Lisa

When I first read the title of this story all I thought of was, "Omg, he wrote a story about the guy from Chico and the Man!!! lol Jack Albertson was the older guy in the TV series. He also played one of Charlie's grandfathers in Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory. lol Anyway...it's a good start to a story. I'm looking forward to reading more about these two guys. Ok, on to chapter two.

Omfg Kevin!!!!! Stop listening to your stupid horndog friends!!!!! lol I'm glad Rory talked some sense into Kevin before Kevin totally blew it. The way the chapter ended seemed like the end of the story. Is it? I'd love to read more about Kevin and Rory. Ok, now on to my Jesse. (sigh...)

So Comsie, I had to reread the whole six chapters just so I could remember who's who. lol And it's all coming back to me know. Hmm, that was a song, wasn't it? lol Anyway...yes, now I remember - Kyle and his idiot sidekick Jason. lol They are so insensitive, let me tell you. They're filling Kevin with all these ridiculous notions about what Rory is ultimately looking for and if Kevin doesn't provide it in a certain amount of time, then Rory will find someone else. They know Kevin's insecurities, well, maybe they don't, but still, they're idiots. lol Kevin really needs to stop listening to them b/c now he's second guessing himself. with everything he does. He better call Rory and stop making Rory feel as if he did something wrong. The earlier chapters when Rory was saying he could be 'him' online and it didn't matter what he looked like. It reminded me of the Brad Paisley song, "So Much Cooler Online". lol Ok, on to chapter seven.

Now I have to go back and figure out who Jasper is. lol It was so obvious that Hayden was crying out for attention every time she misbehaved. It's too bad her parents were to self-absorbed to care.

Idk about Taranis and Fear...I was thinking more on the lines of Taranis and Yaddie. Taranis can protect Yaddie and Zegan would be happy Yaddie found himself someone who can love and protect him. At least I think Zegan would be happy, although I know it wouldn't be like Yaddie would throw himself at Taranis or anything - he's still in love with Zegan. It would take time. Anyway, that's my two cents on the matter. lol Another exciting chapter, Addy!

I don't trust anyone in this story! lol The only people I trust are Yaddie and Zegan, and Zegan's not even alive!!!! lol And who the hell is there to threaten them now? Poor Yaddie - he can never catch a break! This was another exciting chapter, Cole! Now on to read Addy's chapter.

Goddammit!! I had a whole fucking LONG review and stupid IE crashed on me!! And I'm only using IE b/c my GA wasn't loading on my stupid MSN browser. Ugh...ok, Reader's Digest version: (I remember most of the review...) I gotta hand it to you, Sasha; you had me crying with Derrick's beautiful speech about how much he loves Cherrie and how he would even give up his best bud Luke (gasp!), if he had to for her. Then you had me rip-roaring angry, ready to slam my fist through my computer screen at the ignorant, idiot parent that voiced a complaint against our boys. I don't have time for stupid, small-minded people like that. Did that stupid parent realize that Luke's been gay his whole life and he's been changing in the locker room and showering with her son for quite some time now. Did Luke turn him gay? I think not! Stupid people. And shame on Coach for not backing his team!!!! How he can bow down to asinine people like that is beyond me. Good for Luke and Erie's teams for backing them. That made me cry too. Then of course you made me laugh with Heather regretting missing all the boys kissing. lol i'm glad the cheerleading fangirls finally got to cheer about Luke and Erie kissing. Terrific chapter, Sasha!!

H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y B I L L Y !!!! Now I get to wish you a happy b-day twice!!!! Hope you're having a great day!

I absolutely LOVED this story! I'm so glad it's being showcased. Congrats, Cole!

Matt and Thomas' date was so cute. And of course it was going to end with sex. This is Matt and Thomas we're talking about, after all!

Another great chapter, Eric! I really feel for Steven; he's so confused, still not really willing to admit to himself that he's gay. It's just too bad he totally burned all his bridges with Danny and Jake. I'm really liking Ian though; he's a little spitfire! lol Oh, which reminds me, he's not that little. He's 5'7", ok, he's four inches shorter than Steven, but at 5'7", it's not like he's a little pipsqueak or anything. You write about his small dainty hands...my youngest is almost 5'7" and his hands are larger than mine. Not at all small. And he's a very slim kid. I would think the word slim would be more fitting than small. Just my opinion though. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I'm an idiot! I reread your warning about the prompt. Thank God I did! I thought the spoiler was at the end of the prompt chapter for THIS first chapter, but it's for the end of the whole story, right? So I shouldn't read the prompt until the story is completed. Or did I totally misunderstand?

