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Tell me how much I love you
drsawzall commented on Johan's story chapter in Tell me how much I love you
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Well duh....just who wrote the story.....that would make Josh the mxcweoi jdfnefgmvg, followed by the sound of a body hitting the floor....
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Thanks for the chapter and the update! As Liam and Marc Adam discover, that any port in a storm, might not always be the best choice….
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Alls well that ends well….
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A hunger that won’t be satisfied anytime soon….
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The Ties of the Past and the Present
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in The Ties of the Past and the Present
The following gives me hope that Anduin and Claire just may have an accident with an 18-wheeler carrying hot asphalt to a road repaving job... Anduin, on the other hand, was very clearly wearing a frown as he came in at that moment and stepped over to beside Remy. "What is going on?" he muttered, nodding in the direction of the black boxes. "I don't know. I thought maybe Claire would tell you something beforehand." "Not really. How many times do I have to tell you that she and I aren't exactly a good team, anyway?" Remy shrugged and looked over at Claire. Mistress and slave might not be friends, but he'd seen the same, no-good glint in both pairs of eyes far too often by now. -
Today marks the first day of meteorological summer. Yesterday was the 12th consecutive rainy Saturday, a streak that began in mid-March. Somehow, I have been able to squeeze in some much-needed yard work...Mowing the lawns has been more like haying the lawns!!! There's only so much housework that can be done on rainy Saturdays, which means I can catch up on my GA reading list!!!
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More School, More Gavin, More Tevin
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More School, More Gavin, More Tevin
So true, but duct tape can make it quiet... Gavin...the stupider they are the harder they fall.... Kudos to Leon!!!- 29 comments
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Wow...wow...wow...so glad a rested reading this till I had time to sit down and quiet my thoughts... I would think by now that Jean Lundgren would have thought to work with Liberty Academy considering the following... “Jean Lundgren, DCFS. I’m here to collect Theodore Robertson. Which one is he?” Her no-nonsense gaze swept over the two boys sitting on opposite sides of the imposing conference table. “Well?” Neither boy answered, and Bobby eventually intervened. “Theo is the younger one, Mrs. Lundgren.” He couldn’t miss the look of betrayal he saw on Theo’s young face. “What kind of trouble are you in, Theodore?” Jean didn’t seem concerned by the boy’s obvious lack of legal counsel – only annoyed at the delay police questioning would cause in her already over-scheduled day. “Theo isn’t being charged with anything. He is helping the CPD with an ongoing investigation in which he has unique, first-hand knowledge.” Bobby noted the social worker’s dubious expression. “Well, in that case, Theodore and I will be leaving. Once he has been placed, you can make an appointment with his case manager or guards if you have any further questions.” Jean put out a hand that everyone ignored. “Guards?” It was Phil Morris who asked the question on everyone’s minds. “Emergency placements are difficult.” Jean shook her head theatrically. “Juvenile hall is about the only place that will take teenagers like Theodore on short notice, especially on a holiday.” She sounds like she is burnt out and truly of little use... Then there is the unbridled enthusiasm of both Emilio and Elio, who, it seems, have Thomas's magic touch around badly abused or wounded boys...This part of the chapter had me unabashedly reaching for the Kleenex....I can't wait to see what wonders they work next, hoping they get the brothers to connect... Then there is WSIII, aka the Turd; his thinking that he has the situation under control is going to be his downfall. This last sequence with him shows that his thinking has lost some elasticity and problem-solving ability. He's started digging a hole that will only get deeper... Next chapter quickly...PLEASE!!!!
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Let's hope Yale stays free of STD's....
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Not all that sure I can trust Thomas, Etienne's time with Prince Charles was known in the circles the Prince traveled...Here's hoping they make good on their escape...
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Get the man a frigging tongue so they can properly communicate....it's way past time....
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Well now....that's a fine kettle of fish called Matthew....not sure just what to think/feel about him now...
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I have to agree with this as well, I actually found it a bit disturbing as well....it was borderline non-consensual at the very least...Alan needs help....
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Then again...where were Gabe and Laura when Joey was murdered...Laura can be a very convincing actor.....
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It could have been @Gary L's Weiner schnitzel pups typing while he wasn't looking...
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When Rory starts drinking pickle juice and pistachio ice cream with peanut butter, I'll start to worry....
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The 64 thousand-dollar question is, what did Jake forget, or will he make a mess of the evening and come home early???
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Chapter 20 - Magic
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Magic
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Alan...get over your uptight self....admit you enjoyed your visit to the "dark" side....Cal, now that you have that brand new toy in your pants, be careful not to wear it out or overshare!!!
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Priorities Admiral, priorities....
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One wonders if the Central Foundation Boys' School is a boarding school or a day school?
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The beginning of this chapter reminded me of an old TV show, Are You Smarter Than A Fifth Grader, only we have third graders working here... The Crown of Red Herrings is strongly being considered for at least two likely suspects, which in and of itself is another colossal red herring. It is early days, and the author is seriously indicating that either Aiden or Catlin, whilst other worthwhile suspects remain lurking in the lily pond weeds. The man banging on the bedroom door, breaking up Joey's insemination seminar... The man jumping the fence, did he or was he banging Keiyara... Then there's the rock, and we all know rocks can't talk, but...DNA can sing a pretty impressive tune.... Joey's father, I would suspect his only reason would be money, either paying for college or a possible life insurance policy. Or it could have been accident as a result of a fight that night near the pool... Keyara's roommate, did Joey bang her also.... And I feel terrible about this, could it have been Joey's mother.... Aiden is up to something, he's moving all too fast... For someone needing hope and help, Catlin is not all that accepting of hope, help, and confirmation of the pregnancy... Someone has to tell Adam to start acting rationally... We've yet to see Miss Scarlet or Colonel Mustard appear....
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Here's hoping in this case the goblin isn't alone....
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Naked tea & LGBT history
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Naked tea & LGBT history
This chapter was a reminder of where we have come from and how much further we have to go...
