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Chapter 11 - Confrontations Part 1
Lisa commented on arsimms's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Confrontations Part 1
Omg, dude, you can't kill Kieran!!!! Damn, what a cliffie. lol This is such a good story, Tony. Can't wait for the next chapter. -
Chapter 10 - Halloween Horrors
Lisa commented on arsimms's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Halloween Horrors
Wow, what a chapter, Tony! So much has happened. I can't believe The Ripper killed all those innocent girls. Do one of them have any ties to Kieran or Ryan? Or Bryce or Davis for that matter? Ok, on to the next bloodbath. lol -
I ditto Carrie; the song is now going in a loop in my head. lol And I really do love George Michael, especially when he was with Wham! (shhh, don't tell anyone! lol). Actually, "Young Guns" is one of my all time favorite songs. But "Father Figure" was one of my favorites of the solo George, that and "Careless Whisper". I also love Carrie's 'Domdick'. I took the 'e' out b/c then it sounds like Dome and not Dom. Yes, Dom is an ass and why does he not like our boy Corbin? I'm really starting to like Mike. At the beginning I didn't like him b/c he was stringing Corbin along, not even calling him when he was in Texas over the summer. Now that's mean. But now it seems like he's turned a new leaf and maybe he really does care for Corbin. I loved that Corbin has two non boyfriends that want to take him on non dates. lol But when Pete called (and said, "Hey, killer.", just like what Mike calls Corbin), I was like CANCEL, CANCEL, CANCEL!!!! There should have been some other lie he could have told Pete. Telling him he has to be IN THE HOUSE doing some rush thing for Parent's Weekend is such a bad idea. Did it not occur to Corbin that Pete could come over to hang out while Corbin is doing his thing? What if Pete drops by during the night, and oh no! No Corbin! Then what? I think that's just a disaster waiting to happen. I do hope he finds some good ammo to use against that bitch Melanie. Great chapter, as always, Jon!
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You had me tearing up there also! It was a beautiful wedding and of course it wouldn't be a wedding w/o Penguin, the Tuxedo Cat. I'm glad things worked out well for everyone: Robbie and Siobahn (I spelled that wrong, didn't I?), and their little girl, and especially Daniel and Sean. Terrific story, Val! I can't wait for your next one! =)
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Awww, John Holmes was so sweet! See, he acts like Noah's already family. =) I did get a kick out of Eli's dad's name. I didn't realize it before, when we were first introduced to him, but just now reading his name, I'm thinking, "I've heard that name before. Isn't that the guy who did porn back in the day?" So...I Googled him, and guess what? John C. Holmes was a porn star and he was famous for his big schlong. lol He was affectionately known as Johnny Wadd.
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When I saw you posted another story I couldn't wait to read it. I didn't have time to sit and read the whole thing until today when I was sitting in the waiting room while one of my kids was having a surgical procedure. What a terrific story, Sasha! I loved it from the first word to the last! I thought it was so cute the way Davis bit his lip whenever he was nervous. lol And I loved it even more b/c it took place way out in the west: Central Jersey. lol Like Kitt, I grew up in the "Which exit?" state. I really enjoyed this story, Sasha!
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Aww, you're welcome, Sui! It was my pleasure! I loved this story and all the characters in it. Well, except for Jaesun and of course N-Sang. lol I'm so glad everything worked out in the end and love conquered all! Hmmm, too cliche, huh? But I am glad Jae and Dan found each other. Terrific story, Sui!
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I think Andy might be maturing yet. lol So he's tired of the orgies and just wants a steady b/f. Good for him. I think Thomas would make excellent boyfriend material, but I think Thomas would rather be Matt's b/f. At least Matt told him the truth and he was honest with him about his confusion. I wonder how the dynamic will change since Thomas knows Andy is interested in him. I really liked Coach's speech and the way Kealan (or was it Kealen?), spoke up and reamed Jackass a new ass. lol
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Hmmm, didn't realize Andy liked Thomas that way. I wonder if Matt will get jealous. And what a great coach the boys have! He's terrific! I hope the assholes like Jackass leave them alone now. Great chapter, Elias!