Terrific chapter, Val! I can't wait to read more! Now I'm going to check out your prompt. =)

Love it, love it, love it!!!! I don't think I read the prompt, but I will after I finish the first chapter. Excellent story - I'm so curious to find out what happened to Alex and what happened with Aaron's accident.

Ha, they're at the Waldorf! lol Hopefully they got rid of all their bedbugs. That's so exciting though - especially with their family there with them. I wonder if Davis stored their clothes on the plane ahead of time? But what an awesome gift! Not sure if it beats two twenty-minute bjs though. Wow, twenty minutes each? Can anyone say lockjaw? Bryce's dad was funny when he told them to get it on in the limo. lol Anyway...I just wanted to point out a couple of sentences where you were missing words: I think in this sentence you wanted to say: "...you can wake ME up like this..." "Hey gorgeous. If that’s what your blowjobs feel like, you can wake up like this every morning. You want me to give you pleasure now?” And in this sentence you need a 'keep' before 'their' and after 'they'. They had been sleeping in the same bed since mid-September, or so they believed. How could they their hands to themselves? The whole phone call with Xander was confusing b/c I didn't realize that Bryce had taken the phone. I just thought Davis was talking the whole time, so when Bryce was talking to Xander I was taken aback. Then it was mentioned that Bryce handed the phone back to Davis, but there wasn't anything in there where Davis gave him the phone. Anyway...enough with the crits. I don't mean to be that way, I just thought you might like to know. It was a great chapter - nice and light and happy. I know that won't last though! lol I look forward to the next chapter, Tony. Have a happy 4th!

CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR SIXTEEN-YEAR ANNIVERSARY, COMSIE!!! And wow! You've posted a few stories and various chapters that I can't wait to read! I wanted to read this one first though. What an excellent chapter!! I'm just hoping that the branch Evan and Greyson are sitting on doesn't break and they come flying down to the ground, totally ruining Asa and Chandler's moment! Every time I read Chandler's name I think of that hunk-a-hunk-a manmeat, Chandler Massey who used to be in Days of Our Lives. Ok, on to your other stories...

"We is ready. You gots to get your pj's on...." Those kids are adorable! I gots to write a good review for that! Thank God Sarah will be ok. I can't believe her ob/gyn miscalculated her due date by THREE weeks! lol

Hey...I meant to ask: what are you doing up so late????? Oh wait, that's me! lol It's already 8:30 by you. lol Shit, what are you doing up so early????? Ok, I'm shutting off my computer now. Hopefully later on when I turn it back on, I'll be able to get online. And Addy - your German boys are hunka-hunka manmeat! lol

Yay Addy!!!!

As usual, Sasha, I love your new story!! So Kieran's birthday is on the same day as his cousin's wedding. That's pretty cool. I'm dying to know what his parents do/did for a living! lol I hope this wasn't just a one shot; will there be more?

I'm so glad the jury found Dillon guilty of at least raping Matt. When I first read that they found him innocent of raping the other three boys, i was like WHAT???? lol I'd love to know what his sentencing will be. Hopefully it will include lots of therapy. I'm glad Gina was more receptive to Matt. He was being so honest with her and he could really use her friendship now.

Great chapter, Kitt! Ya had me going up until the end! lol I was ready to run too!

Yes, Three for Jake is a terrific story! I remember that one too. =) I haven't read the others, but now I'm going to.

I read Category 5 a year or so ago. I was riveted from the first word. It's an excellent story with so much excitement I found myself sitting at the edge of my seat on pins and needles wondering what would happen next. =) This was actually the first story I ever read by CJ. I love the way he writes with all his twists and turns and of course his famous cliffies (which obviously was not in the antho story)! If you're a fan of CJ's, you won't want to miss Category 5.

H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y O W L !!! I hope you have a great birthday, Owl!!!