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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    I'm hooked, the action and the pacing were fantastic...need, no...want to know more!!!
  2. drsawzall

    In The End

    It's been called the most selfish act of all, and yet folks can't see the signs, to know when to step in and be that friend, offer a hand...Hopefully Jack recovers and gets the treatment he needs...
  3. In the land of the inadequate, the average man is king.... Is the cat out of the bag? Will students be lining up to be probed with a meat muscle? What will happen if the school's administration finds out? Will the rambunctious todger, aka the prodigious penis, become a weapon for the powers that be???
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Our dear boy needs lessons in discretion along with some oral training...
  5. drsawzall

    Prologue

    It will be interesting to see where this goes!!
  6. drsawzall

    Abducted

    Oh my....Grandma...just what have you done??? Who relaxed the outside security???
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 44

    Can't disagree with any of the comments!! What a great chapter!! As to fishing, I leave the hook off the line, if god wants me to have a fish, it will jump out of the water... Christian Peen®...my...my...my!!!!
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 41

    It is going to be a long 10 weeks... But if that was true, shouldn't he be helping Leo leave? “I-” He swallowed tightly, already regretting the words about to come out of his mouth. “I'll help you annul the bond if you want. I won't own you anymore, and you can be with whoever you want to be with.” “Uh huh.” He was hearing things. That had to be wrong. Jeisa was doing everything he could to help Leo, to make Leo feel better.
  9. Was that an obtuse hint....let me scroll thru the prompts....
  10. Not sure I could do it justice like @Lee Wilson....
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 13

    Something strikes me as odd with Marvin, I am still solidly #Team Dalian...
  12. Cleaning the fridge only happens when I notice the milk forming an alliance with the crisper drawer in reaction to the meat, backed up by some very hostile bacon, which wants to take out the crisper and veggie drawers. Meanwhile, the frozen food bides its time, patiently waiting....
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 23

    And Joel...you can play baseball... She and Trace both wanted me to let my guard down, and I hated that I hadn’t brought myself to do much of that. I hadn’t because I never felt like I could and when I did, even accidentally, the fallout told me I couldn’t. Now they were promising me that I could and that I could take a step back and breathe a little. That if I fucked things up this time, that I had them to step up and I knew they would. I couldn’t doubt them; I was living proof of all that. They no longer had to convince me, staring at the ceiling, I knew without a doubt where I stood. The only thing that kept getting in my way was me.
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 23

    Having been taught how to interact with Mr and Mrs Washing Machine and Dryer, after yelling to my mother, I had no clean clothes to wear, washing my handy rag was a snap!
  15. drsawzall

    Chapter 23

    Ya know, there are other ways of ensuring no mess is left behind...there's a step beyond finger lickin good!!!
  16. Very enjoyable...thanks!!
  17. There is truth in some old sayings, such as, 'Do unto others as you would have done to you'. Actions have consequences, no matter how large or small...
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  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Well done, a complete short story leaving one to see these folks again in the future!!
  19. Grainger is playing 3-D chess, where everyone else is playing checkers!!!
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    I had to look this up, if the news is correct Ben...yikes!!! “Because Reynolds is the gateway gay crush for straight dudes,” Kenzie explained patiently, like a scientist presenting her findings to a squirrel. “If your gay crush is Reynolds, you’re basically doing gay cosplay at a tailgate party.” “Then who am I supposed to like?!” Kenzie thought for a moment. “The Duolingo owl.” “The Duolingo owl. - Search If someone approaches you with a new jacket to try on...run!!!
  21. drsawzall

    Chapter 18

    I get the feeling that this won't be a one-off; there may be an awkward moment or two, but James is gonna want more!
  22. drsawzall

    Chapter 17

    Eddie and Brent best have eyes in the back of their heads... Brent shakes his head. “No. We’re not done. We just have to be smarter. If they’re playing games, we play harder.” Eddie doesn’t answer right away. He’s still watching the school. Watching for movement. For shadows. “Fine,” he says. “But next time, we make sure no one’s watching.”
  23. drsawzall

    Chapter 46

    I wonder just what is included on this "tour"... Kahiau asked if Erik was new to the Island. “Yes, I am,” Erik replied, taken aback by the man’s handsomeness. “We had a vacation here before. We just moved into our house.” “Well, if you like,” Kahiau offered smoothly, “I will gladly show you around the Island. Give you the real tour.” His grandfather perhaps...
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 23

    From Ch 19...called It!!! A red herring come to life!!! Posted November 7 Popular Comment The 64 thousand dollar question is, how did Jake, if in fact he's an escort, connect with Neil, answer an ad, respond to a online website? Both Micah and Killian have managed to piss off/ push some very important folks around, who aren't happy... Did Neil "find" Jake randomly? It's a stretch of a possibility... Lastly, how did Jake come by the photo of Neil, and what/where is the lock that that damned key opens???
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