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  1. Great review, Cole! You wrote a beautiful review of a terrific story.
  2. H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y N E V E R!!!! I hope you have a great b-day, Never!!
  3. H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y G R A E M E!!!! I hope you're having a terrific b-day, Graeme!!!!
  4. Lisa

    Chapter 7

    I like LadyDe's take on the rest of the story! i just hope by the time Robbie and Sean get to Daniel's it won't be too late. And this time Daniel HAS TO PRESS CHARGES and send his sorry ass back to jail where he belongs!!! Great chapter, Val!
  5. Lisa

    Chapter 6

    I don't know where I've been that I missed this chapter's update. I was waiting for my kid to get out of driver's ed, so I read this chapter and the next one. Poor Daniel - he's only staying with Trevor out of fear for Sean. I hope Sean and Robbie can get Daniel out of this abusive mess.
  6. Lisa

    Chapter 1 - John

    I love your story so far, Roland! I liked reading about how John and Tim met. Now I'm curious how the others met and how they decided to try this poly-relationship thingy.
  7. Wow, good for Josh! He really stuck up for himself and knew exactly what to say to make his parents feel guilty. As if him being raised by his mom's sister wasn't enough guilt to lay on them. Even if it was tradition and had to be done. He certainly is no pushover, that's for sure! He handled himself very maturely when speaking with the servants and his parents. He did well remembering how his aunt taught him how to calm down by counting to ten. Most fourteen year olds would have flown off the handle immediately. Great chapter, Andy!!
  8. H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y M A R K!!!! I hope you're having a great b-day, Mark!
  9. Lisa

    Chapter 10

    Randy was hysterical! Even though he's been pretty much an asshole for quite awhile, I will admit he was funny in court. From coming in wearing jeans to his 'I love sex, don't you' (or however he worded it), confession, he was funny. And of course with Randy, it was only a matter of time before he hooked up with someone; he just happened to meet Dillon first. Matt's coach is the best. His speech was amazing and so supportive and understanding. Of course I'd love to find out what rumors he was talking about. lol Great job, Elias!
  10. Lisa

    Chapter 13

    What a beautiful chapter, Fitz! Welcome Shannon - she will be so loved. Noah and Scott are so generous letting Brandi and Deshawne rent their vacant apartment. I just hope that now that Shannon has been born, they don't want to swoop in and take over, so to speak. This may definitely complicate things.
  11. H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y T H O R N !!!! I hope you have a wonderful b-day, Thorn!!
  12. Lisa

    Birthday Surprise

    I'm so glad you're back to writing, KC!!! I'm thrilled you're feeling better! This was such a beautiful chapter. Who knew Michael was such a romantic? lol And what a beautiful way to spend a birthday - at the shore! My kinda b-day. =) I've read your other reviewer responses, so I know their happiness may not last long....so not looking forward to that! lol Keep up the great work (and health) KC!
  13. Lisa