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I think you are so spot-on with the reactions of victims of rape. Of course each person is different and deals with things differently, but I have heard of many rape victims acting the same way Zune is. He tries to clean himself and clean the house - constantly trying to de-contaminate himself and his surroundings from the filth that was brought to his body. He's so far into his mind I'm afraid he won't be able to get out. I cannot wait until Daryl gets his due. Excellent chapter, Sacred!
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Loved this chapter, Val!!! Thank God that ass Trevor is no longer. Thank God Sean doesn't have brain damage. Just a terrific chapter and of course we have Penguin for cuteness, but also some comic relief with Robbie the Horn Toad. lol
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What a great surprise Luke had for Erin - skinny/Speedo-dipping in the pool! Great chapter, Sasha!
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Aww, they're going on their first date!!! I think Luke and Erin are so sweet together.
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I'm glad Michael will be at the trial. I know Asher will appreciate it even if he can't admit that to himself. Maybe then they can talk. Oh, I just thought of something: maybe Asher will get gay-bashed at the trial and Michael will stand up and defend his man! lol Oh, and when it was mentioned about the jury and Asher said it only takes one homophobe to cause a mistrial - I thought that the jury is selected, questioned, and approved by BOTH attorneys, so there should not be any homophobic people on the jury. Right?
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Oh Michael, you idiot! I just wanna smack him upside his stupid head! Love is more important than a job, right?! My heart is breaking for Asher. Ugh, on to the next chapter.
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CONGRATULATIONS COLE!!!!!! Wasn't this like the best birthday present ever??? Well, maybe equal to your fryer? lol
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Lol, and the best thing is your age still reads 48 on here!!!! I'm glad you had such a good day. You deserve it, Cole. =)
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I hope you had an awesome b-day, Cole! And you still have one hour and forty-five minutes to live it up! lol
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Lol, db used to LOVE, LOVE, LOVE Nina Simone! She did have a beautiful voice. Don't know if he still loves her...
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H A P P Y B I R T H D A Y 25 M I N U T E S E AR L Y!!!!! I hope you have a wonderful birthday, Cole!!!
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Jon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You don't know how excited I was to see this updated!!!!! I am SO glad you're back!!!! You were missed!!!! I was also thrilled that you have not lost the voice of Corbin. He is still the same guy we have all grown to love and want to smack upside the head at times! lol I think it's great that he wants to stick to his guns and not back down with this whole suspension hearing thing. But on the other hand, being suspended is a big thing. Would it hurt that much to give in? I think Melanie is playing the suits. She's crying in public places in order to have witnesses so everyone thinks she was wronged, but we saw her at the party; she's just a little freshman slut. lol I don't know what her angle is or why she's even doing this, but she's really screwing with Corbin and not in the good way. haha, ok, that was lame, lol Sorry. She's getting the higher-ups to feel pity for her when it seems like she's doing this all on purpose. I wonder why. Terrific chapter, as always Jon. Can't wait for the next one! Welcome back!!!!
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY ROB!! I hope you have an awesome day.
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Ahhh, they're so cute! Luke's lucky his friends didn't go nuts at the party. And as I read about the bodies all over the floors, and the beds, and taking keys, it brought back many memories of the past few years. I collected all the keys when my kids had parties but they didn't usually conk out until two in the morning! And then of course there was that time the cops came at 3AM...but we won't talk about that. lol On to the next chapter!
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Sasha!!!! I'm so excited you're writing this story again!!! I've had lots of chapters to catch up on. I'm looking forward to reading about the party. Hope the kids don't get all wild and crazy and make Luke's parents regret letting him throw one. I'll tell ya, they are brave just leaving the house to a bunch of teenagers and a keg of beer. lol It was so cute how the two boys were so nervous the day of the party. =)
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY MYR!!!!! I hope you have a great day!!!
