in the middle of the damn parking lot, and my dog was looking at me funny, and number two, I just couldn't bear to read anymore until I got home. I thought about it the whole way home. Unlike the majority of your readers, I am really clueless and I had NO IDEA something horrible was going to happen. I know Luke is going to feel guilty, as some readers have pointed out. He will think that if he had stayed his brother probably wouldn't have gone out that night. And of course he's going to feel guilty b/c even if he was there and Greg did go out that night, he would have spent some quality time with him and his family. Now he missed his brother's last day. And Thanksgiving will forever be a horrible holiday for all of them. Shit, I'm crying as I'm writing this. Damn you, Sasha. Oh, and I usually don't comment on what other readers have said, but Luke and his family will not get over this anytime soon. Getting over something 'soon' to me means you broke up with your b/f or g/f of six months or so. So yeah, it sucks that you guys broke up, but you'll get over it soon. Losing a family member, not so soon. Every holiday during that first year will be horrible. Christmas, which is right around the corner will no longer be a joyous occasion. Next Thanksgiving will be a terrible reminder that it's been only one year since Greg's death. No, they won't be getting over this soon. And the parents will NEVER get over this. Ok, well, sorry to kind of run away with this review here. lol Hurry up and post the next chapter, Sasha. I have a feeling I'm not done with my tears.
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Wow, Matt was being such an ass. I can't believe he left Andy at the restaurant. Even if he was angry with him, he still should have taken him home. Some date he is! lol
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Omg, Uncle T better be ok!!!! Holy crap, what happened????? And don't they say that many accidents happen close to home? As usual, the boys stole the chapter! We is going to the arcade! You gots to get up and get the lead on! (Was that the saying? lol) They are so precious. I love reading this story b/c it just gives me such a good feeling. The whole holiday was terrific (well, minus the accident, of course), and I felt like I was there with them, celebrating Turkey Day. But hey, I wanna hear more about David, Greg, and Keith's night!! lol
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Chapter 15 - Walking With Giants
Lisa commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 15 - Walking With Giants
Omg Tristan is so cute! I'd be kinda annoyed too at all the fans wanting Jesse's attention. But then again, w/o the fans, there would be no Jesse. Well, we'll see how Tristan and Jesse fare in the long run. I always love the HEA stories, but realistically, they're pretty young to be thinking forever. But that will never stop me from reading! I love all these teen stories. lol -
H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y L A Y L A !!!! I hope you're having a terrific day!!
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No Sympathy For The Devil
Lisa commented on Sasha Distan's story chapter in No Sympathy For The Devil
A dog lover and a children lover! Who could ask for more? It's so wonderful that he's helping out with kids who aren't even related to him. lol That shows such a sweet, human side to him. I'm looking forward to chapter three. -
Greg sounds like a great big brother. Hopefully he'll like Erie and vice-versa. And I know everyone's not going to agree with me, but I'm siding with Luke's mom. Greg is only home for four days. He hasn't been home in eight months. Luke sees Erin every day and Erin can cook for him the next day or something. I think if Luke isn't going to stay home, then he should do something to please both of them: spend half the time at Erin's and then half the time at home (with Erin there). Maybe eat the main dinner at Erin's but then they would both go to Luke's for dessert and hang out afterwards. But he shouldn't leave for the entire day. I am looking forward to reading about the big day anyway.