    Chapter 1

    Great start, Metro! Can't wait for the next chapter.
  14. Lisa

    Chapter 1

    Holy shit, Louis! That was creepy! But did it ever occur to David to just walk around the door? lol And where the hell did he go?
  15. Sniff, sniff...that was the end? Omg, three years of reading about Miracle, I'm not sure I can just let him go like that. All I want to do is reach out and give him a hug and never let go. The psychiatrist at the end hit the nail on the head: Miracle needs to learn how to live w/o anyone else, without anyone leading him. He has to learn to do this all on his own. I was doing ok reading the chapter until Jeremy pushed the picture of Miracle sitting in between Jaemin and Issac. Then I lost it. This was such a great story, Trevor. I will admit, there were many chapters, (many in the Skylar-centered ones), that I thought, wait a minute, that wouldn't happen, lol, but you just can't help loving the story and the characters minus Skylar, Rachel, Ashley, Jack, Phillip, and of course that scumbag Eric. But all the others I loved. I'll have to check out your new story, even though supernatural stories aren't really my thing. But I'll give it a shot b/c you're writing it!
  16. Dammit, I hit the wrong button and it erased my whole review. I was almost done with it. Ok, Reader's Digest version: Trevor, dude, you're killing me. I hit the 'like' button but I really didn't like this chapter at all. Not b/c of your writing, but b/c of the content. I can't stop crying. You know, when Jaemin was first introduced, I didn't really like him. I thought he was dangerious for Miracle. I liked Sterling. And plus Jaemin did these horrible things like push Sterling down a flight of steps and try to manipulate Miracle. But as time went on, I realized he really and truly loves Miracle. The statement he said to Miracle in the last chapter - that just came true. He loved Miracle so much that he died for him, just so he could be free. What I don't understand is why he thought he was holding Miracle back. I know he didn't plan on shooting himself in front of Miracle, but still, who did he think would find his body? Miracle. Miracle was already traumatized by everything in his past and things in his not-so-past-past. Did Jaemin ever think that Miracle would never get over this? Miracle just lost a former boyfriend and very good friend, Issac. All Jaemin did was to add to his misery. Miracle will never get over this. He would need therapy for his entire life and STILL not get over this. Now I think Jaemin was selfish. He could have just fucking walked away. Why the hell did he have to kill himself? And where the hell were Erica and Craig? Weren't they back from her almost-affair, and his work by then? I'm just so upset now. Miracle is going to walk right up to that train. I have to read the prologue again. I haven't read it since it was posted - how long ago was that? lol So I'm gonna reread it. I can't tell you how upset I am.
  17. Shit, poor Issac. What the hell is Ashley doing with Eric? Poor Sterling - he really thinks that she loves him? The whole thing with Miracle's new car is, I don't know what it is, but it's not good. lol Diamonds, really? And is that even a Mercedes dealership? And he's gonna drive that car in the city? And park it in the city? I hope he gets lots of insurance on it - b/c once he parks it for the first time, he'll never see it again. Truth. Can you imagine what the druggies would get for that car? Omg, lol. And I've always meant to ask - I don't remember if I ever did, but where in the city does Miracle's house stand? With a driveway? Or is he in a suburb that may have houses like Staten Island? Maybe Brooklyn? Queens has houses...and of course Long Island, but they make it into the city too quickly for him to be in Long Island. And didn't Stefano "die" like a thousand times? The last I saw it was when they blamed everyone from Marlena to Will (are he and the new Sonny still together, I hope), to the James guy, shit, I forgot his name on the show. Will used to work for him. Tall, English, suppposed to be Stefano's son I think. Anyway...off topic. Oh wait, there's a little thingy for that. lol Ok, on to the next chapter. Wow, I just noticed, the next chapter is the title of the story. Hmm, what does that mean?
  18. First off - slow down!!!! Lol, I can't keep up with you!!!! haha Second - poor Issac! How the hell is he gonna get outta this one? And what a sweet thing for Jaemin to say to Miracle about loving him so much he'd die for him. =) Although I think it was a rotten thing for Steve to do filming Miracle, it was a stupid thing for Miracle to do. But hey, he got a free car out of it. lol Ok, on to the next chapter. God, I feel like I'll never catch up.
  19. Marco!!! Shit, where the hell did I come up with Morgan??? lol This story just keeps getting better and better.
  20. Wow, what a chapter! lol I think I have to go back and reread some chapters. I'm a little confused - there's two murderers, right? One is The Ripper and the other is Morgan, right? Or is Morgan The Ripper and someone else is the Lake Michigan Killer (sorry, I don't remember what he called himself)? And is Morgan also targeting Davis and Ryan's family b/c their father was married to his sister Natalia? Ok, on to the next chapter.
  21. Lisa

    Chapter 3

    Why the hell would John confess his feelings (for lack of a better word), to Emmett? Was he tormenting and bullying him BECAUSE he liked him? Or did he just wake up that day and decide he wanted him? lol Well, it doesn't really matter - John will never get Emmett; Jayden will see to that. lol I just hope Emmett isn't too freaked out when he wakes up and he's in his shifter body - whatever he shifted into. At least he already knows about his wings. lol Great chapter, Shadow!
  22. Lisa

    Chapter 28

    "Dude, I wouldn't fuck this spoiled little brat with your dick." Omg, I was spewing my coffee all over with that line. When I first read "You're over too" (or something like that), from Rex, I thought he meant that Eli was fired. Glad I was wrong. I hope that's the last we see of Derek and Reagen, although I doubt it. lol And welcome back, Rob! You were missed!!
  23. This was a really sad chapter, Renee. One of my son's best friends joined the Army (I probably mentioned it in a previous review), and he was deployed to Afghanistan a few months ago. I can't imagine the sadness and fear that his parents and brother are going through. And I would be doing the same thing as Diane - finding any excuse to keep them there a bit longer. Terrific chapter, Renee.
  24. At least this Siggi is a nice Siggi. And knowing how sweet Dmitri is, I can't see him getting angry with Siggi. Looking forward to more.
  25. I think Miracle and his friends can stop harassing Sterling and Ashley. Just let it go, Miracle. lol I definitely think Miracle should take Jaemin's advice about Phillip - he may be more dangerous than just your 'average' stalker. I'd watch out if I were Miracle.
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